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感谢信
假设李华月前Mr Jackson属公司实期间Mr Jackson精心指导请英文Mr Jackson写封信表示感谢容包括
1 表达感谢
2感谢原
注意
1 写作词数应80左右
2 适增加细节行文连贯
Dear Mr Jackson
I＇m Li Hua___________________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________________
Sincerely
Li Hua
One possible version
Dear Mr Jackson
I’m Li Hua I＇d like to convey in this letter my heartfelt gratitude to you for your rigorous and thoughtful mentoring during my internship at your company one month ago
Your guidance is so enlightening and professional as to have a farreaching influence upon my skills as I move into my professional career Not only did you praise our progress but also you turned every tiny mistake into a learning opportunity On top of that you were always willing to put in extra time if we needed your help Had it not been for your help I wouldn＇t have gained a strong sense of commitment to the future job or built up the confidence in myself
Thanks again for your generous help and best wishes
Sincerely
Li Hua
解析：
篇书面表达属应文求考生Mr Jackson写封信表达感谢说明感谢原
1词汇积累
表达convey→express 诚挚heartfelt→sincere 启发性enlightening→inspirational
影响influence→impact
2句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句 I＇d like to convey in this letter my heartfelt gratitude to you for your rigorous and thoughtful mentoring during my internship at your company one month ago
拓展句 I＇d like to convey in this letter my heartfelt gratitude to you for the rigorous and thoughtful mentoring that you gave me during my internship at your company one month ago
高分句型1Not only did you praise our progress but also you turned every tiny mistake into a learning opportunity(运部分倒装句)
高分句型2Had it not been for your help I wouldn＇t have gained a strong sense of commitment to the future job or built up the confidence in myself(运虚拟条件句)
体裁：倡议书
假定李华新闻报道说国教科书量巨循环利会造成极浪费感触写信校报英语天倡议循环教科书容包括：
1 循环教科书必性
2 循环教科书做法
3 提出倡议
注意：
1 词数80左右
2 适增加细节行文连贯
3 倡议书开头结尾已出计入总词数
Dear fellow students
_________________________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours
Li Hua
范文：
One possible version：
Dear fellow students
We usually spend a lot buying textbooks but most of them end up as waste In order to save resources and protect the environment please recycle the used textbooks
We could hold a textbook swap to sell or buy the textbooks at a low price Additionally used textbooks are welcomed to be donated to the school library so that they can be accessible to others for free
Every effort makes a difference Let＇s take action and make our world cleaner
Yours
Li Hua
第二节(满分25分)
阅读面材料根容段落开头语续写两段构成篇完整短文
Richard was very spoilt and completely selfcentered His parents gave him everything he wanted knowing that he would throw a temper tantrum(耍孩脾气) if they did not he would scream and kick and lie on the floor drumming his heels His parents always gave in and they gave him unlimited allowance to meet his requirements making him into a little prince．
It was an usual day Richard and his parents went to the beach to spend their holiday On their way to the seaside they passed a store where Richard noticed a cool swimsuit and he was fond of it insisting on buying it regardless of its high price His parents tried to persuade him not to but in vain Finally they had no choice but to satisfy him
Later they were back at the beachhouse recovering from another tantrum Richard had thrown when they told him that it was too dangerous to go diving alone Dangerous？ he shouted You just don＇t want me to have fun Nothing can stop me His parents sighed but they have no more energy to have another argument with him That was why Richard was alone on the beach wearing an expensive swimsuit which has taken a massive tantrum to get his parents to buy it
What are you doing here my boy？ a voice asked Richard was surprised He did not know that the man was there until he spoke I＇m going diving he answered pointing at his swimsuit Haven＇t you noticed that？You shouldn＇t swim today the man advised There is a storm coming up It is dangerous to swim here You should mind your own business Richard replied and walked into the gentle waves Look The sea is so peaceful nowListen to me young man you＇ll be sorry for your stubbornness the man called after him
注意：
1 续写词数应150左右
2 续写部分分两段段开头语已写
But Richard did not bother to reply ______________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________________
Hold on I＇m coming the old man shouted ___________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________
One possible version：
But Richard did not bother to reply He slipped into the water and dived happily until white caps began rolling in and it became harder to swim against the current (水流)Saltwater hit him in the face making it difficult to breathe Oh why had he not listened to advice Panicking he began to scream Then just as it seemed as if he would slip beneath the surface he heard a calm voice
Hold onI＇mcomingthe old man shouted With relief he saw the old man rowing an ancientlooking boat towards him However the sea became so tough that the old man failed to reach him even nearly involved by the terrible waves After several attempts he at last dragged Richard over the side of the boat Gratefully Richard thanked the kind old man and ran towards the beachhouse realizing it was his stubbornness that put both of them in danger and he should take other people＇s suggestions into consideration afterwards
点评：
Oh why had he not listened to advice 虚拟语气
Saltwater hit him in the face making it difficult to breathe 分词作状语
Gratefully Richard thanked the kind old man and ran towards the beachhouse realizing it was his stubbornness that put both of them in danger and he should take other people＇s suggestions into consideration afterwards
副词 Gratefully
现分词结构 realizing…
It was… that…强调句
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感谢信
假设李华月前Mr Jackson属公司实期间Mr Jackson精心指导请英文Mr Jackson写封信表示感谢容包括
1 表达感谢
2感谢原
注意
1 写作词数应80左右
2 适增加细节行文连贯
Dear Mr Jackson
I＇m Li Hua___________________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________________
Sincerely
Li Hua
One possible version
Dear Mr Jackson
I’m Li Hua I＇d like to convey in this letter my heartfelt gratitude to you for your rigorous and thoughtful mentoring during my internship at your company one month ago
Your guidance is so enlightening and professional as to have a farreaching influence upon my skills as I move into my professional career Not only did you praise our progress but also you turned every tiny mistake into a learning opportunity On top of that you were always willing to put in extra time if we needed your help Had it not been for your help I wouldn＇t have gained a strong sense of commitment to the future job or built up the confidence in myself
Thanks again for your generous help and best wishes
Sincerely
Li Hua
解析：
篇书面表达属应文求考生Mr Jackson写封信表达感谢说明感谢原
1词汇积累
表达convey→express 诚挚heartfelt→sincere 启发性enlightening→inspirational
影响influence→impact
2句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句 I＇d like to convey in this letter my heartfelt gratitude to you for your rigorous and thoughtful mentoring during my internship at your company one month ago
拓展句 I＇d like to convey in this letter my heartfelt gratitude to you for the rigorous and thoughtful mentoring that you gave me during my internship at your company one month ago
高分句型1Not only did you praise our progress but also you turned every tiny mistake into a learning opportunity(运部分倒装句)
高分句型2Had it not been for your help I wouldn＇t have gained a strong sense of commitment to the future job or built up the confidence in myself(运虚拟条件句)
体裁：倡议书
假定李华新闻报道说国教科书量巨循环利会造成极浪费感触写信校报英语天倡议循环教科书容包括：
1 循环教科书必性
2 循环教科书做法
3 提出倡议
注意：
1 词数80左右
2 适增加细节行文连贯
3 倡议书开头结尾已出计入总词数
Dear fellow students
_________________________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours
Li Hua
范文：
One possible version：
Dear fellow students
We usually spend a lot buying textbooks but most of them end up as waste In order to save resources and protect the environment please recycle the used textbooks
We could hold a textbook swap to sell or buy the textbooks at a low price Additionally used textbooks are welcomed to be donated to the school library so that they can be accessible to others for free
Every effort makes a difference Let＇s take action and make our world cleaner
Yours
Li Hua
第二节(满分25分)
阅读面材料根容段落开头语续写两段构成篇完整短文
Richard was very spoilt and completely selfcentered His parents gave him everything he wanted knowing that he would throw a temper tantrum(耍孩脾气) if they did not he would scream and kick and lie on the floor drumming his heels His parents always gave in and they gave him unlimited allowance to meet his requirements making him into a little prince．
It was an usual day Richard and his parents went to the beach to spend their holiday On their way to the seaside they passed a store where Richard noticed a cool swimsuit and he was fond of it insisting on buying it regardless of its high price His parents tried to persuade him not to but in vain Finally they had no choice but to satisfy him
Later they were back at the beachhouse recovering from another tantrum Richard had thrown when they told him that it was too dangerous to go diving alone Dangerous？ he shouted You just don＇t want me to have fun Nothing can stop me His parents sighed but they have no more energy to have another argument with him That was why Richard was alone on the beach wearing an expensive swimsuit which has taken a massive tantrum to get his parents to buy it
What are you doing here my boy？ a voice asked Richard was surprised He did not know that the man was there until he spoke I＇m going diving he answered pointing at his swimsuit Haven＇t you noticed that？You shouldn＇t swim today the man advised There is a storm coming up It is dangerous to swim here You should mind your own business Richard replied and walked into the gentle waves Look The sea is so peaceful nowListen to me young man you＇ll be sorry for your stubbornness the man called after him
注意：
1 续写词数应150左右
2 续写部分分两段段开头语已写
But Richard did not bother to reply ______________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________________
Hold on I＇m coming the old man shouted ___________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________
One possible version：
But Richard did not bother to reply He slipped into the water and dived happily until white caps began rolling in and it became harder to swim against the current (水流)Saltwater hit him in the face making it difficult to breathe Oh why had he not listened to advice Panicking he began to scream Then just as it seemed as if he would slip beneath the surface he heard a calm voice
Hold onI＇mcomingthe old man shouted With relief he saw the old man rowing an ancientlooking boat towards him However the sea became so tough that the old man failed to reach him even nearly involved by the terrible waves After several attempts he at last dragged Richard over the side of the boat Gratefully Richard thanked the kind old man and ran towards the beachhouse realizing it was his stubbornness that put both of them in danger and he should take other people＇s suggestions into consideration afterwards
点评：
Oh why had he not listened to advice 虚拟语气
Saltwater hit him in the face making it difficult to breathe 分词作状语
Gratefully Richard thanked the kind old man and ran towards the beachhouse realizing it was his stubbornness that put both of them in danger and he should take other people＇s suggestions into consideration afterwards
副词 Gratefully
现分词结构 realizing…
It was… that…强调句
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