措辞
1选择生动准确词
词语言基单位表达思想选择适词语写作基求
词分般概念词(general words)具体概念词(specific words)表示般概念词含义模糊表示具体概念词含义明确表达准确生动形象写作时合理具体概念词够句子表达意思准确容生动更富感染力试较面组句子:
(l) a few houses were destroyed yesterday (general)
five houses burnt down yesterday (specific)
(2)his relatives gave him two gifts(general)
his aunt and uncle gave hima watch and a pen as the birthday gifts(specific)
(3) jack went to the window and looked at the crowd outside(general)
jack tiptoed to the window and peeped into the room(specific)
面组句中第句子抽象概括空泛感觉:第二句子词具体件感意思确切生动逼真
2英语成语语
长期语言程中积累量惯表达法成语语涵丰富语言生动活泼文章中适类短语避免语言单调贫乏句子生动富涵:
(l)george has lost his social position since his business failed.
改:george has come down in the world since his business failed
(2).maybe you have time to go to the cinemabut i have more importavt businessto attend to.
改:maybe you have time to go to the cinemabut i have other fish to fry.
3词宽度
词宽度反映出写作者掌握词汇量果掌握词汇量表达概念表达方法时换种说法:
the teachers maintained that the students should give up love for the sake ofleaming studentshoweverhold that fordidding love among college students is nogood.
两句话里谓语分maintainhold果换think表达意思相词宽度原文两句话中for the sake ofgive upis no good等词宽度表现
英语写作中意识适增加词宽度体现学致原文章取良效果
二句子样化
英语中思想句式表达效果会相想写出文章断变化句子结构形式
l长短句交
句子长短表达思想服务英语短句结构简单意思明白具生动活泼干脆利索表达效果长句结构复杂信息丰富表达成熟思想复杂概念味长句短句会文章显单调乏味影响文章总体效果科学交长短句句子结构变化样仅文章带顿挫起伏语言美感受理想修辞效果请面段话:
she returned to her office.there was a note under the door it was from mr may.he said he was waiting for her in the coffee room.and he bad not found her sister.hewas sorry to have missed her
段话连串短句读起单调呆板淡味文字更加生动意思更加明确改:
when she returned to her officethe found a note from mr may under the door.he said he was waiting for her in the coffee room and hadnt found her sister yetheadded that he was sorry to have missed her.
修改三句子长短读起感觉
学英语第册第十课 going home汽车驶 brunsnick车年轻见黄手帕时出现两行文字:
thensuddenlyall of the young people were up out of thelr seatsscreamlng andshouting and cryin doing small dances of joyall except vlngo.两句话长(23词)短(3词)彼衬托互凸现第句两and四ing词热闹喧哗气氛喧染极长句蜂回路转仅三词短句扑入读者双目沸腾场面顿时凝固余音未绝时外表冷漠心炙热难
2句子开头样化
谓宾系表英语基句型语领先句句型写作中避免形式单句子语开头时结构开头时妨变换:
(1)defeated in the minor exchangesi now play my queen of trumps.(分词短语做状语开头)
(2)there are two ways in which one can own a book.( there be句型开头)
(3)equally important is a good habit of reading(表语开头)
句语开句篇章中通改变句子开头文章会疏落致语言形式丰富采
3句子结构样化
写作中通句型结构变化增添文采强化表现力:
(l) the love of the liberty is the love of the othersthe love of power ls thelove of ourselves.
(行结构.类结构整齐紧凑句子生动鲜明语义贯通语势强劲力)
(2)the days when we suffered from oppression and exploitation are gone(样表达文字通语意突出)
改:gone are the days when we suffered fron oppression andexploitation.
(采倒装句结构充分体现出受剥削受压迫民解放扬眉吐气心情)
三观点切题结构合理
写作中重求求写作开门见山直入题写篇谈健康重性文章提示1健康重性2保持健康方法3法求文章应三然段写段开头必须提示容三段开头:
l.good health is important to everyone of us.
2.there are many ways which can help build up our health.
3.as for mei like running as well as playing basketball and football.
开门见山外述容必须提示保持致否文章语言算失败作般说类文章然段三部分组成题句述句结
句题句提示出述句提供观点证题句结句总结纳概括提句观点
总写出篇英语作文夕做助方法外需时入手勤写练提高写作水语言表达力
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