写求助信
写作务
假定李华正新西兰某校做交换生弘扬中国传统音乐校中国交
换生举办场音乐会请友 Fred 写封邮件请关事宜予帮助点包括：
1 举办目
2 求助容
3 约定时间点
注意：1 词数 100 左右（开头结尾已出计入总词数）2 适增加细节
行文连贯
Dear Fred
Yours
Li Hua
写作指导
审题定调
写作务求友写封邮件音乐会关事宜请方予帮助体裁属应
文
二谋篇布局
写作务开头结尾已出根提示正文分三部分：
第部分：表明写信意图
第二部分：说明问题提出请求
第三部分：表达感谢期回复
三组织语言
第部分：表明写信意图
普通表达 I’m writing to ask you for some help with
高级表达
★ I wonder if you could do me a favor and help with
★ I am sorry to bother you but I have to ask you for to do me a favor
第二部分：说明问题提出请求
★ To help those who we plan to hold such a concert
★ To make the concert I need your help
★ I’d like you to help
普通表达 ★ We’re in need of and I hope you can talk to the school music club so they
can provide for us
★ If possible let’s discuss it together
★ I believe you can help make the concert
高级表达
★ The concert aims to (想) help learn more about
★ I’d appreciate it if you could help
★ Lacking I sincerely hope you can contact the school music club so they can
provide for us
★ I wonder am wondering if it’s convenient for us to have a discussion
together
★ With your generous help I believe the concert
第三部分：表达感谢期回复
★ I’d be thankful
普通表达
★ Thank you for your kindness
★ Looking forward to your reply
★ Please reply to me as soon as possible
★ I’d appreciate any help
高级表达
★ I would appreciate it if you could lend me a helping hand
★ Thanks for your time and I’m looking forward to your early reply
★ Your early reply would be highly appreciated
范文展示
普通范文
Dear Fred
I’m writing to ask you for some help with the Chinese traditional music concert to be held in
our school
To help those who are interested in Chinese traditional music learn more about it we plan to
hold such a concert To make the concert more attractive I need your help First I’d like you to
help advertise the concert Moreover we’re in need of some equipment and I hope you can talk to
the school music club so they can provide some for us If possible let’s discuss it together in our
classroom tomorrow afternoon I believe you can help make the concert unforgettable
Thank you for your kindness Looking forward to your reply
Yours
Li Hua
高级范文
Dear Fred
I wonder if you could do me a favor and help with the preparation of the concert to be held in
our school
The concert aims to help foreign students learn more about Chinese traditional music First
I’d appreciate it if you could help advertise it Moreover lacking some equipment I sincerely
hope you can contact the school music club so they can provide some for us I wonder if it’s
convenient for us to have a discussion together in our classroom tomorrow afternoon With your
generous help I believe the concert will be unforgettable
Thanks for your time and I’m looking forward to your early reply
Yours
Li Hua
实战演练
假定校英语报兼职编辑李华请外教 Miss Christine 写封邮件请新开
设栏目 Sharing Feelings 提建议点包括：
1 栏目介绍
2 求助容
3 栏目意义
注意：1 词数 100 左右2 适增加细节行文连贯
答案
One possible version
Dear Miss Christine
I’m writing with the hope that you can give us some advice on the newlyopened column
Sharing Feelings of our school English newspaper
The column aims to help students express their feelings on their school life and their inner
mind As you are popular with the students and know quite a lot about them you surely have some
wonderful ideas about the specific content and how to make it benefit the students more This
column will help students release stress and enjoy a better school life I believe your advice will
make this column more beneficial
Thanks for your time and I’m looking forward to your early reply
Yours sincerely
Li Hua
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写作务
假定李华正新西兰某校做交换生弘扬中国传统音乐校中国交
换生举办场音乐会请友 Fred 写封邮件请关事宜予帮助点包括：
1 举办目
2 求助容
3 约定时间点
注意：1 词数 100 左右（开头结尾已出计入总词数）2 适增加细节
行文连贯
Dear Fred
Yours
Li Hua
写作指导
审题定调
写作务求友写封邮件音乐会关事宜请方予帮助体裁属应
文
二谋篇布局
写作务开头结尾已出根提示正文分三部分：
第部分：表明写信意图
第二部分：说明问题提出请求
第三部分：表达感谢期回复
三组织语言
第部分：表明写信意图
普通表达 I’m writing to ask you for some help with
高级表达
★ I wonder if you could do me a favor and help with
★ I am sorry to bother you but I have to ask you for to do me a favor
第二部分：说明问题提出请求
★ To help those who we plan to hold such a concert
★ To make the concert I need your help
★ I’d like you to help
普通表达 ★ We’re in need of and I hope you can talk to the school music club so they
can provide for us
★ If possible let’s discuss it together
★ I believe you can help make the concert
高级表达
★ The concert aims to (想) help learn more about
★ I’d appreciate it if you could help
★ Lacking I sincerely hope you can contact the school music club so they can
provide for us
★ I wonder am wondering if it’s convenient for us to have a discussion
together
★ With your generous help I believe the concert
第三部分：表达感谢期回复
★ I’d be thankful
普通表达
★ Thank you for your kindness
★ Looking forward to your reply
★ Please reply to me as soon as possible
★ I’d appreciate any help
高级表达
★ I would appreciate it if you could lend me a helping hand
★ Thanks for your time and I’m looking forward to your early reply
★ Your early reply would be highly appreciated
范文展示
普通范文
Dear Fred
I’m writing to ask you for some help with the Chinese traditional music concert to be held in
our school
To help those who are interested in Chinese traditional music learn more about it we plan to
hold such a concert To make the concert more attractive I need your help First I’d like you to
help advertise the concert Moreover we’re in need of some equipment and I hope you can talk to
the school music club so they can provide some for us If possible let’s discuss it together in our
classroom tomorrow afternoon I believe you can help make the concert unforgettable
Thank you for your kindness Looking forward to your reply
Yours
Li Hua
高级范文
Dear Fred
I wonder if you could do me a favor and help with the preparation of the concert to be held in
our school
The concert aims to help foreign students learn more about Chinese traditional music First
I’d appreciate it if you could help advertise it Moreover lacking some equipment I sincerely
hope you can contact the school music club so they can provide some for us I wonder if it’s
convenient for us to have a discussion together in our classroom tomorrow afternoon With your
generous help I believe the concert will be unforgettable
Thanks for your time and I’m looking forward to your early reply
Yours
Li Hua
实战演练
假定校英语报兼职编辑李华请外教 Miss Christine 写封邮件请新开
设栏目 Sharing Feelings 提建议点包括：
1 栏目介绍
2 求助容
3 栏目意义
注意：1 词数 100 左右2 适增加细节行文连贯
答案
One possible version
Dear Miss Christine
I’m writing with the hope that you can give us some advice on the newlyopened column
Sharing Feelings of our school English newspaper
The column aims to help students express their feelings on their school life and their inner
mind As you are popular with the students and know quite a lot about them you surely have some
wonderful ideas about the specific content and how to make it benefit the students more This
column will help students release stress and enjoy a better school life I believe your advice will
make this column more beneficial
Thanks for your time and I’m looking forward to your early reply
Yours sincerely
Li Hua
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《香当网》用户分享的内容，不代表《香当网》观点或立场，请自行判断内容的真实性和可靠性！
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