2011等学力申硕英语写作刺点
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等学力申硕英语写作评分标准
根等学力申硕英语考试纲规定求考生具备定写作力30分钟求写出篇100～120词短文形式提纲写短文描述图表写容提概述等
等学力英语写作评分标准围绕四方面评判：1容切题2正确表达思想
3意义连贯4重语法错误批改作文时容语言两方面进行综合评判容语言统体作文应表达题目规定容容通语言表达作文否切题否充分表达思想语言错误否造成理解障碍密切关系面评分标准四方面分加说明
（）容切题
目前常见作文题目中容切题般包括两方面写作容围绕题目规定话题展开A Fiveday Week（五天工作制）文章容应围绕五天工作制进行述关容跑题处种现象见二作文题中包括提纲：
Fire Accidents in Big Cities
Outline：
1Present Situation
2Causes
3Measures
种带提纲作文题目仅求考生根标题写作根提纲规定容范围展开段落思路发挥考生方面出问题较1994年考研作文题：On Making Friends（交友）三段提纲分：1The need for friends 2True Friendship 3My principle in making friends第三段提纲求考生围绕交友原进行议然考生段中样写道：
The former paragraph has shown my principle in making friends in some wayFurthermorewhat I want to say is that one good friend is enough
该考生应放第三段中述容写第二段中第三段没容写类命题作文求考生规定求写作想法意更改写段作文考生仅第三段没扣题第二段没做容切题篇容切题作文应围绕题目段扣准提纲真正符合容切题求面段学生作文第三段容切题恰扣住交友原写作求：
When I choose friendsI do not care what work they do or what social background they are frombut I do notice those little things which reveal ones charactersI would make sure that we really care for each otherso that no matter how much time goes by without seeing each otherI know my friends will always be thereready to help if I need themAnd
I know we are true friends indeed
（二）正确表达思想
篇短文读者目然文章思路应清楚逻辑性强准确表达作者思想请面两段：
Have you a bike？Taking a bike is a good waymost people thinkBut in university it seems not as good as other placesBikes are possible to be stolen now and thenHaving a bike isn’t always good enough for us to buy one
[Nextpage]
段作者思路紊乱清字里行间仅许语病没思想表达清楚读知作者表达什思想观点样段落0分请段：
It is very convenient to use bikes in ChinaBikes donneed fuelnor a garage or a large parking lotBikes can go through narrow streets and their prices are lowSo bikes are the most popular vehicles in China today段作者简单词汇简洁语言清楚思路正确表达思想读者观刻领会作者思想
正确表达思想考生应掌握写作技巧写段落题句展开段落方法写段尾句等外应掌握定词汇量惯表达法
（三）意义连贯
文章层次分明条理清楚文间词词句句间连贯前呼应文章结构严谨思路清晰条理
面段落篇文章第三段文章标题：Good Health提纲1Importance of good health2Ways to keep fit3My own practice根第三段提纲做法考生样写：
I dont eat meat muchEvery morning I take the long run and in my spare time I like playing tennis and volleyballIn this way I keep good health and lead a happy life
段基切题包括提纲点表达基清楚表达够连贯第句话读起感觉突然分析第句作者没意思表达清楚作者吃肉定含样意思：饮食素淡吃蔬菜水果吃肉少果层意思写出文章连贯性体现出作者第二句体育锻炼方面表明保持健康应段中层意思里加渡词会文章渡然流畅请面修改段落：
As for me（1）I enjoy a good health as I keep a simple diet with more vegetabl esfruit and less meatMoreoverI do some exercises whenever I have time such as long distance runningplaying tennis or volleyballAs a result（2）I have been a top student all through the four years in the universitySo good health is important to everyone（3）
（1）发挥承启作没样介词短语第二段渡第三段会显生硬（2）起连贯作述两方面保持健康方法介绍完应该进步
写出产生结果结果全段总结概括（3）文章标题开头起首尾呼应作
（四）重语法错误重语法错误
般指时态致语谓语单复数形式致词等问题存说明考生时英语学中少练写作甚没写作文出现种样语法错误理解考生应考前进行方面训练语法错误实践中纠正面举例常见错误
病句分析：
1So colleg e provid e the best condition for students
句谓语致句子意思泛指学学生提供学环境里语college应变复数类错误极常见
2Going to college does not followed that Well have a splendid future句语现分词短语全句意思：学表示未定会光辉灿烂does not应动词原型followS
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等学力培训 httpedu21cncomkcnet1840
等学力申硕英语写作评分标准
根等学力申硕英语考试纲规定求考生具备定写作力30分钟求写出篇100～120词短文形式提纲写短文描述图表写容提概述等
等学力英语写作评分标准围绕四方面评判：1容切题2正确表达思想
3意义连贯4重语法错误批改作文时容语言两方面进行综合评判容语言统体作文应表达题目规定容容通语言表达作文否切题否充分表达思想语言错误否造成理解障碍密切关系面评分标准四方面分加说明
（）容切题
目前常见作文题目中容切题般包括两方面写作容围绕题目规定话题展开A Fiveday Week（五天工作制）文章容应围绕五天工作制进行述关容跑题处种现象见二作文题中包括提纲：
Fire Accidents in Big Cities
Outline：
1Present Situation
2Causes
3Measures
种带提纲作文题目仅求考生根标题写作根提纲规定容范围展开段落思路发挥考生方面出问题较1994年考研作文题：On Making Friends（交友）三段提纲分：1The need for friends 2True Friendship 3My principle in making friends第三段提纲求考生围绕交友原进行议然考生段中样写道：
The former paragraph has shown my principle in making friends in some wayFurthermorewhat I want to say is that one good friend is enough
该考生应放第三段中述容写第二段中第三段没容写类命题作文求考生规定求写作想法意更改写段作文考生仅第三段没扣题第二段没做容切题篇容切题作文应围绕题目段扣准提纲真正符合容切题求面段学生作文第三段容切题恰扣住交友原写作求：
When I choose friendsI do not care what work they do or what social background they are frombut I do notice those little things which reveal ones charactersI would make sure that we really care for each otherso that no matter how much time goes by without seeing each otherI know my friends will always be thereready to help if I need themAnd
I know we are true friends indeed
（二）正确表达思想
篇短文读者目然文章思路应清楚逻辑性强准确表达作者思想请面两段：
Have you a bike？Taking a bike is a good waymost people thinkBut in university it seems not as good as other placesBikes are possible to be stolen now and thenHaving a bike isn’t always good enough for us to buy one
[Nextpage]
段作者思路紊乱清字里行间仅许语病没思想表达清楚读知作者表达什思想观点样段落0分请段：
It is very convenient to use bikes in ChinaBikes donneed fuelnor a garage or a large parking lotBikes can go through narrow streets and their prices are lowSo bikes are the most popular vehicles in China today段作者简单词汇简洁语言清楚思路正确表达思想读者观刻领会作者思想
正确表达思想考生应掌握写作技巧写段落题句展开段落方法写段尾句等外应掌握定词汇量惯表达法
（三）意义连贯
文章层次分明条理清楚文间词词句句间连贯前呼应文章结构严谨思路清晰条理
面段落篇文章第三段文章标题：Good Health提纲1Importance of good health2Ways to keep fit3My own practice根第三段提纲做法考生样写：
I dont eat meat muchEvery morning I take the long run and in my spare time I like playing tennis and volleyballIn this way I keep good health and lead a happy life
段基切题包括提纲点表达基清楚表达够连贯第句话读起感觉突然分析第句作者没意思表达清楚作者吃肉定含样意思：饮食素淡吃蔬菜水果吃肉少果层意思写出文章连贯性体现出作者第二句体育锻炼方面表明保持健康应段中层意思里加渡词会文章渡然流畅请面修改段落：
As for me（1）I enjoy a good health as I keep a simple diet with more vegetabl esfruit and less meatMoreoverI do some exercises whenever I have time such as long distance runningplaying tennis or volleyballAs a result（2）I have been a top student all through the four years in the universitySo good health is important to everyone（3）
（1）发挥承启作没样介词短语第二段渡第三段会显生硬（2）起连贯作述两方面保持健康方法介绍完应该进步
写出产生结果结果全段总结概括（3）文章标题开头起首尾呼应作
（四）重语法错误重语法错误
般指时态致语谓语单复数形式致词等问题存说明考生时英语学中少练写作甚没写作文出现种样语法错误理解考生应考前进行方面训练语法错误实践中纠正面举例常见错误
病句分析：
1So colleg e provid e the best condition for students
句谓语致句子意思泛指学学生提供学环境里语college应变复数类错误极常见
2Going to college does not followed that Well have a splendid future句语现分词短语全句意思：学表示未定会光辉灿烂does not应动词原型followS
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