医学文英文摘容求技巧
1英文结构式摘构成容求
医学文摘结构式摘(structured abstract) 加mc master学床流行病学生物统计学教授haynes博士[3]1990年首先提出年美国科学纪事(ann intern med)率先采[4]统计目前世界60生物医学期刊采结构式摘国数医学期刊采4段式结构式摘目方法结果结[ 56 ]
11 目(objective)：文献[7]指出摘目简单重复文章题名应该提供研究背景国际医学期刊编辑委员会求[8]摘目中应简说明提出问题缘表明研究国外研究背景特国世界首次报道研究阐明容更重例豚鼠听力衰退模型aflp分子标记筛选(screening of aflp markers on the hearingloss model of guinea pig)英文摘目部分原译 to screen amplified fragment length polymorphism (aflp) markers by whole genome scanning on the hearingloss model of guinea pig and to reveal the molecular mechanism of presbycusis 重复题名外尚缺乏研究背景阐明宜修改 the long fragment deletion of mitochondria dna has important relation to hearing decline but the effect of factors including karyogene should not be neglected this study was designed to screen amplified fragment length polymorphism (aflp) markers by whole genome scanning on the hearingloss model of guinea pig and to reveal the molecular mechanism of presbycusis (国外研究显示线粒体dna片段缺失听力衰退具重关系排核基等素听力衰退作该研究获取扩增片段长度态性(aflp)标记揭示老年性耳聋分子发病机制)修改读者清晰解该项工作研究背景研究目非常明
12 方法(methods)：简说明研究课题基设计材料方法分组研究范围精确程度数取种统计学方法处理例原摘中未进行分组介绍修改方法较详实methods the vascular dementia (vd) rat model was established by permanent bilateral occlusion of both common carotid arteries the rats were divided into 4 groups randomly as control vd model (09 sodium chloride) edaravone (3 mgkg per day) and duxil groups (gastric perfusion 20 mgkg per day) after place navigation training the treatment was from the 7th day after operation and lasted for 20 d at the 1st and 2nd month the heads of rats were cut down for brain to measure the activity of cox and the change of genetic expression
13 结果(results)：简列出研究结果数置信值统计学显著性检验确切值列出意义数读者客观较研究结果信更具说服力[8]例results 3 and 7 d after mcao the neurological deficiency score in fns group (225±046 and 10±082 respectively) had no significant difference from those (233±082 and 143±079) at same time point in mcao group it was decreased to 050±055 at 14 d after mcao in fns group which was significantly different from 125±071 in mcao group (p<005) the level of of gap43 mrna expression in fns group at 12 h and 3 d posterior of mcao (070±023 and 144±062respectively) had no significant difference from those (057±025 and 118±042) in mcao group(p>005) at 7 d and 14 d time point they reached the height of 303±145 and 182±09 respectively in fns group significantly higher than 155±072 and 092±052 in mcao group(p<005)原文未提供具体统计学意义数修改更具说服力
14 结(conclusion)：简说明验证证取正确观点理价值应价值否推荐推广等例conclusion eeg doesn’t change necessarily with aging the elevation of slow wave power may be related to the mmse decline and mci
修改宜应价值加补充：it would help improve the diagnostic value of recognition function decline and provide a practical and feasible method for its prevention
2英文结构式摘写作技巧
医学科技文英文结构式摘写作需做简练准确逻辑性强读目然
21 标题：全文容高度概括采名词化结构(nominalization)应准确误表达文中心容恰分反映研究范围深度避免抽象标题中关时间数量等概念表达应做数字精确表达模糊含义词题目完整句子时省略冠词(aanthe)完整句子时量保留冠词般超10 实词
22 时态：表述文章写作目时般现时句型：动词定式+表述作关系效果价值等名词to study to evaluateto explore方法结果时结般现时
23 语态：般第三称动语态医学研究着重客观事物程描述整项活动更显出科学性时动语态句子结构较调节余利采必修辞手段扩句子信息量突出重概念问题事实结等容[9]
24 词：频繁缩写词名词作定语简化句型增信息密度行文简练结构紧凑医学英语特点派生词正式词汇名词化结构长句动句非
谓语动词专业性强等定相应专词文生义汉英字典作字面翻译应该参考国际通译名医学英语专字典译法骨性关节炎译inflammation of bone andjoint应译osteoarthritis短词代长词常词代生僻词书面语代口语定语中非谓语动词形式缩写词名词少句
25 关键词：36关键词建议mesh表中标准词汇
总篇确切表达医学科技文旨英文结构式摘需称时态术语数字单位等具体环节达谐统英文摘写作水提高需扩词汇量巩固语法知识英语国家行接触积累验摸索规律外时英文核心期刊文献特查阅检索美国medline数库相关文献摘助迅速提高英文摘写作水
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1英文结构式摘构成容求
医学文摘结构式摘(structured abstract) 加mc master学床流行病学生物统计学教授haynes博士[3]1990年首先提出年美国科学纪事(ann intern med)率先采[4]统计目前世界60生物医学期刊采结构式摘国数医学期刊采4段式结构式摘目方法结果结[ 56 ]
11 目(objective)：文献[7]指出摘目简单重复文章题名应该提供研究背景国际医学期刊编辑委员会求[8]摘目中应简说明提出问题缘表明研究国外研究背景特国世界首次报道研究阐明容更重例豚鼠听力衰退模型aflp分子标记筛选(screening of aflp markers on the hearingloss model of guinea pig)英文摘目部分原译 to screen amplified fragment length polymorphism (aflp) markers by whole genome scanning on the hearingloss model of guinea pig and to reveal the molecular mechanism of presbycusis 重复题名外尚缺乏研究背景阐明宜修改 the long fragment deletion of mitochondria dna has important relation to hearing decline but the effect of factors including karyogene should not be neglected this study was designed to screen amplified fragment length polymorphism (aflp) markers by whole genome scanning on the hearingloss model of guinea pig and to reveal the molecular mechanism of presbycusis (国外研究显示线粒体dna片段缺失听力衰退具重关系排核基等素听力衰退作该研究获取扩增片段长度态性(aflp)标记揭示老年性耳聋分子发病机制)修改读者清晰解该项工作研究背景研究目非常明
12 方法(methods)：简说明研究课题基设计材料方法分组研究范围精确程度数取种统计学方法处理例原摘中未进行分组介绍修改方法较详实methods the vascular dementia (vd) rat model was established by permanent bilateral occlusion of both common carotid arteries the rats were divided into 4 groups randomly as control vd model (09 sodium chloride) edaravone (3 mgkg per day) and duxil groups (gastric perfusion 20 mgkg per day) after place navigation training the treatment was from the 7th day after operation and lasted for 20 d at the 1st and 2nd month the heads of rats were cut down for brain to measure the activity of cox and the change of genetic expression
13 结果(results)：简列出研究结果数置信值统计学显著性检验确切值列出意义数读者客观较研究结果信更具说服力[8]例results 3 and 7 d after mcao the neurological deficiency score in fns group (225±046 and 10±082 respectively) had no significant difference from those (233±082 and 143±079) at same time point in mcao group it was decreased to 050±055 at 14 d after mcao in fns group which was significantly different from 125±071 in mcao group (p<005) the level of of gap43 mrna expression in fns group at 12 h and 3 d posterior of mcao (070±023 and 144±062respectively) had no significant difference from those (057±025 and 118±042) in mcao group(p>005) at 7 d and 14 d time point they reached the height of 303±145 and 182±09 respectively in fns group significantly higher than 155±072 and 092±052 in mcao group(p<005)原文未提供具体统计学意义数修改更具说服力
14 结(conclusion)：简说明验证证取正确观点理价值应价值否推荐推广等例conclusion eeg doesn’t change necessarily with aging the elevation of slow wave power may be related to the mmse decline and mci
修改宜应价值加补充：it would help improve the diagnostic value of recognition function decline and provide a practical and feasible method for its prevention
2英文结构式摘写作技巧
医学科技文英文结构式摘写作需做简练准确逻辑性强读目然
21 标题：全文容高度概括采名词化结构(nominalization)应准确误表达文中心容恰分反映研究范围深度避免抽象标题中关时间数量等概念表达应做数字精确表达模糊含义词题目完整句子时省略冠词(aanthe)完整句子时量保留冠词般超10 实词
22 时态：表述文章写作目时般现时句型：动词定式+表述作关系效果价值等名词to study to evaluateto explore方法结果时结般现时
23 语态：般第三称动语态医学研究着重客观事物程描述整项活动更显出科学性时动语态句子结构较调节余利采必修辞手段扩句子信息量突出重概念问题事实结等容[9]
24 词：频繁缩写词名词作定语简化句型增信息密度行文简练结构紧凑医学英语特点派生词正式词汇名词化结构长句动句非
谓语动词专业性强等定相应专词文生义汉英字典作字面翻译应该参考国际通译名医学英语专字典译法骨性关节炎译inflammation of bone andjoint应译osteoarthritis短词代长词常词代生僻词书面语代口语定语中非谓语动词形式缩写词名词少句
25 关键词：36关键词建议mesh表中标准词汇
总篇确切表达医学科技文旨英文结构式摘需称时态术语数字单位等具体环节达谐统英文摘写作水提高需扩词汇量巩固语法知识英语国家行接触积累验摸索规律外时英文核心期刊文献特查阅检索美国medline数库相关文献摘助迅速提高英文摘写作水
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