12015·新课标全国II书面表达（满分25分）
86假李华计划学敬老院（nursing home）陪老国重阳节（the Double Ninth Festival）请外教Lucy写封邮件邀前容包括：
1 出发返回时间
2 活动：包饺子表演节目等
注意：
1 词数100左右
2 适增加细节行文连贯
3 结语已写
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Looking forward to your reply
Yours
Li Hua
参考答案
Dear Lucy
I’d like to invite you to join us for a visit to the nearby nursing home next Saturday for the Double Ninth Festival It is the day for the elderly in our culture We’ll go and make dumplings and cakes with the elderly people there We’ll also spend some fun time together singing dancing and playing games which we hope will make them happy We should be back around 4 o’clock in the afternoon If you are able to come with us please let us know and we’ll wait for you at the gate at 9 in the morning
Looking forward to your reply
Yours
Li Hua
亮点说明文结构紧凑层次分明We’ll also spend some fun time together singing dancing and playing games which we hope will make them happy中which引导定语句句式spend time doing外if句短语invite you to join usfor a visit tomake dumplings等
考点定位考查提纲作文
名师点睛作文实际生活出发英语交际性实性目标兼顾尊老敬老做志愿者教育意义体现课程标准求知识运教学目标求高三备考时应该语言作交流工具角度准备书面表达
22015·新课标全国I
第二节 书面表达（满分25分）
假定李华校英文报外国文化栏目拟刊登介绍美国节日风俗中学生生活短文请美国朋友彼写信约稿点：
1 栏目介绍
2 稿件容
3 稿件长度：约400词
4 交稿日期：6月28日前
注意：
1 词数100左右
2 适增加细节行文连贯
3 开头语已写
答案
Dear Peter
I＇d like to ask you to write an article for our school’s English newspaper
The Foreign Cultures section in our newspaper is very popular among us students It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries Would you please write something about the culture in your part of the United States And we would especially welcome articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals and the life of American high school students You can write anything relevant so long as it’s interesting and informative 400 words would be fine Could we have your article before June 28
I’m looking forward to hearing from you
Yours[源学|科|网Z|X|X|K]
Li Hua
解析
试题分析：篇书面表达属英文书信根提示信息求写封美国朋友彼写信约稿学校校英文报外国文化栏目刊登介绍美国节日风俗中学生生活文章写作时注意点：1仔细阅读关提示弄清试题提供信息明确三点：首先简单介绍校英文报栏目情况2建议Peter介绍美国节日风俗中学生生活3稿件求时间写作时根表达容确定句子时态语态文言应该般现时态 4注意高级词汇句式增加文章亮点
亮点说明文结构紧凑层次分明种句式结构It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries运分词作置定语 And we would especially welcome articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals and the life of American high school students运宾语句外文章量语短语be popular among so long as look forward to hear from等
考点定位考查提纲作文
名师点睛书面表达考查家熟悉提纲类作文需正确英语出点表达出 动笔前定认真分析点理解点表达含义遗漏点跑题偏题作文中出点较具体需准确表达写作时注意准确运时态文意思连贯符合逻辑关系量熟悉单词句式时注意高级词汇高级句型文章显更档次文中巧妙固定句式渡词语仅增强表达效果实现形式容统
32015·北京
假红星中学高三李华请美国朋友Jim写封信告诉算参加龙舟训练营希起参加邮件容包括：
1 介绍训练营相关容（例时间点参加者等）
2 说明算参加原[源学科网ZXXK]
3 询问方意
注意： 1 词数少50
2 开头结尾已出 计入总词数
提示词：龙舟训练营 Dragon Boat Training Camp
Dear Jim
Yours
Li Hua
答案
Dear Jim
I’m writing to tell you my exciting plan for the summer holiday I want to join a Dragon Boat Training Camp I wonder if you’d like to go with me
This camp will open on July 20th It offers teenagers like you and me a chance to enjoy sports and learn about Chinese culture If you are interested in it let me know and I’ll send you more information
Hope to meet you at the training camp this summer
解析
试题分析：篇文章重点李华邀请英国朋友Jim参加龙舟训练营属典型邀请信需邀请信写作流程轻松写出发出邀请— 介绍活动(时间点容参加原)—期感谢
亮点说明
文结构紧凑层次分明运邀请信里常句型：I’m writing to tell you my exciting plan for the summer holidayI wonder if you’d like to go with me
文中注意般时般现时等时态叙述事情时态较握
考点定位应文类书面表达
名师点睛题篇考邀请信龙舟艺术节然传统文化题采分点三板块第板块相关细节处理第点中写学生设计时间点参赛员学生需行发挥编纂时候合理第二板块提参加原原必然考官会关注什参加龙州艺术界活动第三提两字询问希学生写作时候量避开非常生硬词汇注意写邀请信常句型：On behalf of… I am writing to invite you to take part in the…I’d like to be involved in…due to the fact that…I am looking forward to your reply arrivalcoming
attendance等考生应文写作中定体现出交际功重视该文体写作结构称呼落款必须写齐全外正文部分般开头应道明写作目中间呈现具体细节结尾处补充礼貌性话语外应文语言结构忌复杂词忌难偏少倒装句嵌套等长难句语言词做适应场合准确位做点应文部分错分数
42015·广东
基础写作（1题满分15分）
接受项写作务英语校报写篇科技报道
[写作容]
请根信息介绍国外医疗行业出现项新技术容包括：
技术名称：DNA检测
检测方法：唾液样分析
检测费：125英镑
检测时长：46周
检测途： 1 预测重疾病
2 预知食物偏
3 提示合适锻炼方式
检测影响： 1 增强健康意识
2 易引起度焦虑
*唾液样：saliva sample
[写作求]
5句子表达全部容
[评分标准]
句子结构准确信息容完整篇章连贯
答案
第节DNA Detection
We can use saliva sample to detect whether people have major illnesses predict whether people are particular about food and remind people to take proper exercise People should pay 125 pounds for it It takes four to six weeks to finish the report After detection we can realize we should strengthen our bodies It may cause too many worries
解析
试题分析：基础写作5句子概括医疗新技术求必须点遗漏概括短文意抓住点叙述班级情况时：1仔细阅读关提示弄清试题提供信息2根表达容确定句子时态语态文言应该般现时态般时 3注意高级词汇句式增加文章亮点
亮点说明文结构紧凑层次分明种句式结构I will explain to them that studying hard is very important运宾语句Sally was a teacherwho taught some students full of problems定语句副词Therefore文章容更具层次感语言更加连贯
考点定位考查提纲作文
名师点睛题5句子概括医疗新技术材料学生太熟悉容量学生熟悉句式写必须5句子表达信息题考查阅读概括力语言组织力需高级句式词汇增加文章亮点
52015·陕西
书面表达（满分30分）
假定李华校报英语专栏学校英语文化节招募启事请阅读启事根写作点写作求写封应征邮件
Volunteers Wanted
Our annual English Festival which will be held on June 1517 2015 is now looking for 20 student volunteers to provide service for Talent Show Speech Contest and English Debate If you are interested please send an application email at your earliest convenience to MsChen at chenlaoshi@aefcom
写作点：
1表示写信意图
2陈述应征目
3说明应征条件（性格力等）
写作求：
1邮件词数少100
2开头结尾部分已写计入总词数
3根情况增加细节行文连贯
4真实姓名学校名称
Dear MS Chen
I’mLi Hua a student from Class2 Grade 3 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Looking forward to your reply
Yours truly
Li Hua
参考答案
Dear MS Chen
I’m Li Hua a student from Class2 Grade 3 I’m writing to apply for the position as a student volunteer
I really want to obtain this precious opportunity because by offering my service I will be able to improve my organizational ability communication skills as well as my confidence in speaking English in public
As an outgoing girl I get along well with my classmates Besides I have such a good command of English that I am elected as assistant to my English teacher Successfully I have lent a helping hand to her in several English activities of my class which have been appreciated by both teachers and classmates
I am sure that I can perfectly live up to your expectations I will be gratefull if you could give me a kind consideration
Looking forward to your reply
Yours truly
Li Hua
解析
试题分析：篇书面表达属英文书信根提示知需结合英语文化节招募启事写封应征邮件写作时注意点：1仔细阅读招募启事弄清招募职位信息求2根写作点三方面写应征邮件写作时点序写3根表达容确定句子时态语态文言
应该般现时态 4注意高级词汇句式增加文章亮点
亮点说明文结构紧凑层次分明种句式结构I have such a good command of English that I am elected as assistant to my English teacher运so…that…句型定语句I have lent a helping hand to her in several English activities of my class which have been appreciated by both teachers and classmates外文章量短语apply for the position as well as in public get along well withhave such a good command of lent a helping hand to live up to等插入语Besides副词Successfully文章容更具层次感语言更加连贯
考点定位考查提纲作文
名师点睛篇作文类似读写类作文首先读懂招募启事抓住重信息结合提纲写作容贴学生生活学生话讲富实性学生交际力会帮助
62015·四川
第三节 书面表达（35分)
71假李夏美国留学生Sharon 网发贴希帮助提高普通话（Mandarin）水教英语作回报请根提示英语写封电子邮件
1 表达提供帮助意愿
2 说明胜辅导理
3 出讲普通话两点建议[源学科网]
4 提出学英语具体需求
注意：
1 词数120左右开头语已写
2 适增加细节行文连贯
3 文中透漏姓名学校名称
Hi Sharon
This is Li Xia I learned from your post that you want to improve your Mandarm__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
参考答案
Hi Sharon
This is Li Xia I learned from your post that you want to improve your Mandarin I am quite interested in it I think I’m fit for it As a student I have been learning Mandarin for many years In addition I am Chinese which means Mandarin is a must for me to communicate with others in my daily life So I’m quite confident thatI can help you learn Mandarin[源学科网]
Learning Mandarin takes time so if you want to learn it well you should spend much time practicing Mandarin everyday As the saying goes practice makes perfect Besides you can also read some books in Chinesesee some Chinese films and listen to some Chinese radio programmes Speaking and listening are very important for a language learning by which you are sure to make great progress
In your post you say you can teach English as a reward It is just what I want I’m eager to improve my English So if you allow me to help you learn Mandarin you can also help me improve my EnglishWe can contact each other by video chat every night for half an hour in English and half an hour in Chinese so that we can improve our oral speaking
Hope for you early reply
Yours Sincerely
Li Xia
亮点说明文点齐全结构完整种句式定语句：I am Chinese which means Mandarin is a must for me to communicate with others in my daily life表语句：It is just what I want等量短语等
考点定位考查提纲类作文
名师点睛书面表达考查家熟悉提纲类作文需正确英语出点表达出 动笔前定认真分析点理解点表达含义遗漏点跑题偏题作文中出点较具体需准确表达写作时注意准确运时态文意思连贯符合逻辑关系量熟悉单词句式时注意高级词汇高级句型文章显更档次
72015·天津
书面表达（满分25分）
61
假设晨光中学学生会席李津校拟美国友交流学校中文班捐赠批图书请根提示写封邮件中文班班长Chris联系告知年七月赴方学校参加夏令营时带赠书
（1）介绍
（2）拟捐赠图书类型册数途等
（3）询问方需求
注意：
（1）词数少100
（2）请适加入细节容充实行文连贯[源Z+xx+kCom]
参考词汇：学生会 the Student Union
Dear Chris
处答题
Yours
Li Jin
参考答案略
解析
试题分析：篇书面求写封电子邮件写作时候注意点：动笔前定认真分析点理解点表达含义遗漏点跑题偏题容点包括：1介绍写信目2拟捐赠图书类型册数途等3 询问方需求 4．告知年七月赴方学校参加夏令营时带赠书二写作时注意准确运时态文意思连贯符合逻辑关系量熟悉单词句式时注意高级词汇高级句型文章显更档次
考点定位考查提纲作文
名师点睛书面表达考查家熟悉提纲类作文需正确英语出点表达出 动笔前定认真分析点理解点表达含义遗漏点跑题偏题作文中出点较具体需准确表达考生写完检查否语法错误否运学知识简单句变复杂句然没握句子写
82015·重庆
写作二（满分20分）
Bookcrossing Com 面全球图书分享网站该网站组织分享活动两种参方式：分享（wild release）书放指定点参者获取二定分享（controlled release）直接传递位参者假设李华请英文写信申请参加容应包括：
· 表明写信目
· 选择种分享方式
· 简述作出该选择理
· 希解更信息
注意：（1）词数少80
（2）答题卡做答
（3）书信格式开头已出（计入总词数）
参考答案
Learning that you are organizing this activity to share books worldwide I am writing to apply for it for the simple reason that I love reading and I own a large number of books
You’ve introduced two ways to share books wild release and controlled release Of the two the latter wins my favor By the means of controlled release I only need to deliver books to other participants not only are books shared but it can build up a bridge connecting readers from different parts of the world as well
If you could provide more specific information I would be well grateful Looking forward to your reply
解析
试题分析：篇提纲类作文需正确英语出点表达出 动笔前定认真分析点理解点表达含义遗漏点跑题偏题作文中出点较具体需准确表达写作时注意准确运时态文意思连贯符合逻辑关系量熟悉单词句式时注意高级词汇高级句型文章显更档次特注意选择句式时赋予变化
亮点说明范文语言简洁拖拉短语：apply for申请Looking forward to盼着Learning that you are organizing this activity to share books worldwide I am writing to apply for it for the simple reason that I love reading and I own a large number of books句话运learning做伴状语reason面着位语句not only are books shared but it can build up a bridge connecting readers from different parts of the world as well句子not only but also连接两句子第句子需部分倒装
考点定位考查提纲作文
名师点睛题解题思路表明写信目：申请参加该活动（添加知消息）二选择种分享方式：二者选三阐述理四书信结尾（
添加希）注意表达句式1 Between them I would like to choose…2 Of the two I prefer the latter to the former表示希表达句式1 I am looking forward to more information2 I would appreciate it if you would offer more information
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12015·新课标全国II书面表达（满分25分）
86假李华计划学敬老院（nursing home）陪老国重阳节（the Double Ninth Festival）请外教Lucy写封邮件邀前容包括：
1 出发返回时间
2 活动：包饺子表演节目等
注意：
1 词数100左右
2 适增加细节行文连贯
3 结语已写
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Looking forward to your reply
Yours
Li Hua
参考答案
Dear Lucy
I’d like to invite you to join us for a visit to the nearby nursing home next Saturday for the Double Ninth Festival It is the day for the elderly in our culture We’ll go and make dumplings and cakes with the elderly people there We’ll also spend some fun time together singing dancing and playing games which we hope will make them happy We should be back around 4 o’clock in the afternoon If you are able to come with us please let us know and we’ll wait for you at the gate at 9 in the morning
Looking forward to your reply
Yours
Li Hua
亮点说明文结构紧凑层次分明We’ll also spend some fun time together singing dancing and playing games which we hope will make them happy中which引导定语句句式spend time doing外if句短语invite you to join usfor a visit tomake dumplings等
考点定位考查提纲作文
名师点睛作文实际生活出发英语交际性实性目标兼顾尊老敬老做志愿者教育意义体现课程标准求知识运教学目标求高三备考时应该语言作交流工具角度准备书面表达
22015·新课标全国I
第二节 书面表达（满分25分）
假定李华校英文报外国文化栏目拟刊登介绍美国节日风俗中学生生活短文请美国朋友彼写信约稿点：
1 栏目介绍
2 稿件容
3 稿件长度：约400词
4 交稿日期：6月28日前
注意：
1 词数100左右
2 适增加细节行文连贯
3 开头语已写
答案
Dear Peter
I＇d like to ask you to write an article for our school’s English newspaper
The Foreign Cultures section in our newspaper is very popular among us students It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries Would you please write something about the culture in your part of the United States And we would especially welcome articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals and the life of American high school students You can write anything relevant so long as it’s interesting and informative 400 words would be fine Could we have your article before June 28
I’m looking forward to hearing from you
Yours[源学|科|网Z|X|X|K]
Li Hua
解析
试题分析：篇书面表达属英文书信根提示信息求写封美国朋友彼写信约稿学校校英文报外国文化栏目刊登介绍美国节日风俗中学生生活文章写作时注意点：1仔细阅读关提示弄清试题提供信息明确三点：首先简单介绍校英文报栏目情况2建议Peter介绍美国节日风俗中学生生活3稿件求时间写作时根表达容确定句子时态语态文言应该般现时态 4注意高级词汇句式增加文章亮点
亮点说明文结构紧凑层次分明种句式结构It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries运分词作置定语 And we would especially welcome articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals and the life of American high school students运宾语句外文章量语短语be popular among so long as look forward to hear from等
考点定位考查提纲作文
名师点睛书面表达考查家熟悉提纲类作文需正确英语出点表达出 动笔前定认真分析点理解点表达含义遗漏点跑题偏题作文中出点较具体需准确表达写作时注意准确运时态文意思连贯符合逻辑关系量熟悉单词句式时注意高级词汇高级句型文章显更档次文中巧妙固定句式渡词语仅增强表达效果实现形式容统
32015·北京
假红星中学高三李华请美国朋友Jim写封信告诉算参加龙舟训练营希起参加邮件容包括：
1 介绍训练营相关容（例时间点参加者等）
2 说明算参加原[源学科网ZXXK]
3 询问方意
注意： 1 词数少50
2 开头结尾已出 计入总词数
提示词：龙舟训练营 Dragon Boat Training Camp
Dear Jim
Yours
Li Hua
答案
Dear Jim
I’m writing to tell you my exciting plan for the summer holiday I want to join a Dragon Boat Training Camp I wonder if you’d like to go with me
This camp will open on July 20th It offers teenagers like you and me a chance to enjoy sports and learn about Chinese culture If you are interested in it let me know and I’ll send you more information
Hope to meet you at the training camp this summer
解析
试题分析：篇文章重点李华邀请英国朋友Jim参加龙舟训练营属典型邀请信需邀请信写作流程轻松写出发出邀请— 介绍活动(时间点容参加原)—期感谢
亮点说明
文结构紧凑层次分明运邀请信里常句型：I’m writing to tell you my exciting plan for the summer holidayI wonder if you’d like to go with me
文中注意般时般现时等时态叙述事情时态较握
考点定位应文类书面表达
名师点睛题篇考邀请信龙舟艺术节然传统文化题采分点三板块第板块相关细节处理第点中写学生设计时间点参赛员学生需行发挥编纂时候合理第二板块提参加原原必然考官会关注什参加龙州艺术界活动第三提两字询问希学生写作时候量避开非常生硬词汇注意写邀请信常句型：On behalf of… I am writing to invite you to take part in the…I’d like to be involved in…due to the fact that…I am looking forward to your reply arrivalcoming
attendance等考生应文写作中定体现出交际功重视该文体写作结构称呼落款必须写齐全外正文部分般开头应道明写作目中间呈现具体细节结尾处补充礼貌性话语外应文语言结构忌复杂词忌难偏少倒装句嵌套等长难句语言词做适应场合准确位做点应文部分错分数
42015·广东
基础写作（1题满分15分）
接受项写作务英语校报写篇科技报道
[写作容]
请根信息介绍国外医疗行业出现项新技术容包括：
技术名称：DNA检测
检测方法：唾液样分析
检测费：125英镑
检测时长：46周
检测途： 1 预测重疾病
2 预知食物偏
3 提示合适锻炼方式
检测影响： 1 增强健康意识
2 易引起度焦虑
*唾液样：saliva sample
[写作求]
5句子表达全部容
[评分标准]
句子结构准确信息容完整篇章连贯
答案
第节DNA Detection
We can use saliva sample to detect whether people have major illnesses predict whether people are particular about food and remind people to take proper exercise People should pay 125 pounds for it It takes four to six weeks to finish the report After detection we can realize we should strengthen our bodies It may cause too many worries
解析
试题分析：基础写作5句子概括医疗新技术求必须点遗漏概括短文意抓住点叙述班级情况时：1仔细阅读关提示弄清试题提供信息2根表达容确定句子时态语态文言应该般现时态般时 3注意高级词汇句式增加文章亮点
亮点说明文结构紧凑层次分明种句式结构I will explain to them that studying hard is very important运宾语句Sally was a teacherwho taught some students full of problems定语句副词Therefore文章容更具层次感语言更加连贯
考点定位考查提纲作文
名师点睛题5句子概括医疗新技术材料学生太熟悉容量学生熟悉句式写必须5句子表达信息题考查阅读概括力语言组织力需高级句式词汇增加文章亮点
52015·陕西
书面表达（满分30分）
假定李华校报英语专栏学校英语文化节招募启事请阅读启事根写作点写作求写封应征邮件
Volunteers Wanted
Our annual English Festival which will be held on June 1517 2015 is now looking for 20 student volunteers to provide service for Talent Show Speech Contest and English Debate If you are interested please send an application email at your earliest convenience to MsChen at chenlaoshi@aefcom
写作点：
1表示写信意图
2陈述应征目
3说明应征条件（性格力等）
写作求：
1邮件词数少100
2开头结尾部分已写计入总词数
3根情况增加细节行文连贯
4真实姓名学校名称
Dear MS Chen
I’mLi Hua a student from Class2 Grade 3 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Looking forward to your reply
Yours truly
Li Hua
参考答案
Dear MS Chen
I’m Li Hua a student from Class2 Grade 3 I’m writing to apply for the position as a student volunteer
I really want to obtain this precious opportunity because by offering my service I will be able to improve my organizational ability communication skills as well as my confidence in speaking English in public
As an outgoing girl I get along well with my classmates Besides I have such a good command of English that I am elected as assistant to my English teacher Successfully I have lent a helping hand to her in several English activities of my class which have been appreciated by both teachers and classmates
I am sure that I can perfectly live up to your expectations I will be gratefull if you could give me a kind consideration
Looking forward to your reply
Yours truly
Li Hua
解析
试题分析：篇书面表达属英文书信根提示知需结合英语文化节招募启事写封应征邮件写作时注意点：1仔细阅读招募启事弄清招募职位信息求2根写作点三方面写应征邮件写作时点序写3根表达容确定句子时态语态文言
应该般现时态 4注意高级词汇句式增加文章亮点
亮点说明文结构紧凑层次分明种句式结构I have such a good command of English that I am elected as assistant to my English teacher运so…that…句型定语句I have lent a helping hand to her in several English activities of my class which have been appreciated by both teachers and classmates外文章量短语apply for the position as well as in public get along well withhave such a good command of lent a helping hand to live up to等插入语Besides副词Successfully文章容更具层次感语言更加连贯
考点定位考查提纲作文
名师点睛篇作文类似读写类作文首先读懂招募启事抓住重信息结合提纲写作容贴学生生活学生话讲富实性学生交际力会帮助
62015·四川
第三节 书面表达（35分)
71假李夏美国留学生Sharon 网发贴希帮助提高普通话（Mandarin）水教英语作回报请根提示英语写封电子邮件
1 表达提供帮助意愿
2 说明胜辅导理
3 出讲普通话两点建议[源学科网]
4 提出学英语具体需求
注意：
1 词数120左右开头语已写
2 适增加细节行文连贯
3 文中透漏姓名学校名称
Hi Sharon
This is Li Xia I learned from your post that you want to improve your Mandarm__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
参考答案
Hi Sharon
This is Li Xia I learned from your post that you want to improve your Mandarin I am quite interested in it I think I’m fit for it As a student I have been learning Mandarin for many years In addition I am Chinese which means Mandarin is a must for me to communicate with others in my daily life So I’m quite confident thatI can help you learn Mandarin[源学科网]
Learning Mandarin takes time so if you want to learn it well you should spend much time practicing Mandarin everyday As the saying goes practice makes perfect Besides you can also read some books in Chinesesee some Chinese films and listen to some Chinese radio programmes Speaking and listening are very important for a language learning by which you are sure to make great progress
In your post you say you can teach English as a reward It is just what I want I’m eager to improve my English So if you allow me to help you learn Mandarin you can also help me improve my EnglishWe can contact each other by video chat every night for half an hour in English and half an hour in Chinese so that we can improve our oral speaking
Hope for you early reply
Yours Sincerely
Li Xia
亮点说明文点齐全结构完整种句式定语句：I am Chinese which means Mandarin is a must for me to communicate with others in my daily life表语句：It is just what I want等量短语等
考点定位考查提纲类作文
名师点睛书面表达考查家熟悉提纲类作文需正确英语出点表达出 动笔前定认真分析点理解点表达含义遗漏点跑题偏题作文中出点较具体需准确表达写作时注意准确运时态文意思连贯符合逻辑关系量熟悉单词句式时注意高级词汇高级句型文章显更档次
72015·天津
书面表达（满分25分）
61
假设晨光中学学生会席李津校拟美国友交流学校中文班捐赠批图书请根提示写封邮件中文班班长Chris联系告知年七月赴方学校参加夏令营时带赠书
（1）介绍
（2）拟捐赠图书类型册数途等
（3）询问方需求
注意：
（1）词数少100
（2）请适加入细节容充实行文连贯[源Z+xx+kCom]
参考词汇：学生会 the Student Union
Dear Chris
处答题
Yours
Li Jin
参考答案略
解析
试题分析：篇书面求写封电子邮件写作时候注意点：动笔前定认真分析点理解点表达含义遗漏点跑题偏题容点包括：1介绍写信目2拟捐赠图书类型册数途等3 询问方需求 4．告知年七月赴方学校参加夏令营时带赠书二写作时注意准确运时态文意思连贯符合逻辑关系量熟悉单词句式时注意高级词汇高级句型文章显更档次
考点定位考查提纲作文
名师点睛书面表达考查家熟悉提纲类作文需正确英语出点表达出 动笔前定认真分析点理解点表达含义遗漏点跑题偏题作文中出点较具体需准确表达考生写完检查否语法错误否运学知识简单句变复杂句然没握句子写
82015·重庆
写作二（满分20分）
Bookcrossing Com 面全球图书分享网站该网站组织分享活动两种参方式：分享（wild release）书放指定点参者获取二定分享（controlled release）直接传递位参者假设李华请英文写信申请参加容应包括：
· 表明写信目
· 选择种分享方式
· 简述作出该选择理
· 希解更信息
注意：（1）词数少80
（2）答题卡做答
（3）书信格式开头已出（计入总词数）
参考答案
Learning that you are organizing this activity to share books worldwide I am writing to apply for it for the simple reason that I love reading and I own a large number of books
You’ve introduced two ways to share books wild release and controlled release Of the two the latter wins my favor By the means of controlled release I only need to deliver books to other participants not only are books shared but it can build up a bridge connecting readers from different parts of the world as well
If you could provide more specific information I would be well grateful Looking forward to your reply
解析
试题分析：篇提纲类作文需正确英语出点表达出 动笔前定认真分析点理解点表达含义遗漏点跑题偏题作文中出点较具体需准确表达写作时注意准确运时态文意思连贯符合逻辑关系量熟悉单词句式时注意高级词汇高级句型文章显更档次特注意选择句式时赋予变化
亮点说明范文语言简洁拖拉短语：apply for申请Looking forward to盼着Learning that you are organizing this activity to share books worldwide I am writing to apply for it for the simple reason that I love reading and I own a large number of books句话运learning做伴状语reason面着位语句not only are books shared but it can build up a bridge connecting readers from different parts of the world as well句子not only but also连接两句子第句子需部分倒装
考点定位考查提纲作文
名师点睛题解题思路表明写信目：申请参加该活动（添加知消息）二选择种分享方式：二者选三阐述理四书信结尾（
添加希）注意表达句式1 Between them I would like to choose…2 Of the two I prefer the latter to the former表示希表达句式1 I am looking forward to more information2 I would appreciate it if you would offer more information
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