高中英语书面表达
纳提炼总结点练
◆ 列出纳提炼总结点补充成句：
提纲容逻辑（事情发生先果关系等）罗列出补语等完成基句子
点式作文包括点完整式点发展式点完整式指书面表达题目求容已相完整表述清楚考生需根求容补充完整清楚逐翻译增加写作合适开头结尾完成写作务点发展式指题目点（求）笼统总结概括式容具体求考生根容适发挥拓展出容
．点完整式
1 书面表达
假定李华计划美国学计算机科学请美国朋友Peter写封电子邮件询问相关信息：
1 需参加种英语考试
2 学期需修课程数学费
3 食宿费
4 合适学校
注意：1 词数100左右
2 适增加细节行文连贯
3 邮件开头结尾已写计入总词数
纳提炼总结点：
1．计划美国学计算机科学
2．信息您咨询
3．需参加种英语考试
4．学期需修课程数学费
5．美国学期间食宿费少？
6．想您推荐合适学校
根点逻辑补充合适容连贯：
1 _______________________________________________________________________
2 _______________________________________________________________________
3 _______________________________________________________________________
4 _______________________________________________________________________
范文1
Dear Peter
How are you
As you know I’m quite interested in computer science I plan to go and study it in the United Sates So I’m writing to ask you for some information about the matter
First of all I want to know how to prepare for that as an international student For example what kind of test is required for admission Second I’m admitted to a university how many courses do I have to take each term and how much do I have to pay a term Finally how much should I prepare for food and housing Since I know very little about American universities it would be great if you could be kind enough to suggest some universities suitable for me
Looking forward to your reply
范文2
Dear David
How are you
I meant to write to you for some time I have planned to go abroad to study computer science in the United States Computer science is one of the most popular major nowadays I would like to know some information about the following
1 what required English examination should I take before I enter the university
2 how many required courses in my major shall I learn every term and how much
3 how much the expenses of bed and board will a student in the university to spent
4 I want to enter a university where there are well staff enough equipment and if there is any scholar Please give me your advice
I am looking forward to your reply Thank you very much
Yours
Li Hua
Dear David
How are you
．书面表达
假学校英语爱者俱乐部良饮食惯话题进行讨请根
列提示英语写篇发言稿容点应包括：
部分学饮食惯
良饮食惯
法
吃早餐
爱吃零食
偏食
饮食量
饮食样化饮
食定时定量
助身体健康
…
注意：
1 发言稿必须包括容点适发挥
2 发言稿开头结尾已写计入总词数
3 词数：100左右
4 参考词汇 偏食 be particular about food 零食 snack
Dear friends
As we all know we are what we eat Therefore it’s very important for us to form healthy eating habits
____________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________
纳提炼总结点：
1 吃早餐 →发展成句：___________________________________________________
2 爱吃零食 →发展成句：____________________________________________________
3 偏食 →发展成句：__________________________________________________
4 饮食量 →发展成句：____________________________________________________
5 饮食样化饮 →发展成句：___________________________________________________
6 食定时定量 →发展成句：__________________________________________________
7 助身体健康→发展成句：_________________________________________________
8 …… →发展成句：__________________________________________________
参范文1
Dear friends
As we all know we are what we eat Therefore it＇s a very important for us to form healthy eating habits
However bad eating habits are still very common among us students Some of us often go to school without breakfast some like to have snacks some others are particular about food and still some eat or drink too much All these bad habits will surely do harm to our health
To keep fit we should have various healthy diets which generally include proper amounts of fish meat vegetables fruit as well as main food Besides we＇d better have meals regularly
In my opinion we should try to develop healthy eating habits to build up a strong body Only in this way can we have enough energy to study better
That＇s all Thank you
参范文2
Dear friends
As we all know we are what we eat Therefore it’s very important for us to form healthy eating habits Some of us enjoy snacks instead of breakfast Some are particular about food They usually overeat what they like to eat
The eating habits mentioned above are bad for our health Most of the snacks we eat are junk food which may make us overweight and even suffer from disease
What are the good eating habits like First I think we should choose healthy diet Besides we can＇t eat too much to be too full In addition eating a variety of food and eating food regularly are also important to keep fit
That＇s all Thank you
二．书面表达．汉语中句谚语志者事竟成请题描写志气学点面表格：
姓名
陈林
性
男
年龄
18
年级
高三
志
清华学物理系
事迹
1 幼父母双亡叔叔带家境贫寒
2 学刻苦成绩直优秀
3 年参加世界中学生物理奥赛夺金牌祖国争光
启示
……
注意：1 词数100左右
2 根容点适增加细节行文连贯
纳提炼总结点：
1．陈林性年龄读年级→发展成句：_____________________________________
2．志清华学物理系→发展成句：___________________________________________
3．幼父母双亡叔叔带家境贫寒
→发展成句：_____________________________________________________________
4．学刻苦成绩直优秀→发展成句：_________________________________________
5．年参加世界中学生物理奥赛夺金牌祖国争光
→发展成句：___________________________________________________________
6．启示……：__________________________________________________
参考范文：
Where there is will there is a way
Where there is will there is a way Do you believe this proverb Perhaps my classmate Chen Lin a senior 3 boy of eighteen years old can prove it through his experiences
Life is very hard for Chen Lin His parents died when he was only a little child and he was brought up by his uncle His living conditions are worse than most of us He once said I want to go to Qinghua University to study physics What a great ambition
Encouraged by the great will he studies very hard He won the gold medal in the World Olympic Physics Competition this year winning a great honor for our motherland
Chen Lin has set a good example for us I am sure his dream will come true for Where there is will there is a way
三．书面表达．
假设某中学学生会席李华校国际学样常举办联谊活动计划重阳节组织学生养老院慰问老拟邀请国际学校学生参加请根容点国际学样学生会席Tony写封信
点： 老赠送礼物（鲜花制贺卡……）
老提供服务（做清洁陪老聊天……）
老表演节目（唱歌跳舞……）
注意： 1词数100左右
2信开关结尾已写（计入写词数）
3已出信开关结尾抄入答题卡 （容抄入答题卡）
Dear Tony
Chongyang the traditional Chinese festival for the elderly is coming around We are planning to visit the Nursing Home to celebrate the special day and we would like to invite students from your school to join us
…
Look forward to your early reply
Yours
Li Hua
纳提炼总结点：
1 _______________________________________________________________________
2 _______________________________________________________________________
3 _______________________________________________________________________
4 _______________________________________________________________________
We have planned several activities When we get therewe will visit the elderly in their rooms in groupspresenting them with flowers and self－made cards to show our respect and love Then we will do some cleaning and washing for them with the help of the nurses
As some old people feel lonely We may chat with them about their old days changes of our city or anything they are interested in We may also give them some performances singing dancing and so on
I am sure we will both gain a better understanding of the elderly in China If you have any suggestions please let us know
五．书面表达
2007年4月29日午10点11点全国亿万学生阳光体育活动中学校时进行江苏省1100万学生积极参项活动
教育部倡导学生：
天锻炼时
健康工作五十年
幸福生活辈子
请根提示英语准备份发言稿学讲述阳光体育活动关情况高三学生否需天花时锻炼谈谈法理
注意：
发言稿应包括信息适发挥
词数：120左右发言稿开头结尾已写计入总词数
参考词汇：阳光体育活动——a national student sports program
教育部——the Ministry of Education
Good afternoon everyone
____________________________________________________________________
Thank you
纳提炼总结点：
1 _______________________________________________________________________
2 _______________________________________________________________________
3 _______________________________________________________________________
4 _______________________________________________________________________
Good afternoon everyone
On the morning of April 29 2007 from 1000 to 1100 hundreds of millions of students from primary middle schools and universities all over China joined in a national student sports program Eleven million students in Jiangsu took an active part in this program
The Ministry of Education calls on students to exercise for an hour every day in the hope that they will have good health to work fifty years and enjoy the whole life
Personally I think it a good idea for us senior 3 students to have daily exercise Although we take an hour a day for exercise it is well worth it Taking exercise helps us build up our body and keep a clear mind Therefore we can work more efficiently
Thank you (125词)
六．书面表达
班级举办次题What Can We Do for Our School英语演讲赛请写篇英语演讲稿求四方面中选二进行阐述举例加说明
1 关心
2 美化校园
3 受护学校设施
4 营造良学氛围
注意：
1 书面表达中出现学校校名姓名否节判零分
2 词数：100左右
3 参考词汇：
爱心——love and care校园——campus 设施——facilities 氛围——environment
4开头结尾已写记入词数
Hello everyone It’s nice to speak about what we can do for our school and I think each of us can do something
……
Thank you for listening
纳提炼总结点：
1 _______________________________________________________________________
2 _______________________________________________________________________
3 _______________________________________________________________________
4 _______________________________________________________________________
Hello everyone It’s nice to speak about what we can do for our school and I think each of us can do something
The first thing we can do is to make our campus more beautiful Every one of us may plant a tree in the school or organize a thorough cleaning on the campus We can also form a good habit of putting the rubbish in the trashcan
The second thing we can do is to protect the facilities in our school When we leave the classroom we should never forget to turn off the light or close the door We should not leave the tap water running or waste any materials in the laboratory class
If everyone does one thing for our school I believe we will turn our school into a better place to Study and live in
Thank you for listening
七．书面表达
学生活开始面新学生活环境请根提示写篇英语短文谈谈算安排学生活容点应包括：
确定新学目标
改进学方法
学会独立生活
参加种课外活动
处理学关系
注意：（1）短文容连贯完整
（2）短文单词数：100左右（开头已出单词计入单词总数）
纳提炼总结点：
1 _______________________________________________________________________
2 _______________________________________________________________________
3 _______________________________________________________________________
4 _______________________________________________________________________
I will go to college in the near future After I enter college I plan to set new goals in my study and improve my way of learning What’s more as I am away from my parents it is necessary for me to learn to live on my own such as doing some washing and cleaning by myself In my spare time I will take part in different kinds of school activities for example I will often go to the English Corner to practice my spoken English In addition I need to get along well with my classmates and teaches at college I think I will have a wonderful college life (102 words)
八．书面表达
假定李华希通外籍教师Peter找英语笔友请写封短信描述理想中笔友条件说明什选样笔友具体条件包括：
1 年龄
2 性
3 爱（旅游运动宠物等）
注意：1．词数100 左右
2． 适增加细节行文连贯
3． 开头语已写
Dear Peter
I am writing to ask whether you are able to do me a favor
Best regards
Li Hua
纳提炼总结点：
1 _______________________________________________________________________
2 _______________________________________________________________________
3 _______________________________________________________________________
4 _______________________________________________________________________
Dear Peter
I’m writing to ask whether you are able to do me a favor
I want to have a pen friend hopefully a girl in her early twenties and with interests similar to mine In my mind she is someone who is interested in traveling swimming and playing table tennis Besides it would be better for her to have a pet dog as I have kept one at home for some time With such a pen friend I think I can share with her our traveling experiences taking care of pets or whatever we have in common And I believe I will improve my English by doing so and learn more about her country
I look forward to hearing from you soon
Best regards
Li Hua
九．书面表达
假设李华英国笔友Henry 信询问高考暑期安排请胸根点英语回封信说明计划简述理
1．休息 2读书 3陪伴父母 4参加社会活动
注意：1词数100左右信开头结尾已写（计入总词数）
2 根容点适增加细节行文连贯
3 参考词汇：
高考——college entrance examination
社会活动——social activities
Dear Henry
I’m glad to receive your letter
Best wishes
Li Hua
纳提炼总结点：
1 _______________________________________________________________________
2 _______________________________________________________________________
3 _______________________________________________________________________
4 _______________________________________________________________________
I’m glad to receive your letter It’s a pleasure for me to tell you my plan of this coming summer vacation after the college entrance examination
First of all a good rest is needed because I do feel tired after the hard work of all these years Of course I’ll do some reading for fun and for knowledge as well I’ll spend some time staying with my parents chatting with them and doing some housework They’ve done so much for me you know If possible I’ll take part in some social activities so that I can know more about the society
Best wishes
Li Hua
十．书面表达
报道7岁美国女孩Amy Bruce知身患肺癌（lung cancer）处极度痛苦中美国抗癌协会（ACS）决定Amy收封慰问信增加3美分治疗款
假新华中学学生李华请英文Amy写封慰问信容包括：
l 介绍
l 知情况
l 表示鼓励
l 算做什
l 祝早日康复
注意：
1 信格式已写
2 信中出现真实情况
3 词数100左右
4 请答题卡作答
纳提炼总结点：
1 _______________________________________________________________________
2 _______________________________________________________________________
3 _______________________________________________________________________
4 _______________________________________________________________________
Dear Amy
I am a student from Xinhua Middle School I am very sorry to have heard of your present situation that you are so bitter after having a lung cancer
At present ACS decides that it will give you three cents when you receive a letter That will offer you so much courage I hope you will make efforts to overcome all kinds of difficulty no matter how hard it is You are sure to make it
I will try my best to ask all my friends schoolmates and relatives to write letters to you which may help you It will give more courage to live on
May you recover soon
Yours
Li Hua
十．书面表达
假设王李华窗友请根列点英文李华写篇毕业留言
点：1 简表述李华心目中印象
2 两相关事例进行具体描述
3 李华表示美祝愿
注意：1 容积极语意连贯结构完整词数120左右
2 写成诗歌形式真实姓名学校名称
纳提炼总结点：
1 _______________________________________________________________________
2 _______________________________________________________________________
3 _______________________________________________________________________
4 _______________________________________________________________________
Li Hua
It’s time to say goodbye It’s time to recall those beautiful days we spend together You are the very person who gives me a hand when necessary You are the most considerate person who knows exactly what I need
Still remember that night two years ago When I suddenly fell ill it was you who carried me on your back to a nearby hospital You took good care of me while I was having an injection Later you managed to help me with my lessons Without your help I would have failed in the examination
I still have hundreds of stories to share with you I still have thousands of blessings for you May all your dreams come true May our friendship last till the end of the universe
Yours
Wang Ping
二．点发展式
1 书面表达
假设李华美国友学校准备学校创办份中学生英文刊物该校格林先生信询问关情况请写封回信容：
1．表示赞成
2．提出喜欢栏目
3．简说明理
注意：
1．词数100左右
2．信开头结尾已写
3．适增加细节行文连贯
4．参考词汇：栏目 column
﹡ ﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡
June 8
Dear Mr Green
I am very excited to learn that we are going to start a magazine together
________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours faithfully
Li Hua
纳提炼总结点：
1 表示赞成→发展成句：________________________________________________________
2 提出喜欢栏目→发展成句：________________________________________________
1）_________________________ 补：_________________________
2）_________________________ 补：_________________________
3 简说明理→发展成句：___________________________________________________
1）_________________________
2）_________________________
4 发表前景法：________________________________________________________________
June 8
Dear Mr Green
I am very excited to learn that we are going to start a magazine together It is indeed a wonderful idea and everyone hopes for its success
I would like the magazine to have three columns News Teachers＇ Advice and Students＇ Voice From the News column we can learn about what is going on in both of our schools In Teachers＇ Advice our teachers can give us such help as we may not be able to get in the classroom Students＇ Voice will allow us to freely express our thoughts and feelings about our lives and studies
I believe that this magazine will surely strengthen our ties and I am looking forward to reading it
Yours faithfully
Li Hua
2．书面表达
假定李华班学开通博客（blog）家长老师认开博客浪费时间精力持反意见请话题报社编辑写封信容包括：
1 开博客热潮受质疑
2．表明法
3 陈述理（少两条）
注意：1 适增加细节行文连贯
2．词数100左右（文章开头线束语已写计入总词数）
Dear editor
At present blog has become very popular ________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
纳提炼总结点：
1 开博客热潮 班学开通博客（blog）
→发展成句：________________________________________________________
2 受质疑 家长老师认开博客浪费时间精力持反意见
→发展成句：________________________________________________
1）_________________________ 补：_________________________
2）_________________________ 补：_________________________
3 表明法→发展成句：___________________________________________________
1）_________________________
2）_________________________
4 陈述理（少两条）____________________________________________________
1）_________________________
2）_________________________
范文：
Dear editor
At present blog has become very popular A lot of students in my class have created their own blogs and often visit others’ bolgs Many parents and teachers are strongly against it They think it is a waste of time and energy
However I love the idea that we students have blogs of our own Anyone can create his own blog as he wishes Blogs have no fixed rules and don’t call for professional knowledge and skills to manage it So we can express our inner voice freely on the blog and share our thoughts with others What’s more blog covers all kinds of topics from daily life to political forums from individual thoughts to world events So blogs can also help release our pressure of study and entertain us when we are tired
In short I am for creating blogs
班学开通博客家长老师认开博客浪费时间精力持反意见认开通微博件事：
1微博开阔视野
2劳逸结合
3增长见识
认开通微博合理应合理
假设李华读美国中学生Jack博客时解作名交换生北京学希够寄宿名擅长英语中学生家里便更解中国文化请根点Jack 写封电子邮件：
1 欢迎中国学
2 介绍情况
3 邀请住家表示愿意提供帮助
注意：1 适增加细节行文连贯
2．词数100左右（文章开头线束语已写计入总词数）
Dear Jack
I’m very glad to learn that you’re coming to Beijing as an exchange student and want to stay ina local home with a middle school student who can speak excellent English
I’m a high school student and its my sincere hope that you can stay with me I am good at
English and can communicate with foreigners fluently Besides I like reading and traveling in my spare time so if you are with us I can take you around Beijing and let you know more about
our brilliant Chinese culture Both my parents and I are friendly and enthusiastic in personality
So I believe we can be good friends I’m sure I will do what I can to help you with your Chinese
I’m looking forward to your coming
Best wishes
Yours
Li Hua
书面表达
假定李华外籍教师Smith先生预约昨天午3点办公室请教学英语未赴约请写封电子邮件
容包括：
1 未赴约致歉
2 解释未赴约具体原
3 希重新预约
注意
1 词数100左右
2 适增加细节行文连贯
3 邮件开头结尾已写
One possible version
Dear Mr Smith
I’m writing to beg you to excuse me for missing our appointment at 3 yesterday afternoon when you intended to give me advice on English learning I’m sorry for the inconvenience it caused to you
You may be unwilling to accept an explanation However I don’t want you to misunderstand me On my way to your office I happened to see a car accident An old man was badly injured but nobody came to offer help So I stopped a taxi and sent him to a nearby hospital I stayed there for several hours until his son came and that caused me to miss our appointment
I am aware that our appointment is of great importance I do hope that you would be kind enough to spare your valuable time to meet me again
Looking forward to hearing from you
Yours
Li Hua
Ｉ）作文题目：
假李华发现校园存许严重浪费现象请英语写篇倡议书号召学做起杜绝浪费
1 浪费现象
2 危害
3 提出制止浪费现象措施
注意：
1 容包含点适发挥
2 信开头结尾已写
3 词数：１２０－１５０（已出部分计入总词数）
Dear fellow students
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
Li Hua
II）伴讨完成列问题
1文章体裁称时态分什？
____________________________________________________________________
2文章分成段？段短语句型？
____________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________
III) 作文写作文纸左半部
III Postwriting
1 位互批直线划出三Good Sentences (GS)波浪线划出三Bad Sentences (BS)
GS1________________________________________________________________
GS2________________________________________________________________
GS3________________________________________________________________
BS1________________________________________________________________
BS2________________________________________________________________
BS3________________________________________________________________
2 位讨改写三BS
1) _________________________________________________________________
2) _________________________________________________________________
3) _________________________________________________________________
3 改写作文写作文纸右半部
Homework
作文纸交（两次作文）
参考范文
Dear fellow students
With the improvement of our living standards there is a lot of waste on our campus For example the students often leave with the lights on in the daytime water running after washing and remaining food on the table So it is high time that we dealt with the problem
Firstly the bad habit of being wasteful will have a bad influence Secondly it adds financial burden to our parents Lastly it is also a kind of exhaustion of the world’s limited natural resources water and electricity
In my opinion it is everybody’s business to fight against waste On the one hand I should start with myself to save everything On the other hand I’d like to remind my friends here to take the lead in reducing the waste Therefore I’m sure that with everyone doing his bit to fight against waste we will make a difference Only in this way can we help to change the present situation
Li Hua
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．点完整式
1 书面表达
假定李华计划美国学计算机科学请美国朋友Peter写封电子邮件询问相关信息：
1 需参加种英语考试
2 学期需修课程数学费
3 食宿费
4 合适学校
注意：1 词数100左右
2 适增加细节行文连贯
3 邮件开头结尾已写计入总词数
纳提炼总结点：
1．计划美国学计算机科学
2．信息您咨询
3．需参加种英语考试
4．学期需修课程数学费
5．美国学期间食宿费少？
6．想您推荐合适学校
根点逻辑补充合适容连贯：
1 _______________________________________________________________________
2 _______________________________________________________________________
3 _______________________________________________________________________
4 _______________________________________________________________________
范文1
Dear Peter
How are you
As you know I’m quite interested in computer science I plan to go and study it in the United Sates So I’m writing to ask you for some information about the matter
First of all I want to know how to prepare for that as an international student For example what kind of test is required for admission Second I’m admitted to a university how many courses do I have to take each term and how much do I have to pay a term Finally how much should I prepare for food and housing Since I know very little about American universities it would be great if you could be kind enough to suggest some universities suitable for me
Looking forward to your reply
范文2
Dear David
How are you
I meant to write to you for some time I have planned to go abroad to study computer science in the United States Computer science is one of the most popular major nowadays I would like to know some information about the following
1 what required English examination should I take before I enter the university
2 how many required courses in my major shall I learn every term and how much
3 how much the expenses of bed and board will a student in the university to spent
4 I want to enter a university where there are well staff enough equipment and if there is any scholar Please give me your advice
I am looking forward to your reply Thank you very much
Yours
Li Hua
Dear David
How are you
．书面表达
假学校英语爱者俱乐部良饮食惯话题进行讨请根
列提示英语写篇发言稿容点应包括：
部分学饮食惯
良饮食惯
法
吃早餐
爱吃零食
偏食
饮食量
饮食样化饮
食定时定量
助身体健康
…
注意：
1 发言稿必须包括容点适发挥
2 发言稿开头结尾已写计入总词数
3 词数：100左右
4 参考词汇 偏食 be particular about food 零食 snack
Dear friends
As we all know we are what we eat Therefore it’s very important for us to form healthy eating habits
____________________________________________________________________________
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纳提炼总结点：
1 吃早餐 →发展成句：___________________________________________________
2 爱吃零食 →发展成句：____________________________________________________
3 偏食 →发展成句：__________________________________________________
4 饮食量 →发展成句：____________________________________________________
5 饮食样化饮 →发展成句：___________________________________________________
6 食定时定量 →发展成句：__________________________________________________
7 助身体健康→发展成句：_________________________________________________
8 …… →发展成句：__________________________________________________
参范文1
Dear friends
As we all know we are what we eat Therefore it＇s a very important for us to form healthy eating habits
However bad eating habits are still very common among us students Some of us often go to school without breakfast some like to have snacks some others are particular about food and still some eat or drink too much All these bad habits will surely do harm to our health
To keep fit we should have various healthy diets which generally include proper amounts of fish meat vegetables fruit as well as main food Besides we＇d better have meals regularly
In my opinion we should try to develop healthy eating habits to build up a strong body Only in this way can we have enough energy to study better
That＇s all Thank you
参范文2
Dear friends
As we all know we are what we eat Therefore it’s very important for us to form healthy eating habits Some of us enjoy snacks instead of breakfast Some are particular about food They usually overeat what they like to eat
The eating habits mentioned above are bad for our health Most of the snacks we eat are junk food which may make us overweight and even suffer from disease
What are the good eating habits like First I think we should choose healthy diet Besides we can＇t eat too much to be too full In addition eating a variety of food and eating food regularly are also important to keep fit
That＇s all Thank you
二．书面表达．汉语中句谚语志者事竟成请题描写志气学点面表格：
姓名
陈林
性
男
年龄
18
年级
高三
志
清华学物理系
事迹
1 幼父母双亡叔叔带家境贫寒
2 学刻苦成绩直优秀
3 年参加世界中学生物理奥赛夺金牌祖国争光
启示
……
注意：1 词数100左右
2 根容点适增加细节行文连贯
纳提炼总结点：
1．陈林性年龄读年级→发展成句：_____________________________________
2．志清华学物理系→发展成句：___________________________________________
3．幼父母双亡叔叔带家境贫寒
→发展成句：_____________________________________________________________
4．学刻苦成绩直优秀→发展成句：_________________________________________
5．年参加世界中学生物理奥赛夺金牌祖国争光
→发展成句：___________________________________________________________
6．启示……：__________________________________________________
参考范文：
Where there is will there is a way
Where there is will there is a way Do you believe this proverb Perhaps my classmate Chen Lin a senior 3 boy of eighteen years old can prove it through his experiences
Life is very hard for Chen Lin His parents died when he was only a little child and he was brought up by his uncle His living conditions are worse than most of us He once said I want to go to Qinghua University to study physics What a great ambition
Encouraged by the great will he studies very hard He won the gold medal in the World Olympic Physics Competition this year winning a great honor for our motherland
Chen Lin has set a good example for us I am sure his dream will come true for Where there is will there is a way
三．书面表达．
假设某中学学生会席李华校国际学样常举办联谊活动计划重阳节组织学生养老院慰问老拟邀请国际学校学生参加请根容点国际学样学生会席Tony写封信
点： 老赠送礼物（鲜花制贺卡……）
老提供服务（做清洁陪老聊天……）
老表演节目（唱歌跳舞……）
注意： 1词数100左右
2信开关结尾已写（计入写词数）
3已出信开关结尾抄入答题卡 （容抄入答题卡）
Dear Tony
Chongyang the traditional Chinese festival for the elderly is coming around We are planning to visit the Nursing Home to celebrate the special day and we would like to invite students from your school to join us
…
Look forward to your early reply
Yours
Li Hua
纳提炼总结点：
1 _______________________________________________________________________
2 _______________________________________________________________________
3 _______________________________________________________________________
4 _______________________________________________________________________
We have planned several activities When we get therewe will visit the elderly in their rooms in groupspresenting them with flowers and self－made cards to show our respect and love Then we will do some cleaning and washing for them with the help of the nurses
As some old people feel lonely We may chat with them about their old days changes of our city or anything they are interested in We may also give them some performances singing dancing and so on
I am sure we will both gain a better understanding of the elderly in China If you have any suggestions please let us know
五．书面表达
2007年4月29日午10点11点全国亿万学生阳光体育活动中学校时进行江苏省1100万学生积极参项活动
教育部倡导学生：
天锻炼时
健康工作五十年
幸福生活辈子
请根提示英语准备份发言稿学讲述阳光体育活动关情况高三学生否需天花时锻炼谈谈法理
注意：
发言稿应包括信息适发挥
词数：120左右发言稿开头结尾已写计入总词数
参考词汇：阳光体育活动——a national student sports program
教育部——the Ministry of Education
Good afternoon everyone
____________________________________________________________________
Thank you
纳提炼总结点：
1 _______________________________________________________________________
2 _______________________________________________________________________
3 _______________________________________________________________________
4 _______________________________________________________________________
Good afternoon everyone
On the morning of April 29 2007 from 1000 to 1100 hundreds of millions of students from primary middle schools and universities all over China joined in a national student sports program Eleven million students in Jiangsu took an active part in this program
The Ministry of Education calls on students to exercise for an hour every day in the hope that they will have good health to work fifty years and enjoy the whole life
Personally I think it a good idea for us senior 3 students to have daily exercise Although we take an hour a day for exercise it is well worth it Taking exercise helps us build up our body and keep a clear mind Therefore we can work more efficiently
Thank you (125词)
六．书面表达
班级举办次题What Can We Do for Our School英语演讲赛请写篇英语演讲稿求四方面中选二进行阐述举例加说明
1 关心
2 美化校园
3 受护学校设施
4 营造良学氛围
注意：
1 书面表达中出现学校校名姓名否节判零分
2 词数：100左右
3 参考词汇：
爱心——love and care校园——campus 设施——facilities 氛围——environment
4开头结尾已写记入词数
Hello everyone It’s nice to speak about what we can do for our school and I think each of us can do something
……
Thank you for listening
纳提炼总结点：
1 _______________________________________________________________________
2 _______________________________________________________________________
3 _______________________________________________________________________
4 _______________________________________________________________________
Hello everyone It’s nice to speak about what we can do for our school and I think each of us can do something
The first thing we can do is to make our campus more beautiful Every one of us may plant a tree in the school or organize a thorough cleaning on the campus We can also form a good habit of putting the rubbish in the trashcan
The second thing we can do is to protect the facilities in our school When we leave the classroom we should never forget to turn off the light or close the door We should not leave the tap water running or waste any materials in the laboratory class
If everyone does one thing for our school I believe we will turn our school into a better place to Study and live in
Thank you for listening
七．书面表达
学生活开始面新学生活环境请根提示写篇英语短文谈谈算安排学生活容点应包括：
确定新学目标
改进学方法
学会独立生活
参加种课外活动
处理学关系
注意：（1）短文容连贯完整
（2）短文单词数：100左右（开头已出单词计入单词总数）
纳提炼总结点：
1 _______________________________________________________________________
2 _______________________________________________________________________
3 _______________________________________________________________________
4 _______________________________________________________________________
I will go to college in the near future After I enter college I plan to set new goals in my study and improve my way of learning What’s more as I am away from my parents it is necessary for me to learn to live on my own such as doing some washing and cleaning by myself In my spare time I will take part in different kinds of school activities for example I will often go to the English Corner to practice my spoken English In addition I need to get along well with my classmates and teaches at college I think I will have a wonderful college life (102 words)
八．书面表达
假定李华希通外籍教师Peter找英语笔友请写封短信描述理想中笔友条件说明什选样笔友具体条件包括：
1 年龄
2 性
3 爱（旅游运动宠物等）
注意：1．词数100 左右
2． 适增加细节行文连贯
3． 开头语已写
Dear Peter
I am writing to ask whether you are able to do me a favor
Best regards
Li Hua
纳提炼总结点：
1 _______________________________________________________________________
2 _______________________________________________________________________
3 _______________________________________________________________________
4 _______________________________________________________________________
Dear Peter
I’m writing to ask whether you are able to do me a favor
I want to have a pen friend hopefully a girl in her early twenties and with interests similar to mine In my mind she is someone who is interested in traveling swimming and playing table tennis Besides it would be better for her to have a pet dog as I have kept one at home for some time With such a pen friend I think I can share with her our traveling experiences taking care of pets or whatever we have in common And I believe I will improve my English by doing so and learn more about her country
I look forward to hearing from you soon
Best regards
Li Hua
九．书面表达
假设李华英国笔友Henry 信询问高考暑期安排请胸根点英语回封信说明计划简述理
1．休息 2读书 3陪伴父母 4参加社会活动
注意：1词数100左右信开头结尾已写（计入总词数）
2 根容点适增加细节行文连贯
3 参考词汇：
高考——college entrance examination
社会活动——social activities
Dear Henry
I’m glad to receive your letter
Best wishes
Li Hua
纳提炼总结点：
1 _______________________________________________________________________
2 _______________________________________________________________________
3 _______________________________________________________________________
4 _______________________________________________________________________
I’m glad to receive your letter It’s a pleasure for me to tell you my plan of this coming summer vacation after the college entrance examination
First of all a good rest is needed because I do feel tired after the hard work of all these years Of course I’ll do some reading for fun and for knowledge as well I’ll spend some time staying with my parents chatting with them and doing some housework They’ve done so much for me you know If possible I’ll take part in some social activities so that I can know more about the society
Best wishes
Li Hua
十．书面表达
报道7岁美国女孩Amy Bruce知身患肺癌（lung cancer）处极度痛苦中美国抗癌协会（ACS）决定Amy收封慰问信增加3美分治疗款
假新华中学学生李华请英文Amy写封慰问信容包括：
l 介绍
l 知情况
l 表示鼓励
l 算做什
l 祝早日康复
注意：
1 信格式已写
2 信中出现真实情况
3 词数100左右
4 请答题卡作答
纳提炼总结点：
1 _______________________________________________________________________
2 _______________________________________________________________________
3 _______________________________________________________________________
4 _______________________________________________________________________
Dear Amy
I am a student from Xinhua Middle School I am very sorry to have heard of your present situation that you are so bitter after having a lung cancer
At present ACS decides that it will give you three cents when you receive a letter That will offer you so much courage I hope you will make efforts to overcome all kinds of difficulty no matter how hard it is You are sure to make it
I will try my best to ask all my friends schoolmates and relatives to write letters to you which may help you It will give more courage to live on
May you recover soon
Yours
Li Hua
十．书面表达
假设王李华窗友请根列点英文李华写篇毕业留言
点：1 简表述李华心目中印象
2 两相关事例进行具体描述
3 李华表示美祝愿
注意：1 容积极语意连贯结构完整词数120左右
2 写成诗歌形式真实姓名学校名称
纳提炼总结点：
1 _______________________________________________________________________
2 _______________________________________________________________________
3 _______________________________________________________________________
4 _______________________________________________________________________
Li Hua
It’s time to say goodbye It’s time to recall those beautiful days we spend together You are the very person who gives me a hand when necessary You are the most considerate person who knows exactly what I need
Still remember that night two years ago When I suddenly fell ill it was you who carried me on your back to a nearby hospital You took good care of me while I was having an injection Later you managed to help me with my lessons Without your help I would have failed in the examination
I still have hundreds of stories to share with you I still have thousands of blessings for you May all your dreams come true May our friendship last till the end of the universe
Yours
Wang Ping
二．点发展式
1 书面表达
假设李华美国友学校准备学校创办份中学生英文刊物该校格林先生信询问关情况请写封回信容：
1．表示赞成
2．提出喜欢栏目
3．简说明理
注意：
1．词数100左右
2．信开头结尾已写
3．适增加细节行文连贯
4．参考词汇：栏目 column
﹡ ﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡
June 8
Dear Mr Green
I am very excited to learn that we are going to start a magazine together
________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours faithfully
Li Hua
纳提炼总结点：
1 表示赞成→发展成句：________________________________________________________
2 提出喜欢栏目→发展成句：________________________________________________
1）_________________________ 补：_________________________
2）_________________________ 补：_________________________
3 简说明理→发展成句：___________________________________________________
1）_________________________
2）_________________________
4 发表前景法：________________________________________________________________
June 8
Dear Mr Green
I am very excited to learn that we are going to start a magazine together It is indeed a wonderful idea and everyone hopes for its success
I would like the magazine to have three columns News Teachers＇ Advice and Students＇ Voice From the News column we can learn about what is going on in both of our schools In Teachers＇ Advice our teachers can give us such help as we may not be able to get in the classroom Students＇ Voice will allow us to freely express our thoughts and feelings about our lives and studies
I believe that this magazine will surely strengthen our ties and I am looking forward to reading it
Yours faithfully
Li Hua
2．书面表达
假定李华班学开通博客（blog）家长老师认开博客浪费时间精力持反意见请话题报社编辑写封信容包括：
1 开博客热潮受质疑
2．表明法
3 陈述理（少两条）
注意：1 适增加细节行文连贯
2．词数100左右（文章开头线束语已写计入总词数）
Dear editor
At present blog has become very popular ________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
纳提炼总结点：
1 开博客热潮 班学开通博客（blog）
→发展成句：________________________________________________________
2 受质疑 家长老师认开博客浪费时间精力持反意见
→发展成句：________________________________________________
1）_________________________ 补：_________________________
2）_________________________ 补：_________________________
3 表明法→发展成句：___________________________________________________
1）_________________________
2）_________________________
4 陈述理（少两条）____________________________________________________
1）_________________________
2）_________________________
范文：
Dear editor
At present blog has become very popular A lot of students in my class have created their own blogs and often visit others’ bolgs Many parents and teachers are strongly against it They think it is a waste of time and energy
However I love the idea that we students have blogs of our own Anyone can create his own blog as he wishes Blogs have no fixed rules and don’t call for professional knowledge and skills to manage it So we can express our inner voice freely on the blog and share our thoughts with others What’s more blog covers all kinds of topics from daily life to political forums from individual thoughts to world events So blogs can also help release our pressure of study and entertain us when we are tired
In short I am for creating blogs
班学开通博客家长老师认开博客浪费时间精力持反意见认开通微博件事：
1微博开阔视野
2劳逸结合
3增长见识
认开通微博合理应合理
假设李华读美国中学生Jack博客时解作名交换生北京学希够寄宿名擅长英语中学生家里便更解中国文化请根点Jack 写封电子邮件：
1 欢迎中国学
2 介绍情况
3 邀请住家表示愿意提供帮助
注意：1 适增加细节行文连贯
2．词数100左右（文章开头线束语已写计入总词数）
Dear Jack
I’m very glad to learn that you’re coming to Beijing as an exchange student and want to stay ina local home with a middle school student who can speak excellent English
I’m a high school student and its my sincere hope that you can stay with me I am good at
English and can communicate with foreigners fluently Besides I like reading and traveling in my spare time so if you are with us I can take you around Beijing and let you know more about
our brilliant Chinese culture Both my parents and I are friendly and enthusiastic in personality
So I believe we can be good friends I’m sure I will do what I can to help you with your Chinese
I’m looking forward to your coming
Best wishes
Yours
Li Hua
书面表达
假定李华外籍教师Smith先生预约昨天午3点办公室请教学英语未赴约请写封电子邮件
容包括：
1 未赴约致歉
2 解释未赴约具体原
3 希重新预约
注意
1 词数100左右
2 适增加细节行文连贯
3 邮件开头结尾已写
One possible version
Dear Mr Smith
I’m writing to beg you to excuse me for missing our appointment at 3 yesterday afternoon when you intended to give me advice on English learning I’m sorry for the inconvenience it caused to you
You may be unwilling to accept an explanation However I don’t want you to misunderstand me On my way to your office I happened to see a car accident An old man was badly injured but nobody came to offer help So I stopped a taxi and sent him to a nearby hospital I stayed there for several hours until his son came and that caused me to miss our appointment
I am aware that our appointment is of great importance I do hope that you would be kind enough to spare your valuable time to meet me again
Looking forward to hearing from you
Yours
Li Hua
Ｉ）作文题目：
假李华发现校园存许严重浪费现象请英语写篇倡议书号召学做起杜绝浪费
1 浪费现象
2 危害
3 提出制止浪费现象措施
注意：
1 容包含点适发挥
2 信开头结尾已写
3 词数：１２０－１５０（已出部分计入总词数）
Dear fellow students
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
Li Hua
II）伴讨完成列问题
1文章体裁称时态分什？
____________________________________________________________________
2文章分成段？段短语句型？
____________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________
III) 作文写作文纸左半部
III Postwriting
1 位互批直线划出三Good Sentences (GS)波浪线划出三Bad Sentences (BS)
GS1________________________________________________________________
GS2________________________________________________________________
GS3________________________________________________________________
BS1________________________________________________________________
BS2________________________________________________________________
BS3________________________________________________________________
2 位讨改写三BS
1) _________________________________________________________________
2) _________________________________________________________________
3) _________________________________________________________________
3 改写作文写作文纸右半部
Homework
作文纸交（两次作文）
参考范文
Dear fellow students
With the improvement of our living standards there is a lot of waste on our campus For example the students often leave with the lights on in the daytime water running after washing and remaining food on the table So it is high time that we dealt with the problem
Firstly the bad habit of being wasteful will have a bad influence Secondly it adds financial burden to our parents Lastly it is also a kind of exhaustion of the world’s limited natural resources water and electricity
In my opinion it is everybody’s business to fight against waste On the one hand I should start with myself to save everything On the other hand I’d like to remind my friends here to take the lead in reducing the waste Therefore I’m sure that with everyone doing his bit to fight against waste we will make a difference Only in this way can we help to change the present situation
Li Hua
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