英语写日记
写作务
假定李华某英文报社Your diaries — a touching moment专栏正征稿意参加请写篇日记记录受感动件事投稿点包括：
1 事件
2 感受
注意：词数120 左右（日记开头已出计入总词数）
写作指导
审题定调
写作务求写篇日记记述触动心瞬间属应文
日记通常两部分组成书端正文书端专门记录日记星期日期天气情况通常正文方左边（顶格）星期日期右边天天气情况日记正文日记部分写作务言时间线索事件发生先序记述通议说明感受
日记常第称谈象时根实际情况采相应称记录容通常已发生时态
二谋篇布局
写作务书端正文开头已出需写出正文部分包括两部分：
第部分：具体讲述事发生程（交代清楚六素）
第二部分：总结感想（说明感受）
范文展示
普通范文
Sunday Jan 5 Sunny
Today was a day that I will never forget because I experienced something so warm and touching
After my friend’s birthday party I went to the bus station When the bus came I got on and didn’t notice I was not on the right bus When the bus stopped I got off and realised I was in an unfamiliar place As it was getting dark I felt scared Suddenly I saw car lights and heard someone saying gently Can I help you It was a female driver After learning about my trouble she offered me a ride for free With her help I got home safely
I was so thankful for her help I decided I would try my best to help others in need in my life as well
高级范文
Sunday Jan 5 Sunny
Today was a day that I will never forget because I experienced something so warm and touching
Stepping out after my friend’s birthday party I was soon on my way to the bus station However I got on the wrong bus by mistake When the bus stopped I realised I was in a place that was not familiar As it was getting dark the anxiety in my heart grew Suddenly I saw car lights getting nearer and a gentle voice came out of the dark Can I help you It was a female driver After learning about my concerns she offered me a lift for free Thanks to her I returned home safe and sound eventually
How grateful I was I decided I would spare no effort to help others in need and pass this kindness on to other people
实战演练
假定李华作文课班外教Mr Smith求A special day in my life题写篇日记点包括：
1 事件
2 感受
注意：词数120 左右（日记开头已出计入总词数）
Monday Jan 13 Windy
There are some days that are quite special in everyone’s life I had a very special day on which I learned a lot
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
答案
Monday Jan 13 Windy
There are some days that are quite special in everyone’s life I had a very special day on which I learned a lot
I will remember a dangerous accident happening on a hot summer day forever when my family went to a swimming pool When I was wandering along the pool I was hit by a boy accidentally and fell into the pool I was so afraid that I shouted for help at once and struggled to reach the bank But the sudden fall made me drink a lot of water Just then my father rushed to me and said Calm down and try to keep your balance Hearing these words I made myself cool down and finally made it
This unforgettable experience is still fresh in my mind today It tells me that staying calm is very important when facing a dangerous situation
文档香网(httpswwwxiangdangnet)户传
《香当网》用户分享的内容，不代表《香当网》观点或立场，请自行判断内容的真实性和可靠性！
该内容是文档的文本内容，更好的格式请下载文档
写作务
假定李华某英文报社Your diaries — a touching moment专栏正征稿意参加请写篇日记记录受感动件事投稿点包括：
1 事件
2 感受
注意：词数120 左右（日记开头已出计入总词数）
写作指导
审题定调
写作务求写篇日记记述触动心瞬间属应文
日记通常两部分组成书端正文书端专门记录日记星期日期天气情况通常正文方左边（顶格）星期日期右边天天气情况日记正文日记部分写作务言时间线索事件发生先序记述通议说明感受
日记常第称谈象时根实际情况采相应称记录容通常已发生时态
二谋篇布局
写作务书端正文开头已出需写出正文部分包括两部分：
第部分：具体讲述事发生程（交代清楚六素）
第二部分：总结感想（说明感受）
范文展示
普通范文
Sunday Jan 5 Sunny
Today was a day that I will never forget because I experienced something so warm and touching
After my friend’s birthday party I went to the bus station When the bus came I got on and didn’t notice I was not on the right bus When the bus stopped I got off and realised I was in an unfamiliar place As it was getting dark I felt scared Suddenly I saw car lights and heard someone saying gently Can I help you It was a female driver After learning about my trouble she offered me a ride for free With her help I got home safely
I was so thankful for her help I decided I would try my best to help others in need in my life as well
高级范文
Sunday Jan 5 Sunny
Today was a day that I will never forget because I experienced something so warm and touching
Stepping out after my friend’s birthday party I was soon on my way to the bus station However I got on the wrong bus by mistake When the bus stopped I realised I was in a place that was not familiar As it was getting dark the anxiety in my heart grew Suddenly I saw car lights getting nearer and a gentle voice came out of the dark Can I help you It was a female driver After learning about my concerns she offered me a lift for free Thanks to her I returned home safe and sound eventually
How grateful I was I decided I would spare no effort to help others in need and pass this kindness on to other people
实战演练
假定李华作文课班外教Mr Smith求A special day in my life题写篇日记点包括：
1 事件
2 感受
注意：词数120 左右（日记开头已出计入总词数）
Monday Jan 13 Windy
There are some days that are quite special in everyone’s life I had a very special day on which I learned a lot
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
答案
Monday Jan 13 Windy
There are some days that are quite special in everyone’s life I had a very special day on which I learned a lot
I will remember a dangerous accident happening on a hot summer day forever when my family went to a swimming pool When I was wandering along the pool I was hit by a boy accidentally and fell into the pool I was so afraid that I shouted for help at once and struggled to reach the bank But the sudden fall made me drink a lot of water Just then my father rushed to me and said Calm down and try to keep your balance Hearing these words I made myself cool down and finally made it
This unforgettable experience is still fresh in my mind today It tells me that staying calm is very important when facing a dangerous situation
文档香网(httpswwwxiangdangnet)户传
《香当网》用户分享的内容，不代表《香当网》观点或立场，请自行判断内容的真实性和可靠性！
该内容是文档的文本内容，更好的格式请下载文档