广东英语高考范文写作技巧
2008年广东英语高考范文写作技巧
作者：佚名文章源：转帖点击数：89更新时间：200913
基础写作： 写作指导
2008年基础写作命题切中社会热点——奥运具强烈时代感题目提供写作容排序已成逻辑需考生重新安排写作难点体现写作容组合方式词句选择中1904年中断1928年中断两条含相容信息意义表达张显考生思维力语言水考点考生应采取措施避免表达重复背景现状两方面容表达体现考生复合句功力
范文 Version I
Shooting originated as a means of survival developed into a sport only in the late 19th century The sport first appeared in 1896 but none were contested during the 1904 and 1928 games The sport returned to the Olympics in 1932 Women were first allowed to compete in the Olympic shooting in 1968 The sport has grown steadily from just three shooting events at the 1896 Olympics and now there are seventeen vents in all
Version 2
It was not until at the end of 19th century that shooting originated as a means of survival earned its status as a sport Shooting became an Olympic event officially in 1896 Yet twice in history (1904 1928) shooting was suspended at the Olympics It returned to the Games in 1932 and women were first allowed to participate in the competition in 1968 The sport has been growing steadily from 1896＇s three events to today＇s seventeen 务型写作： 写作指导
Preparing Myself for College Life题目贴考生生活引导材料清楚考生易跑题写作容弹性考生情发挥空间写作容符合考生思维水语言表达水整体难度
审题时易错点会部分考生造成影响首先文体方面题目求写份发言稿写作格式语气特定求次称方面应该写感受算非学生情况时态方面写作基调时态时现时时转移需考生扎实时态知识较语篇力
One Possible Version（参考范文）
Mike’s mother did almost everything for him when in high school which brought him a hard time adjusting to the firstyear college life However afterwards he got accustomed to it because of the academic atmosphere and colorful activities there
As for me what I do every day is to study hard to enter a famous university which is always the expectations of my parents and teachers So traveling among classroom dormitory and canteen is the routine work Seldom do I have the time to do some activities Anyway unlike you I have learned how to be independent in a boarding school which is beneficial to adjust to the college life
It seems to me the ideal college life is that I become matured both physically and mentally and that I obtain qualified academic knowledge and get well prepared for society at the same time
As we all knowcollege is wildly different from middle school It connects not only adolescence to adulthoodbut also the ivory tower to the real society So an active part in activitiesassociationsas well as some romances are three keys to achieving my ideal college life
(）掌握技巧：
（1）注意篇章结构合理布局
开始部分（opening paragraph）——说出文中点核心问题
正文部分（Body paragraphs）——围绕题开展叙述讨
结尾部分（concluding paragraphs）——全文总结概括
做全文中心突出段落间必须机联系容完整连贯前呼应祛题关容
（2）确定题句
题句全文概括文章旨文章中起画龙点睛作通常题句出现篇文章开头全文题句提出容进行解释扩展
写题句应注意点：
①纳出写文章点 ②提炼出句具概括性话 ③题句应具读性抓住吸引读者
（二）巧连接词 想文章整体性连贯性学会正确连接词
表示罗列增加
First second thirdFirst then next after that next finallyFor one thing for another Especially In particular
On (the) one handon the other handBesides what’s more in addition furthermore moreover another also
表示时间序
now at present recently after afterwards after that after a while in a few days at first in the beginning to begin with
later next finally immediately soon suddenly all of a sudden at that moment as soon as the moment from now on
from then on at the same time meanwhile till notuntil before after when while as during
表示解释说明
now in addition for example for instance in this case moreover furthermore in fact actually
表示转折关系
but however while though or otherwise on the contrary on the other hand in contrast despite in spi
te of even though except (for) instead of course after all
表示列关系
or and also too not only but also as well as both and either or neither nor
表示果关系
because because of since now that as thanks to due to therefore as a result (of) otherwise sothat suchthat
表示条件关系
as (so) long as on condition that if unless
表示步关系
though although as even if even though whether or however whoever whatever whichever wherever
whenever no matter how (who what which where when whom)
表示举例
for example for instance such as take for example
表示较
be similar to similarly the same as in contrast compared with (to)just like just as
表示目
for this reason for this purpose so that in order to so as to
表示强调
in deed in fact surely certainly no doubt without any doubt truly obviously above all
表示概括纳
in a word in short in brief on the whole generally speaking in my opinion as far as I know As we all
know as has been stated as I have shown finally at last in summary in conclusion
（三）掌握常句型：
1 in order to He worked very hard in order to realize his dream
2 in order thatShe worked hard in order that everything would be ready by 6 o’clock
3 sothatThey were all so tired that they could do nothing but yawn
4 suchthatIt was such a cold day that there was nobody on the street
5 would rather dothan do He would rather listen to others than talk himself
6 prefer doing to doing He prefers making speeches after careful preparation
7 prefer to dorather than doCompared with women men always prefer to sleep at home rather than spend so much time shopping
8 not onlybut alsoIn just three years she had not only finished all the lessons but also received h
er doctor’s degree
9 eitherorYou could either buy an MP3 or go to Yunnan for a visit if you pass the exam
10 Neithernor He is a boring man He likes neither entertainment nor reading
11 as well asHe was kind as well as helpful 12 as wellThe child is active and funny as well
13 Onethe other Have you seen two pens on the desk One is red the other is black
14 SomeothersEveryone is busy in classroom Some are reading others are writing
15 make+adj n What we do will make the world more beautiful
16 notuntil I didn’t know the truth until she told me what happened
17 as if He talks a lot as if he knows everything
18 It is no use (good) doingIt’s no use pretending that you didn’t know the rules
19 find it + adj to do I find it necessary to take down notes while listening
20 It is + time sinceIt is two years since I last met him
21 It is + time whenIt was 8 o’clock when I got to the cinema
22 It is + time beforeI won’t be long before we can meet again 23 It isthat It is friendship that I value most
24 It is + n adj + that to doIt is a must that everybody should know how to use computers
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2008年广东英语高考范文写作技巧
作者：佚名文章源：转帖点击数：89更新时间：200913
基础写作： 写作指导
2008年基础写作命题切中社会热点——奥运具强烈时代感题目提供写作容排序已成逻辑需考生重新安排写作难点体现写作容组合方式词句选择中1904年中断1928年中断两条含相容信息意义表达张显考生思维力语言水考点考生应采取措施避免表达重复背景现状两方面容表达体现考生复合句功力
范文 Version I
Shooting originated as a means of survival developed into a sport only in the late 19th century The sport first appeared in 1896 but none were contested during the 1904 and 1928 games The sport returned to the Olympics in 1932 Women were first allowed to compete in the Olympic shooting in 1968 The sport has grown steadily from just three shooting events at the 1896 Olympics and now there are seventeen vents in all
Version 2
It was not until at the end of 19th century that shooting originated as a means of survival earned its status as a sport Shooting became an Olympic event officially in 1896 Yet twice in history (1904 1928) shooting was suspended at the Olympics It returned to the Games in 1932 and women were first allowed to participate in the competition in 1968 The sport has been growing steadily from 1896＇s three events to today＇s seventeen 务型写作： 写作指导
Preparing Myself for College Life题目贴考生生活引导材料清楚考生易跑题写作容弹性考生情发挥空间写作容符合考生思维水语言表达水整体难度
审题时易错点会部分考生造成影响首先文体方面题目求写份发言稿写作格式语气特定求次称方面应该写感受算非学生情况时态方面写作基调时态时现时时转移需考生扎实时态知识较语篇力
One Possible Version（参考范文）
Mike’s mother did almost everything for him when in high school which brought him a hard time adjusting to the firstyear college life However afterwards he got accustomed to it because of the academic atmosphere and colorful activities there
As for me what I do every day is to study hard to enter a famous university which is always the expectations of my parents and teachers So traveling among classroom dormitory and canteen is the routine work Seldom do I have the time to do some activities Anyway unlike you I have learned how to be independent in a boarding school which is beneficial to adjust to the college life
It seems to me the ideal college life is that I become matured both physically and mentally and that I obtain qualified academic knowledge and get well prepared for society at the same time
As we all knowcollege is wildly different from middle school It connects not only adolescence to adulthoodbut also the ivory tower to the real society So an active part in activitiesassociationsas well as some romances are three keys to achieving my ideal college life
(）掌握技巧：
（1）注意篇章结构合理布局
开始部分（opening paragraph）——说出文中点核心问题
正文部分（Body paragraphs）——围绕题开展叙述讨
结尾部分（concluding paragraphs）——全文总结概括
做全文中心突出段落间必须机联系容完整连贯前呼应祛题关容
（2）确定题句
题句全文概括文章旨文章中起画龙点睛作通常题句出现篇文章开头全文题句提出容进行解释扩展
写题句应注意点：
①纳出写文章点 ②提炼出句具概括性话 ③题句应具读性抓住吸引读者
（二）巧连接词 想文章整体性连贯性学会正确连接词
表示罗列增加
First second thirdFirst then next after that next finallyFor one thing for another Especially In particular
On (the) one handon the other handBesides what’s more in addition furthermore moreover another also
表示时间序
now at present recently after afterwards after that after a while in a few days at first in the beginning to begin with
later next finally immediately soon suddenly all of a sudden at that moment as soon as the moment from now on
from then on at the same time meanwhile till notuntil before after when while as during
表示解释说明
now in addition for example for instance in this case moreover furthermore in fact actually
表示转折关系
but however while though or otherwise on the contrary on the other hand in contrast despite in spi
te of even though except (for) instead of course after all
表示列关系
or and also too not only but also as well as both and either or neither nor
表示果关系
because because of since now that as thanks to due to therefore as a result (of) otherwise sothat suchthat
表示条件关系
as (so) long as on condition that if unless
表示步关系
though although as even if even though whether or however whoever whatever whichever wherever
whenever no matter how (who what which where when whom)
表示举例
for example for instance such as take for example
表示较
be similar to similarly the same as in contrast compared with (to)just like just as
表示目
for this reason for this purpose so that in order to so as to
表示强调
in deed in fact surely certainly no doubt without any doubt truly obviously above all
表示概括纳
in a word in short in brief on the whole generally speaking in my opinion as far as I know As we all
know as has been stated as I have shown finally at last in summary in conclusion
（三）掌握常句型：
1 in order to He worked very hard in order to realize his dream
2 in order thatShe worked hard in order that everything would be ready by 6 o’clock
3 sothatThey were all so tired that they could do nothing but yawn
4 suchthatIt was such a cold day that there was nobody on the street
5 would rather dothan do He would rather listen to others than talk himself
6 prefer doing to doing He prefers making speeches after careful preparation
7 prefer to dorather than doCompared with women men always prefer to sleep at home rather than spend so much time shopping
8 not onlybut alsoIn just three years she had not only finished all the lessons but also received h
er doctor’s degree
9 eitherorYou could either buy an MP3 or go to Yunnan for a visit if you pass the exam
10 Neithernor He is a boring man He likes neither entertainment nor reading
11 as well asHe was kind as well as helpful 12 as wellThe child is active and funny as well
13 Onethe other Have you seen two pens on the desk One is red the other is black
14 SomeothersEveryone is busy in classroom Some are reading others are writing
15 make+adj n What we do will make the world more beautiful
16 notuntil I didn’t know the truth until she told me what happened
17 as if He talks a lot as if he knows everything
18 It is no use (good) doingIt’s no use pretending that you didn’t know the rules
19 find it + adj to do I find it necessary to take down notes while listening
20 It is + time sinceIt is two years since I last met him
21 It is + time whenIt was 8 o’clock when I got to the cinema
22 It is + time beforeI won’t be long before we can meet again 23 It isthat It is friendship that I value most
24 It is + n adj + that to doIt is a must that everybody should know how to use computers
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