请写喜爱季节写出喜欢原
My favorite season
My favorite season is summer It’s hot in summer There is a summer vacation in summer I don’t go to school I think many children like this season because they can eat icecream and go swimming I can go swimming Sometimes I go to the beach with my parents Sometimes I go to the swimming pool with my friends I usually visit many places in summer vacation
My Favourite Food
Do you know what this is Guess Its colour is yellow It’s long and thin It looks like a small boat and crescent Oh it is a banana Do you know what that is Guess again Its colour is orange It’s round It looks like a small ball and a small lantern Oh it is an orange I like then a lot I like icecreams I like to chew gum Chocolates and candies are yummy I like them very much
How about you What’s your favourite food
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My Favourite Food 篇成功文章作者简单列举出喜欢种食物详略进行介绍整篇文章词准确语言流畅没语法错误外文章中出现生词见作者心查字典
学定爱请写爱字数少60单词
My hobby
My hobby is collecting stamps(集邮) There are many stamps in my room I like stamps very much There are many things on the stamps They are colorful and beautiful After school I usually go to the post office and there are many people there I learn a lot from collecting stamps I like collecting stamps very much
My hobby
I am Cindy I am in Nanhai Experimental Primary School I am in Class 9 Grade 6 I am tall and thin I live in Dali I have many good friends I often play with them
I have many hobbies riding a bike drawing pictures and reading books But I like to read books the best Because of reading books is good for my study I also like riding bikes Because of it does a lot of good to my body
What’s your hobby Can you tell me
My Seasons
We have four seasons in a year I can do many interesting things in each season In spring the weather is cool and wind I can fly kites when it’s wind And I can go hiking with my family when it’s sunny and cool I like hiking Summer is hot in the north of China but it’s not long time I often go swimming It can make me healthy and strong I can also wear my beautiful dresses Fall is a season with harvest And I can eat delicious fruits in this season I can watch the leaves fall Winter comes it’s often snowy in winter in my hometown When it snows everything is white We can play with snow and make a snowman skate and ski And winter is my favourite season because of the Spring Festival I love seasons I love the nature
领点评
写法：篇短文描述四季写法根春夏秋冬四季更写先讲明季节特征写季节中活动较代表性活动时讲真实感受阐述喜欢季节实际写作时候先写出喜爱季节活动容讲季节讲解域季节特征然中景色：秋天田里片金黄农民收割等等样写出四季更贴实际
时态：篇作讲四季较惯常行采般现时情态动词结合活动写法：什季节天气做什
注意：写作容容简单四季节写明季节季节天气季节性活动活动活动感受等求句子序正确写作中注意关联词二者时出现词量控制80词
领点评
写法：篇短文描述四季写法根春夏秋冬四季更写先讲明季节特征写季节中活动较代表性活动时讲真实感受阐述喜欢季节实际写作时候先写出喜爱季节活动容讲季节讲解域季节特征然中景色：秋天田里片金黄农民收割等等样写出四季更贴实际
时态：篇作讲四季较惯常行采般现时情态动词结合活动写法：什季节天气做什
注意：写作容容简单四季节写明季节季节天气季节性活动活动活动感受等求句子序正确写作中注意关联词二者时出现词量控制80词
I often go to Zhongshan Park In the park you can see many trees and flowers Some flowers are red and some are purple The trees are big and tall You can see a hill in the park too At the foot of the hill there are several paths
A lot of people in my city like going to the park Some young people like taking a walk there Some old people like singing there Some children like dancing or playing games there
Zhongshan park is really a good place for relaxation[ww@w#zzstep~^com*]
生单词：
1 several
2 relaxation放松[中国教#育出^@版网*&]
点评：陈祖新朋友篇作文简单明首先作者家简单描绘出公园风景：山水花然作者写公园里活动：青年公园里散步老年公园里唱歌孩子公园里玩游戏快乐组画面啊作者作出总结：中山公园真放松心情方
Li Ying ’s Hobby
Li Ying likes English very much She works hard at it She reads English every morning She likes speaking English She often listens to the radio She watches TV only on Saturday evening
Does she like dancing No she doesn’t But she likes drawing and singing Her parents love her And all the teachers and her friends like her too She says her hobbies make her happy
领点评
篇写爱文章作者写作思路值学没具体写刘莹某种爱学课余种爱入手刘莹种爱进行粗线条勾画爱角度刘莹话会觉形象饱满
朋友写种叙事写作文时两角度手：具体描绘二面朋友样粗线条勾画二者长处行文中问句转述话作文更灵气避免铺直叙缺点文Does she like dancing No she doesn’tshe says her hobbies make her happy十分错句子读者眼前亮
描写种喜爱动物进行外形描写
My Favorite Animal
My favorite animal is rabbit Its name is Sweet Sweet has long ears It’s very small It’s white It has a short tail It has red eyes It likes eating carrots It likes jumping It goes jumping three times a day I like it very much It’s lovely It’s my best friend I like the rabbit
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My favorite season
My favorite season is summer It’s hot in summer There is a summer vacation in summer I don’t go to school I think many children like this season because they can eat icecream and go swimming I can go swimming Sometimes I go to the beach with my parents Sometimes I go to the swimming pool with my friends I usually visit many places in summer vacation
My Favourite Food
Do you know what this is Guess Its colour is yellow It’s long and thin It looks like a small boat and crescent Oh it is a banana Do you know what that is Guess again Its colour is orange It’s round It looks like a small ball and a small lantern Oh it is an orange I like then a lot I like icecreams I like to chew gum Chocolates and candies are yummy I like them very much
How about you What’s your favourite food
领点评
My Favourite Food 篇成功文章作者简单列举出喜欢种食物详略进行介绍整篇文章词准确语言流畅没语法错误外文章中出现生词见作者心查字典
学定爱请写爱字数少60单词
My hobby
My hobby is collecting stamps(集邮) There are many stamps in my room I like stamps very much There are many things on the stamps They are colorful and beautiful After school I usually go to the post office and there are many people there I learn a lot from collecting stamps I like collecting stamps very much
My hobby
I am Cindy I am in Nanhai Experimental Primary School I am in Class 9 Grade 6 I am tall and thin I live in Dali I have many good friends I often play with them
I have many hobbies riding a bike drawing pictures and reading books But I like to read books the best Because of reading books is good for my study I also like riding bikes Because of it does a lot of good to my body
What’s your hobby Can you tell me
My Seasons
We have four seasons in a year I can do many interesting things in each season In spring the weather is cool and wind I can fly kites when it’s wind And I can go hiking with my family when it’s sunny and cool I like hiking Summer is hot in the north of China but it’s not long time I often go swimming It can make me healthy and strong I can also wear my beautiful dresses Fall is a season with harvest And I can eat delicious fruits in this season I can watch the leaves fall Winter comes it’s often snowy in winter in my hometown When it snows everything is white We can play with snow and make a snowman skate and ski And winter is my favourite season because of the Spring Festival I love seasons I love the nature
领点评
写法：篇短文描述四季写法根春夏秋冬四季更写先讲明季节特征写季节中活动较代表性活动时讲真实感受阐述喜欢季节实际写作时候先写出喜爱季节活动容讲季节讲解域季节特征然中景色：秋天田里片金黄农民收割等等样写出四季更贴实际
时态：篇作讲四季较惯常行采般现时情态动词结合活动写法：什季节天气做什
注意：写作容容简单四季节写明季节季节天气季节性活动活动活动感受等求句子序正确写作中注意关联词二者时出现词量控制80词
领点评
写法：篇短文描述四季写法根春夏秋冬四季更写先讲明季节特征写季节中活动较代表性活动时讲真实感受阐述喜欢季节实际写作时候先写出喜爱季节活动容讲季节讲解域季节特征然中景色：秋天田里片金黄农民收割等等样写出四季更贴实际
时态：篇作讲四季较惯常行采般现时情态动词结合活动写法：什季节天气做什
注意：写作容容简单四季节写明季节季节天气季节性活动活动活动感受等求句子序正确写作中注意关联词二者时出现词量控制80词
I often go to Zhongshan Park In the park you can see many trees and flowers Some flowers are red and some are purple The trees are big and tall You can see a hill in the park too At the foot of the hill there are several paths
A lot of people in my city like going to the park Some young people like taking a walk there Some old people like singing there Some children like dancing or playing games there
Zhongshan park is really a good place for relaxation[ww@w#zzstep~^com*]
生单词：
1 several
2 relaxation放松[中国教#育出^@版网*&]
点评：陈祖新朋友篇作文简单明首先作者家简单描绘出公园风景：山水花然作者写公园里活动：青年公园里散步老年公园里唱歌孩子公园里玩游戏快乐组画面啊作者作出总结：中山公园真放松心情方
Li Ying ’s Hobby
Li Ying likes English very much She works hard at it She reads English every morning She likes speaking English She often listens to the radio She watches TV only on Saturday evening
Does she like dancing No she doesn’t But she likes drawing and singing Her parents love her And all the teachers and her friends like her too She says her hobbies make her happy
领点评
篇写爱文章作者写作思路值学没具体写刘莹某种爱学课余种爱入手刘莹种爱进行粗线条勾画爱角度刘莹话会觉形象饱满
朋友写种叙事写作文时两角度手：具体描绘二面朋友样粗线条勾画二者长处行文中问句转述话作文更灵气避免铺直叙缺点文Does she like dancing No she doesn’tshe says her hobbies make her happy十分错句子读者眼前亮
描写种喜爱动物进行外形描写
My Favorite Animal
My favorite animal is rabbit Its name is Sweet Sweet has long ears It’s very small It’s white It has a short tail It has red eyes It likes eating carrots It likes jumping It goes jumping three times a day I like it very much It’s lovely It’s my best friend I like the rabbit
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