英语写作领
英语写作领
中国式英语
1 汉式表达(Chinglish way of expression)
(错)However everything has its black side
()However there are two sides to everythingeverything has its drawbackseverything has its pros and cons nothing is perfect
2In a word I want to find a job that fits meand money and other things are out of thought
In a word I want to find a job that suits me and money and other things are not my chief concern
2 People now have condition to eat good things
People now can afford nutritious food Highquality food is now within people’s reach
3 Just open the TV set you can know everythingand won’t have to go out
Simply by switching on the TV set you can learn everything without having to go out
4 TV can widen our eyes
Watching TV can broaden our minds horizons
5 We young people are now live in sugar water
We young people now live a comfortable life
二 汉式 概念
1 The chief reason for the change have five points
There are five reasons for the change
2 Traffic is a serious problem one of the reasons is that Shanghai have over ten million people
Traffic is a serious problem and one of the reasons is that there are over ten million people in Shanghai
三 汉式 概念
(错) After its big libraries what Fudan University attracts me is its modern laboratories
Second only to its big libraries the attraction of Fudan University for me is its modern laboratories
(错) Some natural resources such as oil and coal will be used up after 50 years () Some natural resources such as oil and coal will be used up in 50 years (错) After four years they graduated from the university
Four years later they graduated from the university
四 汉式 越越少概念
(错)Nowadays young people who seek to go abroad are becoming more and more() Nowadays more and more young people are seeking to go abroad
(错)People begin to eat grain less and lesswhile they eat fruit more and more(错)With the development of cities green land becomes more and more less
()With the development of cities the amount of green land is decreasing ever more rapidly
五汉式动词连
1错 People think go to movie will cost a lot of money
People think going to movie will cost a lot of money
2错The best way to the traffic problem I Shanghai is build subways
The best way to solve the traffic problem in Shanghai is to build subways
3错There are many people take part in sports now
There are many people who take part taking part in sports now
4错Make cities greener has many advantages
5Making cities greener has many advantages
错 Now people go abroad is not easy
It is not easy for people to go abroad now
6错Although difficulty is existbut we can overcome it
Although difficulties exist we can overcome them
六．汉式形容词法
错Too easy or too difficulty is no good for us
Books which are too easy or too difficult are not good for us
错：Sports are liked by oldsyoung men and women for they bring you happy ：Sports are liked by people of all ages and both sexesfor they bring happiness 错： Old men like calm while young people like active
：Old men like peaceful lifewhile people prefer an active one
七． 汉式语句
1．错： Without electricity the world become dark and even unable to see a finger：Without electricity the world would become so dark that a person could not even see a hand in front of his face
3 错 Reading books can acquire knowledge
：Through reading one can acquire knowledge
4 错 All of this should thank our government
：We should thank our government for all of this
文章整体性连贯性
整体性指短文语义整体段落围绕短文题写作考试中指确定中心写作容跑题连贯性指句子间段落间合逻辑方式排列读起通流畅短文整体性连贯性通句子段落逻辑排列采渡词方式实现
请面短文逻辑排列方式达短文整体性连贯性：
Nuclear power stations are extremely dangerous In 1979 a station in the USA went out of control and thousands of people there had to leave their homes The waste from nuclear power stations can be dangerous to man for thousands of years Nuclear stations are unnecessary The demand for electricity in the West is increasing very slowly and can be met by existing stations If extra power in needed it should be provided by wind or tidal power stations They are safe and there is no danger of pollution For these reasons all work on nuclear power stations must be halted immediately
面短文采渡词方式达短文整体性连贯性
Getting up early is good for our health To start with the air in the morning is fresh which will do a lot of good to your health Second early in the morning you may take a walk or do some exercise which will help to keep you healthy Finallygetting up early will help you to form a good habit and develop a good mood for daily activities 短文具较整体性连贯性通常采 启 承 转 合渡词
1 引导题句题句第扩展句渡词语称 启 关方面词语
Firstfirst of all at first in the first place in the beginning firstly to begin with to start with for one thing for another on one hand on the other hand generally speaking in general at present currently lately 等
启法实例
At presentcurrentlylatelysome people believe that intelligence is given at birth At firstFirst of allIn the beginningIn the first placefirstlythe environment plays an important role in shaping one’s personality
2 承接题句第扩展句渡词语称 承方面词语 Second thirdsecondly thirdly in other words in the same way besides also in addition to moreover what is more for example for instance meanwhile at the same time consequently for this purposenamely
承法实例
SecondthirdlyIn other wordsin the same wayshorter working hours can lead to
greater productivity
BesidesAfter thatin additionAfterwardshe hoped to work with one of the best prefessors on that research project
3 表示相反渡词语 转常见词语
But yet however on the contrary unlike nevertheless in spite of on the other hand though as a matter of fact in fact in contrast
转法实例
YetHoweverunfortunatelyin factother people are strongly against his proposal Unlike his brotherhe likes swimming very much
In spite of the heavy rain they continued working
4 结段落短文渡词语
Finallyat last in short in a word in conclusion at length eventually thus thereforeto sum up undoubtedly briefly truly as a result obviously certainly 合法实例
At lengthin conclusionin a wordAs a resultIn shortthe government should make a necessary law against the shop lifting
ThereforeAccordinglysurelycertainlybrieflyObviouslywe must work hard to protect water resources
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英语写作领
中国式英语
1 汉式表达(Chinglish way of expression)
(错)However everything has its black side
()However there are two sides to everythingeverything has its drawbackseverything has its pros and cons nothing is perfect
2In a word I want to find a job that fits meand money and other things are out of thought
In a word I want to find a job that suits me and money and other things are not my chief concern
2 People now have condition to eat good things
People now can afford nutritious food Highquality food is now within people’s reach
3 Just open the TV set you can know everythingand won’t have to go out
Simply by switching on the TV set you can learn everything without having to go out
4 TV can widen our eyes
Watching TV can broaden our minds horizons
5 We young people are now live in sugar water
We young people now live a comfortable life
二 汉式 概念
1 The chief reason for the change have five points
There are five reasons for the change
2 Traffic is a serious problem one of the reasons is that Shanghai have over ten million people
Traffic is a serious problem and one of the reasons is that there are over ten million people in Shanghai
三 汉式 概念
(错) After its big libraries what Fudan University attracts me is its modern laboratories
Second only to its big libraries the attraction of Fudan University for me is its modern laboratories
(错) Some natural resources such as oil and coal will be used up after 50 years () Some natural resources such as oil and coal will be used up in 50 years (错) After four years they graduated from the university
Four years later they graduated from the university
四 汉式 越越少概念
(错)Nowadays young people who seek to go abroad are becoming more and more() Nowadays more and more young people are seeking to go abroad
(错)People begin to eat grain less and lesswhile they eat fruit more and more(错)With the development of cities green land becomes more and more less
()With the development of cities the amount of green land is decreasing ever more rapidly
五汉式动词连
1错 People think go to movie will cost a lot of money
People think going to movie will cost a lot of money
2错The best way to the traffic problem I Shanghai is build subways
The best way to solve the traffic problem in Shanghai is to build subways
3错There are many people take part in sports now
There are many people who take part taking part in sports now
4错Make cities greener has many advantages
5Making cities greener has many advantages
错 Now people go abroad is not easy
It is not easy for people to go abroad now
6错Although difficulty is existbut we can overcome it
Although difficulties exist we can overcome them
六．汉式形容词法
错Too easy or too difficulty is no good for us
Books which are too easy or too difficult are not good for us
错：Sports are liked by oldsyoung men and women for they bring you happy ：Sports are liked by people of all ages and both sexesfor they bring happiness 错： Old men like calm while young people like active
：Old men like peaceful lifewhile people prefer an active one
七． 汉式语句
1．错： Without electricity the world become dark and even unable to see a finger：Without electricity the world would become so dark that a person could not even see a hand in front of his face
3 错 Reading books can acquire knowledge
：Through reading one can acquire knowledge
4 错 All of this should thank our government
：We should thank our government for all of this
文章整体性连贯性
整体性指短文语义整体段落围绕短文题写作考试中指确定中心写作容跑题连贯性指句子间段落间合逻辑方式排列读起通流畅短文整体性连贯性通句子段落逻辑排列采渡词方式实现
请面短文逻辑排列方式达短文整体性连贯性：
Nuclear power stations are extremely dangerous In 1979 a station in the USA went out of control and thousands of people there had to leave their homes The waste from nuclear power stations can be dangerous to man for thousands of years Nuclear stations are unnecessary The demand for electricity in the West is increasing very slowly and can be met by existing stations If extra power in needed it should be provided by wind or tidal power stations They are safe and there is no danger of pollution For these reasons all work on nuclear power stations must be halted immediately
面短文采渡词方式达短文整体性连贯性
Getting up early is good for our health To start with the air in the morning is fresh which will do a lot of good to your health Second early in the morning you may take a walk or do some exercise which will help to keep you healthy Finallygetting up early will help you to form a good habit and develop a good mood for daily activities 短文具较整体性连贯性通常采 启 承 转 合渡词
1 引导题句题句第扩展句渡词语称 启 关方面词语
Firstfirst of all at first in the first place in the beginning firstly to begin with to start with for one thing for another on one hand on the other hand generally speaking in general at present currently lately 等
启法实例
At presentcurrentlylatelysome people believe that intelligence is given at birth At firstFirst of allIn the beginningIn the first placefirstlythe environment plays an important role in shaping one’s personality
2 承接题句第扩展句渡词语称 承方面词语 Second thirdsecondly thirdly in other words in the same way besides also in addition to moreover what is more for example for instance meanwhile at the same time consequently for this purposenamely
承法实例
SecondthirdlyIn other wordsin the same wayshorter working hours can lead to
greater productivity
BesidesAfter thatin additionAfterwardshe hoped to work with one of the best prefessors on that research project
3 表示相反渡词语 转常见词语
But yet however on the contrary unlike nevertheless in spite of on the other hand though as a matter of fact in fact in contrast
转法实例
YetHoweverunfortunatelyin factother people are strongly against his proposal Unlike his brotherhe likes swimming very much
In spite of the heavy rain they continued working
4 结段落短文渡词语
Finallyat last in short in a word in conclusion at length eventually thus thereforeto sum up undoubtedly briefly truly as a result obviously certainly 合法实例
At lengthin conclusionin a wordAs a resultIn shortthe government should make a necessary law against the shop lifting
ThereforeAccordinglysurelycertainlybrieflyObviouslywe must work hard to protect water resources
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