In the park
It is sunny today My mother my father and I are going to the park We like the park very much It is very big and beautiful There are many trees and flowers in it Many people like to go there Look An old man is sitting on the chair He is reading a book carefully Two boys are jumping on the ground Their mothers are talking with each other Two birds are flying in the sky The ducks are swimming in the river They are very happy What is the cat doing Oh it is running after a mouse It’s a poor mouse
领点评
写法：篇作现进行时描绘出公园里动物正进行活动运般现时叙述公园美丽景色
时态：篇文章采般现时现进行时两种时态单元语法项目现进行时描述重点放现进行时态
句型：般现时：语+谓语+
现进行时：（1）What +be (amis are)+语+ving+
（2）语+be(amis are)+ ving+
Last Weekend
I had a happy weekend last week
On Saturday morning I watched TV and helped my mother wash clothes In the afternoon I cleaned three bedrooms in my house mine my parents’ and my brother’s
On Sunday I played football in the park Then I went to my grandparents’ house Grandpa played the piano The whole family was so happy Later we wanted to swim But it was too cold
This was last weekend
This is my classroom it is very nice I like my classroom very much Do you have a nice classroom too
Let’s have a nice day
It’s Sunday tomorrow I’m going to the bookstore with my friends tomorrow morning We are going to look for some good books We all like reading books We are going to eat our lunch at the restaurant I like chicken beef and vegetables After lunch we are going to the Summer Palace by bus We are going to play near the Kunming Lake Maybe we are going to row a boat on the lake Wow that will be relaxing We are coming back at 5pm
领点评
样称美天？两点忘记安排充实二安排意义两点作者疑想午书店书买书中午饭店吃饭午颐园玩耍划船丰富彩文章时间线索叙述清楚文笔优美
朋友写种叙事文章时量读者交代时间点物活动等文章血肉写发生事情现正做事情计划算做事情选择适句型果写事情注意表述时be going to+动词原形种句型点重事线索交代读者阅读时整程目然
根出材料写写Mike周末活动计划
Saturday
Sunday
read a magazine
go to the zoo
Buy a book
Learn kongfu
watch TV
Mike is a student He is my good friend He is busy at the weekend He is going to read a magazine this Saturday morning He is going to go to the zoo this Saturday afternoon He is going to buy a book this Sunday morning He is going to learn Kungfu this Sunday afternoon He is going to watch TV this Sunday evening
My Birthday Party
Every year when it’s birthday my parents hold a party for me They invite my friend to come to my house to celebrate my birthday I can get many beautiful gifts every year
In my party we can do many things
1 Light the candles
2 Sing a Happy Birthday song
3 Make a wish
4 Blow out the candles
5 Cut off the cake
6 Eat the cake
7 Open the presents
8 Sing and dance
9 Watch videos or play other games
10 Say goodbye with each other
That’s my birthday party is it interesting
领点评
写法：篇作活动序写记叙生日晚会项具体活动较全面较前单元写作写法短文活动序较合适
时态：篇短文三种时态写：
1般时：说明生日晚会份项计划进行
2般现时：说明惯度生日
3般时：说明生日晚会进行
句型：invite sb to do sth 邀请某做某事
注意：篇短文局限性表达体基相书写时候注意结合实际活动真情实感写外注意短语单词书写发生错误：
eg吹蜡烛写成blow out the candles写成blow candles
My Days of the week
I’m a student and I am in Grade 5I get up at six o’clock every day I have breakfast at half past six and go to school at seven o’clock I have classes from Monday to Saturday I have an English class on Friday and I have a PE class on Tuesday I don’t have to go to school on school and I like to go swimming on that day
领点评
篇作文题目周作者没说空话亲身历写起叙述周七天作特强调星期天喜写然流畅
朋友写作文时注意称谓语动词变化提示结合实际写身边熟悉事情
MY HAPPY WEEKEND
OK let me tell you something about my weekend
I am going to do many things and be very busy on the weekend So I do my homework on Saturday morning In the afternoon I am going to do housework with my mother Because I am a good girl I am helpful at home On Sunday morning I am going to visit my grandparents with my parents In the afternoon we are going to the park together Because there is a kite show And my grandparents likes making kites I think we can see many beautiful kites there And we are going to buy some beautiful kites too Then we are going to fly the new kites that’s fun In the evening we are going to have a big dinner We are going to have fish for dinner Because my grandparents likes eating fish And my grandma cooks fish well After dinner we are going to watch TV together We are going to be very happy
This is my happy weekend I like my weekend very much What about your weekend Can you tell me
My holiday
My holiday was good I stayed at home for sometime I went to Tianyi Square and bought same games But one day my monther my younger brother and I went to Tianyi digital square to buy games And I bought a new uniform in the evening I＇d like to have a glass of apple juice my monther bought it for me I says Thanks a lot I bought some shoes I want a pair of sports shoes In the shop the wonderful song added tour pleasure I see the black shoes my monther says There are beautiful
My weekend
There are two days on the weekend Saturday and Sunday On Saturday I often go to my dancing class in the morning and do my homework in the afternoon and I often help my mother do some cleaning On Sunday I always visit my grandparents in the morning and do some reading in the afternoon After dinner I often watch TV with my parents At that time we can talk with each other and say something happily We often have a good time
领点评
写法：篇作时间序记叙周末活动记叙周六周日午午分做活动活动感受：周六午：舞蹈课→午：做作业帮妈妈做清洁→周日午：祖父母→午：阅读→晚：电视父母交流→感受：高兴愉快选取周六周日中较活动写先说明什时间什方什做什事什感受活动序活动容写清楚抒发次活动周末感想
时态：篇短文三种时态写 a般时（描述周末样度）b般现时（描述常样度周末）c般时（描述样周末）里表述时周末采般现时写
注意：活动相关表达方法采旧知识eg（例）起床get up新知识eg Climb mountains爬山中un容易错写成nu注意出现病句eg I often watch TV with my parents写成 I often with my parents watch TV 词量控制50 ~ 80 间
My winter holiday
Winter holiday is coming I am so excited
In this winter holiday I am going to take a trip with my parents by planeWe are going to Beijing Then I am going to go ice skating there I am going to see the snow I will play with the snow I am going to make a snowman with my sister Then we are going to visit the Great wall At last we are going to go back home by plane
That will be fun in the winter holiday I can’t wait
寒假快请寒假写计划快点计划写出吧
My Winter Holiday
It’s January My winter holiday is coming I am going to go to Thailand I will go there by plane I like the food in Thailand It’s spicy and tasty In the winter holiday I am going to play basketball I am going to paint pictures too I will help my mother do some housework I will be very happy in my winter holiday
Tom’s Holiday
Tom went to Beijing by plane on his holiday Every day he had fun with his parents They went to the Nature Park They saw elephants They went swimming They ate lots of delicious food They also took many beautiful pictures They will come back home tomorrow In a word they enjoy their holiday
领点评
写法：篇作点序记叙假期里活动记叙假期里北京做活动活动感受
时态：篇文章采两种时态写单元讲述般时法里部分采般时较合适
句型：语+动词式+……
语+will+动词原形+……
注意：活动相关表达法采旧知识新知识相结合写注意动词式变化规例：eat 式ate规变化
During the National Day my parents took me to the Beidai River It was my first time to see the sea[中国^@教*育出#版网]
The blue waves beat on the rocks along the seashore and turned into spray（浪花） I couldn′t tell the sea from the sky because they were so far away from us When we sat on the seashore the waves came and stroked（轻抚） our bodies Then my father and I swam in the sea together but my mother couldn′t swim at all She stood there and watched us swimming Suddenly a hilllike wave（股山般海浪） came over us And I swallowed（吞） a mouthful（满口） of sea water It was salty and bitter（苦） but I was glad to taste real sea water for the first time[^&源中教网@~]
Now I often think of the sea How lovely the sea is I hope I can go there again
作点评
作者写北戴河游玩趣历通细节描写展现海洋特点：变幻穷充满险境正痴迷海洋方
写作练兵场[中&国教育*出#@版网]
请A travelling for sealakeriver题写篇关游玩江河湖海历英语作文求：50词左右
The vacation
写篇关旅行作文
Have a trip
I travelled to Hainan island this summer holiday[~源中国教*@育出#版网]
It was so beautiful there The blue sea was around us
It′s very wide and very nice The coconut milk was delicious I liked it so much I also liked to swim there I was happy and I looked like a fish
I will also come here for another trip the next summer holiday because it is a nice place with a beautiful scenery and deliciouss food
词汇：
swim summer holiday（暑假） delicious（美味）[源zzst#~e@p^&com]
作点评：[源~@中国^#教育出版网]
文章描绘海南岛风景美食愉快心情愧篇美文
佳作赏析：[中国教育出版^&@网*#]
A visit to Beijing
This summer vacation I went to Beijing It was a very great city
We went to the Great Wall first Like its name it was very great We could see many mountains around and many foreigners
Then we went to visit Tian＇anmen Square It was also fantastic There were so many people on the square some were flying kites some were taking photos
We lived in a small house in Beijing It was a traditional Beijing building called FourSection Compound
I enjoyed myself a lot during the summer vacation in Beijing It was a great memory
作文点评：
篇作文详细叙述北京游玩全程先北京the Great WallTian＇anmen Square描述FourSection Compound读者带进场快乐北京旅途充满趣味
Visiting the Museum
It was fine for traveling last Sunday I showed Ann round the museum she was surprised to see many old things and she was interested in the King’s hat She wanted to buy one I told her it wasn ’t real Ann kept asking me some other things
When she saw a thing with three legs and a strange top she stopped to point at in and asked me What is that It is a cup I told her
Zoom’s Weekend
Zoom had a busy weekend On Saturday morning he washed his clothes and went to a park He did his homework and went fishing on Saturday afternoon On Sunday morning he cleaned his room and visited his grandparents He played football and watch TV on Sunday afternoon Zoom was too tired
领点评
写法：篇作时间序记叙Zoom周末活动
时态：篇文章三种时态写单元讲般时态采般时态较合适
句型：语+动词式+时间
注意：活动相关表达法采新旧知识结合方法注意动词式拼写
假期
I’m going to the sun on my holiday I will go there by a spaceship I will take a big blue spaceship
Then I’ll pilot the spaceship to the sun The sun is very hot So I put on the supershirt In the morning I will have some sun burger for my breakfast
At eight o’clock I will play with my friends there They are super dog and super girl Super dog is white and black Super girl is very clever Super girl and super dog like to play with me So I play with them for forty minutes Then I do my homework in my little red room on a small blue table After my home work I will have my lunch I will eat sun salad I will make some red toy bear to the sun babies I will have red juice red fish and red rice All the things are red Then I need a lot of water on the sun because the sun is too hot So I will walk to the spaceship I’ll pilot the spaceship to the earth
This is a good holiday on the sun
I was happy that day because I went to Tianyi Square and had a lot of fum
A Bad Cold
I’m not feeling well today I think I have a bad cold I have a headache I have a fever My nose hurts My throat is sore I have to take some medicine and stay in bed My parents will take me to the hospital What a bad cold
I hope I can be better soon And I want to go to school
领点评
写法：篇作时间序记叙病病症状服药治疗全程写出作者希快点康复学愿
时态：篇文章采般现时写果语第三称单数动词忘加s
句型：feel 加形容词表示患某种疾病法have+表示疾病单词
注意：表示疾病时achehurt sore单词避免枯燥写出病简单治疗心情写病情况常见病句：My nose is hurtbe面加形容词hurt动词应sore东西放床on the bed生病卧床起应该说stay in bed
表示吃药时通take some medicineeat
词汇量控制40~60间
A Farewell Party
It’s the end of the school year The students in Class There have a farewell party They invite their parents to the party Many students have performance at the party
Look Chen Jie is singing songs Zhang Peng is playing the piano Sarah is playing the erhu Mike is doing Chinese Kung fu What is Miss White doing She is dancing
Everybody has a lot of fun But Liu Yun isn’t here She has a cold She is at home The classmates are going to visit her after party They prepare many gifts fot her And they will take a picture together
领点评
写法：篇作记叙告晚会记叙学年末告晚会家表演什节目晚会家刘芸事
时态：篇作采三种时态写单元出现时态般时现进行时里般现时现进行时般时写
句型：般现时：语+动词原形+
现进行时：语+现分词+
般时：语+ be going to will +动词原形+
注意：篇文章中涉时态较注意时态变化学生表演什节目现进行时做什时外注意般现时肯定句中语第三称单数谓语动词第三称单数
A Field Trip
It is a nice day Our class will have a field trip today The classmates are very excited
Look Here we are There’re a lot of activities to do Amy is watching insects Peter is collecting leaves They want to write a report Mandy is catching butterflies in the woods Tim and Bob are playing chess Some of the classmates are having a picnic There is a lot of delicious food to eat Oh who’s that over there It’s Miss White What is she doing She is taking photos We had a very good time I’ll never forget this field trip
领点评
写法：篇作郊游时画面描述记叙学分郊游中做活动郊游感受
时态：篇文章般时现进行时写单元讲现进行时里采现进行时较合适
句型：×× isare doing sth She He is doing sth They’re doing sth
注意：活动相关表述法采新旧知识相结合写注意时态转换描写感受时般现时
图写作文
题目：A Happy Day in Spring
提示：图Mr Black 家春天某天野外游玩场景请般现时描写图中呈现出容作适想象发挥
求： B条理清晰意思明确连贯句子通标点正确书写工整规范
少70单词
A Happy Day in Spring
It’s spring It’s sunny and cloudy today There are many big trees in the park Mr Black’s family has a picnic in a park They bring much food there They bring fruit drink and bread Mr Black and Mrs Black talk with each other They talk very happily Ann reads a magazine Tom likes flying a kite The kite flies very well They are hungry now They want to eat their food They are very happy
Birthday
My birthday is on Sunday My parents are going to have a birthday party at home I invite my friends to come to the party
At the party They give me many small presents Such as cards picture books pens
They sing Happy Birthday to me My mother makes a big cake for me I cut the cake into small pieces and give them out we sing and dance
We have a good time at the party
Happy day
Today I＇m very happyafter I have breakfastI go to park
It＇s a sunny day the bird is singingI＇m singing tooWhen I get to parkI see some girls are playing games so I join themWe play very happyThen I have lunch with my friendsWe both have a good timewhat a happy day
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It is sunny today My mother my father and I are going to the park We like the park very much It is very big and beautiful There are many trees and flowers in it Many people like to go there Look An old man is sitting on the chair He is reading a book carefully Two boys are jumping on the ground Their mothers are talking with each other Two birds are flying in the sky The ducks are swimming in the river They are very happy What is the cat doing Oh it is running after a mouse It’s a poor mouse
领点评
写法：篇作现进行时描绘出公园里动物正进行活动运般现时叙述公园美丽景色
时态：篇文章采般现时现进行时两种时态单元语法项目现进行时描述重点放现进行时态
句型：般现时：语+谓语+
现进行时：（1）What +be (amis are)+语+ving+
（2）语+be(amis are)+ ving+
Last Weekend
I had a happy weekend last week
On Saturday morning I watched TV and helped my mother wash clothes In the afternoon I cleaned three bedrooms in my house mine my parents’ and my brother’s
On Sunday I played football in the park Then I went to my grandparents’ house Grandpa played the piano The whole family was so happy Later we wanted to swim But it was too cold
This was last weekend
This is my classroom it is very nice I like my classroom very much Do you have a nice classroom too
Let’s have a nice day
It’s Sunday tomorrow I’m going to the bookstore with my friends tomorrow morning We are going to look for some good books We all like reading books We are going to eat our lunch at the restaurant I like chicken beef and vegetables After lunch we are going to the Summer Palace by bus We are going to play near the Kunming Lake Maybe we are going to row a boat on the lake Wow that will be relaxing We are coming back at 5pm
领点评
样称美天？两点忘记安排充实二安排意义两点作者疑想午书店书买书中午饭店吃饭午颐园玩耍划船丰富彩文章时间线索叙述清楚文笔优美
朋友写种叙事文章时量读者交代时间点物活动等文章血肉写发生事情现正做事情计划算做事情选择适句型果写事情注意表述时be going to+动词原形种句型点重事线索交代读者阅读时整程目然
根出材料写写Mike周末活动计划
Saturday
Sunday
read a magazine
go to the zoo
Buy a book
Learn kongfu
watch TV
Mike is a student He is my good friend He is busy at the weekend He is going to read a magazine this Saturday morning He is going to go to the zoo this Saturday afternoon He is going to buy a book this Sunday morning He is going to learn Kungfu this Sunday afternoon He is going to watch TV this Sunday evening
My Birthday Party
Every year when it’s birthday my parents hold a party for me They invite my friend to come to my house to celebrate my birthday I can get many beautiful gifts every year
In my party we can do many things
1 Light the candles
2 Sing a Happy Birthday song
3 Make a wish
4 Blow out the candles
5 Cut off the cake
6 Eat the cake
7 Open the presents
8 Sing and dance
9 Watch videos or play other games
10 Say goodbye with each other
That’s my birthday party is it interesting
领点评
写法：篇作活动序写记叙生日晚会项具体活动较全面较前单元写作写法短文活动序较合适
时态：篇短文三种时态写：
1般时：说明生日晚会份项计划进行
2般现时：说明惯度生日
3般时：说明生日晚会进行
句型：invite sb to do sth 邀请某做某事
注意：篇短文局限性表达体基相书写时候注意结合实际活动真情实感写外注意短语单词书写发生错误：
eg吹蜡烛写成blow out the candles写成blow candles
My Days of the week
I’m a student and I am in Grade 5I get up at six o’clock every day I have breakfast at half past six and go to school at seven o’clock I have classes from Monday to Saturday I have an English class on Friday and I have a PE class on Tuesday I don’t have to go to school on school and I like to go swimming on that day
领点评
篇作文题目周作者没说空话亲身历写起叙述周七天作特强调星期天喜写然流畅
朋友写作文时注意称谓语动词变化提示结合实际写身边熟悉事情
MY HAPPY WEEKEND
OK let me tell you something about my weekend
I am going to do many things and be very busy on the weekend So I do my homework on Saturday morning In the afternoon I am going to do housework with my mother Because I am a good girl I am helpful at home On Sunday morning I am going to visit my grandparents with my parents In the afternoon we are going to the park together Because there is a kite show And my grandparents likes making kites I think we can see many beautiful kites there And we are going to buy some beautiful kites too Then we are going to fly the new kites that’s fun In the evening we are going to have a big dinner We are going to have fish for dinner Because my grandparents likes eating fish And my grandma cooks fish well After dinner we are going to watch TV together We are going to be very happy
This is my happy weekend I like my weekend very much What about your weekend Can you tell me
My holiday
My holiday was good I stayed at home for sometime I went to Tianyi Square and bought same games But one day my monther my younger brother and I went to Tianyi digital square to buy games And I bought a new uniform in the evening I＇d like to have a glass of apple juice my monther bought it for me I says Thanks a lot I bought some shoes I want a pair of sports shoes In the shop the wonderful song added tour pleasure I see the black shoes my monther says There are beautiful
My weekend
There are two days on the weekend Saturday and Sunday On Saturday I often go to my dancing class in the morning and do my homework in the afternoon and I often help my mother do some cleaning On Sunday I always visit my grandparents in the morning and do some reading in the afternoon After dinner I often watch TV with my parents At that time we can talk with each other and say something happily We often have a good time
领点评
写法：篇作时间序记叙周末活动记叙周六周日午午分做活动活动感受：周六午：舞蹈课→午：做作业帮妈妈做清洁→周日午：祖父母→午：阅读→晚：电视父母交流→感受：高兴愉快选取周六周日中较活动写先说明什时间什方什做什事什感受活动序活动容写清楚抒发次活动周末感想
时态：篇短文三种时态写 a般时（描述周末样度）b般现时（描述常样度周末）c般时（描述样周末）里表述时周末采般现时写
注意：活动相关表达方法采旧知识eg（例）起床get up新知识eg Climb mountains爬山中un容易错写成nu注意出现病句eg I often watch TV with my parents写成 I often with my parents watch TV 词量控制50 ~ 80 间
My winter holiday
Winter holiday is coming I am so excited
In this winter holiday I am going to take a trip with my parents by planeWe are going to Beijing Then I am going to go ice skating there I am going to see the snow I will play with the snow I am going to make a snowman with my sister Then we are going to visit the Great wall At last we are going to go back home by plane
That will be fun in the winter holiday I can’t wait
寒假快请寒假写计划快点计划写出吧
My Winter Holiday
It’s January My winter holiday is coming I am going to go to Thailand I will go there by plane I like the food in Thailand It’s spicy and tasty In the winter holiday I am going to play basketball I am going to paint pictures too I will help my mother do some housework I will be very happy in my winter holiday
Tom’s Holiday
Tom went to Beijing by plane on his holiday Every day he had fun with his parents They went to the Nature Park They saw elephants They went swimming They ate lots of delicious food They also took many beautiful pictures They will come back home tomorrow In a word they enjoy their holiday
领点评
写法：篇作点序记叙假期里活动记叙假期里北京做活动活动感受
时态：篇文章采两种时态写单元讲述般时法里部分采般时较合适
句型：语+动词式+……
语+will+动词原形+……
注意：活动相关表达法采旧知识新知识相结合写注意动词式变化规例：eat 式ate规变化
During the National Day my parents took me to the Beidai River It was my first time to see the sea[中国^@教*育出#版网]
The blue waves beat on the rocks along the seashore and turned into spray（浪花） I couldn′t tell the sea from the sky because they were so far away from us When we sat on the seashore the waves came and stroked（轻抚） our bodies Then my father and I swam in the sea together but my mother couldn′t swim at all She stood there and watched us swimming Suddenly a hilllike wave（股山般海浪） came over us And I swallowed（吞） a mouthful（满口） of sea water It was salty and bitter（苦） but I was glad to taste real sea water for the first time[^&源中教网@~]
Now I often think of the sea How lovely the sea is I hope I can go there again
作点评
作者写北戴河游玩趣历通细节描写展现海洋特点：变幻穷充满险境正痴迷海洋方
写作练兵场[中&国教育*出#@版网]
请A travelling for sealakeriver题写篇关游玩江河湖海历英语作文求：50词左右
The vacation
写篇关旅行作文
Have a trip
I travelled to Hainan island this summer holiday[~源中国教*@育出#版网]
It was so beautiful there The blue sea was around us
It′s very wide and very nice The coconut milk was delicious I liked it so much I also liked to swim there I was happy and I looked like a fish
I will also come here for another trip the next summer holiday because it is a nice place with a beautiful scenery and deliciouss food
词汇：
swim summer holiday（暑假） delicious（美味）[源zzst#~e@p^&com]
作点评：[源~@中国^#教育出版网]
文章描绘海南岛风景美食愉快心情愧篇美文
佳作赏析：[中国教育出版^&@网*#]
A visit to Beijing
This summer vacation I went to Beijing It was a very great city
We went to the Great Wall first Like its name it was very great We could see many mountains around and many foreigners
Then we went to visit Tian＇anmen Square It was also fantastic There were so many people on the square some were flying kites some were taking photos
We lived in a small house in Beijing It was a traditional Beijing building called FourSection Compound
I enjoyed myself a lot during the summer vacation in Beijing It was a great memory
作文点评：
篇作文详细叙述北京游玩全程先北京the Great WallTian＇anmen Square描述FourSection Compound读者带进场快乐北京旅途充满趣味
Visiting the Museum
It was fine for traveling last Sunday I showed Ann round the museum she was surprised to see many old things and she was interested in the King’s hat She wanted to buy one I told her it wasn ’t real Ann kept asking me some other things
When she saw a thing with three legs and a strange top she stopped to point at in and asked me What is that It is a cup I told her
Zoom’s Weekend
Zoom had a busy weekend On Saturday morning he washed his clothes and went to a park He did his homework and went fishing on Saturday afternoon On Sunday morning he cleaned his room and visited his grandparents He played football and watch TV on Sunday afternoon Zoom was too tired
领点评
写法：篇作时间序记叙Zoom周末活动
时态：篇文章三种时态写单元讲般时态采般时态较合适
句型：语+动词式+时间
注意：活动相关表达法采新旧知识结合方法注意动词式拼写
假期
I’m going to the sun on my holiday I will go there by a spaceship I will take a big blue spaceship
Then I’ll pilot the spaceship to the sun The sun is very hot So I put on the supershirt In the morning I will have some sun burger for my breakfast
At eight o’clock I will play with my friends there They are super dog and super girl Super dog is white and black Super girl is very clever Super girl and super dog like to play with me So I play with them for forty minutes Then I do my homework in my little red room on a small blue table After my home work I will have my lunch I will eat sun salad I will make some red toy bear to the sun babies I will have red juice red fish and red rice All the things are red Then I need a lot of water on the sun because the sun is too hot So I will walk to the spaceship I’ll pilot the spaceship to the earth
This is a good holiday on the sun
I was happy that day because I went to Tianyi Square and had a lot of fum
A Bad Cold
I’m not feeling well today I think I have a bad cold I have a headache I have a fever My nose hurts My throat is sore I have to take some medicine and stay in bed My parents will take me to the hospital What a bad cold
I hope I can be better soon And I want to go to school
领点评
写法：篇作时间序记叙病病症状服药治疗全程写出作者希快点康复学愿
时态：篇文章采般现时写果语第三称单数动词忘加s
句型：feel 加形容词表示患某种疾病法have+表示疾病单词
注意：表示疾病时achehurt sore单词避免枯燥写出病简单治疗心情写病情况常见病句：My nose is hurtbe面加形容词hurt动词应sore东西放床on the bed生病卧床起应该说stay in bed
表示吃药时通take some medicineeat
词汇量控制40~60间
A Farewell Party
It’s the end of the school year The students in Class There have a farewell party They invite their parents to the party Many students have performance at the party
Look Chen Jie is singing songs Zhang Peng is playing the piano Sarah is playing the erhu Mike is doing Chinese Kung fu What is Miss White doing She is dancing
Everybody has a lot of fun But Liu Yun isn’t here She has a cold She is at home The classmates are going to visit her after party They prepare many gifts fot her And they will take a picture together
领点评
写法：篇作记叙告晚会记叙学年末告晚会家表演什节目晚会家刘芸事
时态：篇作采三种时态写单元出现时态般时现进行时里般现时现进行时般时写
句型：般现时：语+动词原形+
现进行时：语+现分词+
般时：语+ be going to will +动词原形+
注意：篇文章中涉时态较注意时态变化学生表演什节目现进行时做什时外注意般现时肯定句中语第三称单数谓语动词第三称单数
A Field Trip
It is a nice day Our class will have a field trip today The classmates are very excited
Look Here we are There’re a lot of activities to do Amy is watching insects Peter is collecting leaves They want to write a report Mandy is catching butterflies in the woods Tim and Bob are playing chess Some of the classmates are having a picnic There is a lot of delicious food to eat Oh who’s that over there It’s Miss White What is she doing She is taking photos We had a very good time I’ll never forget this field trip
领点评
写法：篇作郊游时画面描述记叙学分郊游中做活动郊游感受
时态：篇文章般时现进行时写单元讲现进行时里采现进行时较合适
句型：×× isare doing sth She He is doing sth They’re doing sth
注意：活动相关表述法采新旧知识相结合写注意时态转换描写感受时般现时
图写作文
题目：A Happy Day in Spring
提示：图Mr Black 家春天某天野外游玩场景请般现时描写图中呈现出容作适想象发挥
求： B条理清晰意思明确连贯句子通标点正确书写工整规范
少70单词
A Happy Day in Spring
It’s spring It’s sunny and cloudy today There are many big trees in the park Mr Black’s family has a picnic in a park They bring much food there They bring fruit drink and bread Mr Black and Mrs Black talk with each other They talk very happily Ann reads a magazine Tom likes flying a kite The kite flies very well They are hungry now They want to eat their food They are very happy
Birthday
My birthday is on Sunday My parents are going to have a birthday party at home I invite my friends to come to the party
At the party They give me many small presents Such as cards picture books pens
They sing Happy Birthday to me My mother makes a big cake for me I cut the cake into small pieces and give them out we sing and dance
We have a good time at the party
Happy day
Today I＇m very happyafter I have breakfastI go to park
It＇s a sunny day the bird is singingI＇m singing tooWhen I get to parkI see some girls are playing games so I join themWe play very happyThen I have lunch with my friendsWe both have a good timewhat a happy day
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