复旦交招生英语应试指导真题详解
第 七 讲：英 语 写 作 （二）
作文
年试题：
Directions write a composition of no less than 250 words according to the outline given below
Sample 1
My View on Playing Computer Games
1 认学生电脑游戏利智力开发
2 认学生电脑游戏妨碍学
3 观点
Sample 2：贫富差距加现象谈谈法
评分标准
Global scoring
a Content
b Language
2分条理清 思路紊乱语言支离破碎部分句子均错误数严重错误
5分：基切题表达思想清连贯性差较严重语言错误
8分：方表达思想够清楚文字勉强连贯语言错误较中严重错误
11分：切题表达思想清楚文字连贯少量语言错误
14分：切题表达思想清楚文字通连贯性较基没语言错误仅错
注：白卷作文题目毫相关独立词法表达思想0分
严重错误——语法错误
There are many reasons caused the accident
The driver of the car no in
The life is becoming gooder and gooder
That day rain bigly
The man who through the street
The car which in a fast speed hit him
The car which in a fast speed hit him
I got the place where happened the accident ————————————————————————————————————————————
第1页
Our city would happen many traffic
写作注意事项
1 审题想写写划掉写完发现字数够写样整篇
文章联贯
2 握文章重心般观点应该重心
3 注意写作格式——缩进式齐头式
4 准词短语法应避免
5 表达清晰简洁必味追求结构复杂句样文章会
显罗嗦：The economy is developing at a speed which is very fast
6 注意词搭配
7 检查sed量避免严重错误
Choice of Words
1Three levels of English words
English native words(core)informal(oral)
French or Spanish words
Latin or Greek words (academic words)formal (written)
Examples
EnglishFrench or SpanishLatin or Greek
askinquireinterrogate
breakseverseparate
fireflameconflagration
houseaboderesidence
kinglyroyalregal
manlymalemasculine
risemountascend
timeageepoch
I know thatI am aware that
I believe thatI am convinced that
I have a good ideaA good idea occurs to me
Causegive rise to
Emphasizelay emphasis on
Because ofdue to owing to
Stop endcome to a stopend
Suddenlyall of a sudden
Oftenmore often than not
2 Connotation of Words (English explanation)
common peasant assassinate gay acquire date property enemy problem issue
3 General Vs Specific terms (overuse of general terms)
beautiful delicious famous
China’s English
康社会缘分丞相风水三代表 孔子孟子老子
容易错词
1 词性
lack serve contact last marry concern like
2 汉语影响
more perfect very excellent return back repeat again good memory power listening ability high quality goods learn the knowledge
常见错误
(1) two predicates in one simple sentence
Every year lots of familys sit at the front of TV wait this game after have delicious mealThere have many people like SFG
My mother cooks food is very delicious
(2) Omission and overuse of Be
Nowday people’s life level is arise
Many person are like watch SFG in the eve
SFG was appeared since 1984
SFG is liked by many people
How fast time was gone
SFG can divide into several parts
We very busy
(3) Comparative degree
more and more better
become gooder and gooder
(4) Conjunction
because…so
although…but
While
(5) I very like SFGVery hate
(6) Part of speech
most of we Chinese make me surprise
with the quick development of economic and social
In my’s opinion I advice to keep SFG
eating good drinking good playing good
good plays good look good use
I think it dues to the development
Let’s analysis and discovery the main factors leading the changes
To men women just liked clothes they like it like me like it
two weeks past
choose choice succeed success successful die dead death
(7) Choice of words
The whole family assemble to have a dinner
congratulate Spring Festival
abolish (stop give up) SFG
sit behind the TV to look SFG
Many people fall in love with watching SFG
We can elect other programs to see
celebrate SFG with bomb
stand in the shadowshade
mosquito bitesting
It’s a gay meetingparty
(8) Phrases
in all in one hand another hand third hand at one hand at second hand at last hand in one hand from other hand last but not the last last but not most on my opinion A coin has two hands (coins) Everything has two hands (coins)
(9) Spelling
We can’t cansle (cancer cancle) it
SFG is watched by hole word
happyness
include (ing) SF Every student include me enjoys
Poor people maybe very angry (hungry)
eat the soap (soup)
Benefitial
Drived
Dispite
I will adopt to the campus life
联 贯
1 列：
andas well as
on the one hand… on the other hand
for one thing…for another
firstly…secondly…thirdly…finally
subsequentlythenthereafter afterward in the following …
at firstinitiallyoriginally
at lasteventually
2 递进：
Moreover
Furthermore
In addition
Additionally
What is more
Besides
Apart from…
3 转折
But
Yet
However
Nevertheless
While
Whereas
On the contrary
In contrast
4 结果
So
Therefore
Thus
Hence
As a result （consequence）
Consequently
5 原
Because (of)
Due to
Owing to
On the account of
In view of
Thanks to
On the grounds that
6 假设
If…
Given that
Provided that
Unless
On the condition of
As (so) long as
7
(1) Sentence adverbs absolutely alternatively currently undoubtedly certainly consequently subsequently obviously
(2) PP in general on average in fact in effect in theory in practice in reality in particular
(3) Adv speaking generally speaking broadly speaking strictly speaking theoretically speaking
(4) precisely because mainly because merely because only because
段落语
Beginning
With the development of
As is well known to
We all know that
As we all know
As a proverb says
As a saying goes
As for… some people hold the opinion that… While others
argue (maintain) that
Every coin has two sides
It has merits and demerits
It has pros and cons Supporters and opponents
Development
Recent researches have provenshownindicated that
My argumentsreasonsideas will be listed as follows
In the following paragraph I will
Firstly secondly and finally
Why is it that …
Ending
All in all
In a word
In conclusion
In short
In summary
To sum up
To summarize
In brief
语
be deeply rooted in
be in favor of
be opposed to
It goes without saying that
The past twenty years sawwitness
Chances are
No wonder
It is likely that
As time goes by
When it comes to
As illustratedshown in the charttable
面试：
面试教授专业领域涵盖现学科（文科学社会科学技术科学然科学学生德育五类）类组机抽取1组成面试五组面试前教授审阅考生种资料包括考生提交入学申请材料水测试成绩等面试时教授学生面试名学生连闯五关5位专家面面交谈累计面试时间超1时专家组学生博学社会实践兴趣创新力时政解思想性等方面考察学生综合素质面试结果作出否录取建议
英语面试试题
2005复旦：根男女业表格speaker写份报告
2006复旦：谈谈希学生活天
2006交：根twinsidenticaldoctorfun编事
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第 七 讲：英 语 写 作 （二）
作文
年试题：
Directions write a composition of no less than 250 words according to the outline given below
Sample 1
My View on Playing Computer Games
1 认学生电脑游戏利智力开发
2 认学生电脑游戏妨碍学
3 观点
Sample 2：贫富差距加现象谈谈法
评分标准
Global scoring
a Content
b Language
2分条理清 思路紊乱语言支离破碎部分句子均错误数严重错误
5分：基切题表达思想清连贯性差较严重语言错误
8分：方表达思想够清楚文字勉强连贯语言错误较中严重错误
11分：切题表达思想清楚文字连贯少量语言错误
14分：切题表达思想清楚文字通连贯性较基没语言错误仅错
注：白卷作文题目毫相关独立词法表达思想0分
严重错误——语法错误
There are many reasons caused the accident
The driver of the car no in
The life is becoming gooder and gooder
That day rain bigly
The man who through the street
The car which in a fast speed hit him
The car which in a fast speed hit him
I got the place where happened the accident ————————————————————————————————————————————
第1页
Our city would happen many traffic
写作注意事项
1 审题想写写划掉写完发现字数够写样整篇
文章联贯
2 握文章重心般观点应该重心
3 注意写作格式——缩进式齐头式
4 准词短语法应避免
5 表达清晰简洁必味追求结构复杂句样文章会
显罗嗦：The economy is developing at a speed which is very fast
6 注意词搭配
7 检查sed量避免严重错误
Choice of Words
1Three levels of English words
English native words(core)informal(oral)
French or Spanish words
Latin or Greek words (academic words)formal (written)
Examples
EnglishFrench or SpanishLatin or Greek
askinquireinterrogate
breakseverseparate
fireflameconflagration
houseaboderesidence
kinglyroyalregal
manlymalemasculine
risemountascend
timeageepoch
I know thatI am aware that
I believe thatI am convinced that
I have a good ideaA good idea occurs to me
Causegive rise to
Emphasizelay emphasis on
Because ofdue to owing to
Stop endcome to a stopend
Suddenlyall of a sudden
Oftenmore often than not
2 Connotation of Words (English explanation)
common peasant assassinate gay acquire date property enemy problem issue
3 General Vs Specific terms (overuse of general terms)
beautiful delicious famous
China’s English
康社会缘分丞相风水三代表 孔子孟子老子
容易错词
1 词性
lack serve contact last marry concern like
2 汉语影响
more perfect very excellent return back repeat again good memory power listening ability high quality goods learn the knowledge
常见错误
(1) two predicates in one simple sentence
Every year lots of familys sit at the front of TV wait this game after have delicious mealThere have many people like SFG
My mother cooks food is very delicious
(2) Omission and overuse of Be
Nowday people’s life level is arise
Many person are like watch SFG in the eve
SFG was appeared since 1984
SFG is liked by many people
How fast time was gone
SFG can divide into several parts
We very busy
(3) Comparative degree
more and more better
become gooder and gooder
(4) Conjunction
because…so
although…but
While
(5) I very like SFGVery hate
(6) Part of speech
most of we Chinese make me surprise
with the quick development of economic and social
In my’s opinion I advice to keep SFG
eating good drinking good playing good
good plays good look good use
I think it dues to the development
Let’s analysis and discovery the main factors leading the changes
To men women just liked clothes they like it like me like it
two weeks past
choose choice succeed success successful die dead death
(7) Choice of words
The whole family assemble to have a dinner
congratulate Spring Festival
abolish (stop give up) SFG
sit behind the TV to look SFG
Many people fall in love with watching SFG
We can elect other programs to see
celebrate SFG with bomb
stand in the shadowshade
mosquito bitesting
It’s a gay meetingparty
(8) Phrases
in all in one hand another hand third hand at one hand at second hand at last hand in one hand from other hand last but not the last last but not most on my opinion A coin has two hands (coins) Everything has two hands (coins)
(9) Spelling
We can’t cansle (cancer cancle) it
SFG is watched by hole word
happyness
include (ing) SF Every student include me enjoys
Poor people maybe very angry (hungry)
eat the soap (soup)
Benefitial
Drived
Dispite
I will adopt to the campus life
联 贯
1 列：
andas well as
on the one hand… on the other hand
for one thing…for another
firstly…secondly…thirdly…finally
subsequentlythenthereafter afterward in the following …
at firstinitiallyoriginally
at lasteventually
2 递进：
Moreover
Furthermore
In addition
Additionally
What is more
Besides
Apart from…
3 转折
But
Yet
However
Nevertheless
While
Whereas
On the contrary
In contrast
4 结果
So
Therefore
Thus
Hence
As a result （consequence）
Consequently
5 原
Because (of)
Due to
Owing to
On the account of
In view of
Thanks to
On the grounds that
6 假设
If…
Given that
Provided that
Unless
On the condition of
As (so) long as
7
(1) Sentence adverbs absolutely alternatively currently undoubtedly certainly consequently subsequently obviously
(2) PP in general on average in fact in effect in theory in practice in reality in particular
(3) Adv speaking generally speaking broadly speaking strictly speaking theoretically speaking
(4) precisely because mainly because merely because only because
段落语
Beginning
With the development of
As is well known to
We all know that
As we all know
As a proverb says
As a saying goes
As for… some people hold the opinion that… While others
argue (maintain) that
Every coin has two sides
It has merits and demerits
It has pros and cons Supporters and opponents
Development
Recent researches have provenshownindicated that
My argumentsreasonsideas will be listed as follows
In the following paragraph I will
Firstly secondly and finally
Why is it that …
Ending
All in all
In a word
In conclusion
In short
In summary
To sum up
To summarize
In brief
语
be deeply rooted in
be in favor of
be opposed to
It goes without saying that
The past twenty years sawwitness
Chances are
No wonder
It is likely that
As time goes by
When it comes to
As illustratedshown in the charttable
面试：
面试教授专业领域涵盖现学科（文科学社会科学技术科学然科学学生德育五类）类组机抽取1组成面试五组面试前教授审阅考生种资料包括考生提交入学申请材料水测试成绩等面试时教授学生面试名学生连闯五关5位专家面面交谈累计面试时间超1时专家组学生博学社会实践兴趣创新力时政解思想性等方面考察学生综合素质面试结果作出否录取建议
英语面试试题
2005复旦：根男女业表格speaker写份报告
2006复旦：谈谈希学生活天
2006交：根twinsidenticaldoctorfun编事
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