.Write at least 60 words about the topic ________left me a new impression(请________留新印象题写篇少 60 词短文标点符号占格)身边熟悉学朋友老师……天某件事()改变原法请补全标题结合事例谈谈()留新印象(注意:文中出现考生姓名校名相关信息否予评分)
二.Write at least 60 words on the topic Happiness doesn't always disappear during difficult times(困难时期幸福感定会消失题写篇少60词短文标点符号占格)
团队城市国家会困难时期便困难时期感受生活中喜悦感受幸福温馨片刻请结合历说说困难时期幸福感
(注意:短文中出现名校名相关信息否予计分)
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三.Write at least 60 words on the given situation(根情境写篇少 60 词短文 标点符号占格)
法国蜘蛛阿兰罗伯特历告诉 战胜恐惧种勇敢勇敢理解呢?请The time I was brave(次勇敢) 题根身历谈谈勇敢理解
(注意: 1短文中出现考生姓名校名等信息否予评分2抄阅读语篇分)
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四.Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic Life in 2050(请 2050 年生活题写篇少60词短文标点符号占格)
提示:2050年生活会什样?请选择图中(拟)1~2方面展开描述
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五.Write at least 60 words about the topic My opinion on remote lessons (请远程课堂法题写篇少60词短文标点符号占格)
疫情期间开启种全新学模式——远程课堂(remote lessons)期间学?请结合身历谈谈远程课堂法
注意:文中出现考生姓名校名相关信息否予评分
The following is for reference only (表达仅供参考)
•because of the virus
•manage time
•selfcontrol
•effective
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六.Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic The first time I (第次……题写篇少 60 词短文标点符号占格)
求:
1 补全作文标题
2 短文中出现考生姓名校名相关信息否予评分
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范文解析
.范文:
The teacher left me a new impression
Once I was not interested in English That was Miss Wang who changed me
One day our teacher told us we would have an English speech competition two months later Everyone was happy except me because I couldn't dare to speak English in public My English teacher came with a smile and encouraged me From then on I practiced every day The day came I got the first prize at last From Miss Wang I know that if you decide to do something and put your heart into it you will succeed The teacher left me a new impression
1题干解读:该题目属记叙文写作写作时首先补全标题根汉语提示叙述某件事()改变原法留新印象
2写作指导:文应该第三称叙述事容时态采般时描述事时力求描写细致事发生背景起等叙述完整保证条例清晰
二.范文
Happiness doesn't always disappear during difficult times
Everyone may have difficult times Even in difficult times people can still feel the small joys in life
One day it was raining hard when I was on my way home from school I didn’t take an umbrella so I was wet Suddenly a stranger came toward me He passed me an umbrella and said he could drive me home I didn’t know him but I was very thankful he helped me Although the weather was cold I felt very warm in my heart
题干解读:篇作文求学生Happiness doesn't always disappear during difficult times困难时期幸福感定会消失题写篇少60词短文题目中没规定具体写作容学生应发挥想象力结合实际生活写篇切题文章难点学生选取生活中事例应合情合理
写作指导:审题知篇短文应般时态第称叙述注意谓语动词正确形式写作时应注意英语句式结构表达惯写完整句子简单句结构基础穿插列句复合句非谓语结构等复杂句式提升作文档次时注意文衔接文意连贯表达流畅
三.范文:
The time I was brave
In our daily life we have various fears preventing us from moving forward And overcoming the fears helps us become more confident
I used to be afraid of speaking in public I never dared to step up and speak in front of a crowd Then in Grade 9 a speech contest was held in my school With my teacher's encouragement I entered for it and made full preparations for it Luckily I finished it smoothly To my surprise I won the second prize This time I was brave Now I have become more and more confident in expressing myself in public
Don't let the fear take you Just step forward and you will find you can do it
1题干解读:该题目属记叙文写作写作时根汉语提示首先叙述身历然根历谈谈勇敢理解
2写作指导:文应该第称叙述身历时态采般时叙述历般现时现完成时叙述成长勇敢理解描述历时力求语言准确叙事完整行文连贯保证条理清晰
四.范文
Life in 2050
Life has changed a lot in 2050 The environment will be better and better The air is fresher and the water is clearer In 2050 people will no longer eat traditional food People will eat a special kind of food in order to stay full for a long time Science and technology will be highly developed and robots will take the place of human beings Flying machines will replace today's cars People won't have to go to school to study They will study at home through computers
1题干解读:文章求2050年生活影响时态应般时态称应第三称\第称
2写作指导:例文先句话点题然分开介绍环境食物科技交通学情况语言流畅语法错误
五.范文
My opinion on remote lessons
Because of the virus I have taken online courses for over 6 weeks By communicating with teachers on the online communication platform I can also solve the problems in the new knowledge in time It is important for me to keep learning every day Remote lessons can provide us with a good opportunity to learn
Remote lessons have many advantages over the traditional classes However remote lessons also has some disadvantages For example staring at the screen for a long time is very harmful to students’ eyes And we students need selfcontrol Then we can finish learning effectively
题目解读:文篇话题作文求写出远程课堂影响结合身历谈文章注意谈观点法时需观点明确见解
例文点评:文分成两顿第段介绍六月远程课堂历学第二段介绍作者认远程课堂优缺点观点明确行文流畅句型样
高分亮点:
短语:solve the problemsfor a long timebe harmful tofinish doing
句型:it作形式语It is important for me to keep learning every day现完成时应Because of the virus I have taken online courses for over 6 weeks
六
The first time I succeeded in cooking
When I was very young I liked to watch my mother cook I always found it amazing when colorful dishes appeared on the table So I begged my mother to teach me to cook Though I started with some simple dishes it wasn't so easy as I had imagined But I kept practicing Then one day in the holiday I decided to make lunch without my mother's help I tried two of the dishes I had learnt To my surprise I made it At that moment I was proud of myself
1题干解读:该题目属记叙文写作写作时应注意首先补全作文题目然围绕题目写作
2例文点评:例文采段式第称叙述容时态采般时叙述清晰行文连贯
3高分亮点:
短语:like to doon the tablebeg sb to do sthteach sb to do sthstart withso…askeep doing sthdecide to do sthto one’s surprise
语法:when引导时间状语句列连词sobut运though引导步状语句频度副词always运定语句运
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