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It was an Art lesson Rachel sat at the desk watching her classmates busy preparing the water jars and paints She understood why Mrs Weston asked her to sit down and got Lisa to fetch everything for herIt was always a disaster when Rachel tried to do Art Rachel sighed and reached out to dip her brush in some black paint and—oh no She knocked over the jar The water spread across the desk and drowned the paper Lisa called Mrs Weston to see what Rachel had done Rachel went red in the face She jumped to her feet to get a cloth Her chair fell over backwards She turned round and her paintbrush caught Lisa across the face giving her a black moustache Lisa was so surprised that she fell back against a wire bookstand It came crashing down and the books went all over the floor
How clumsy Rachel thought as she went home on the bus The bus stopped outside her house She jumped up and her elbow (肘部)knocked a woman＇s hat right over her eyes Oh no Rachel said sorry got off and ran indoors Mum wasn＇t in the kitchen but lay in bed as she caught an awful cold Rachel offered to make a cup of tea but Mum would rather wait for Dad Rachel sighed She understood Mum was afraid she would spill (溅出)it
But would you go to Mrs Willow for some cold cure asked Mum Rachel turned to the door at onceBut Rachel Mrs Willow＇s house is full of beautiful things so if she asks you to come in you＇d better say no Rachel sighed and ran out
Mrs Willow was an old lady with white hair and sharp blue eyes living in an old house She opened the door and invited her in Rachel said why she came and that she preferred to wait outside remembering her mother＇s warning Mrs Willow insisted Rachel come inside Rachel took a deep breath and stepped in She looked round Mrs Willow＇s sitting room and saw at once why Mum had been worried
注意
1）续写短文词数应150左右
2）少5短文中标划线关键词语
3）续写部分分两段段开头语已写
4）续写完成请划线标出关键词语
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There were beautiful things everywhere pretty china figures and delicate vases
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With a smile Mrs Willow comforted her saying it had been broken before
The analysis of the given passage
1 根第二段开头推测出Rachel 终碎Mrs Willow 珍贵花瓶第段侧重心里动作描写进屋子心翼翼碎花瓶反应
2 第二段描写Mrs Willow花瓶碎没指责Rachel反倒安慰Rachel感疚心想法
Sentence translation
1 着满屋子珍宝Rachel动动站着怕翻什东西
Seeing the treasures with eyes wide open Rachel stood there still afraid of upsetting something
2 妈妈话直耳边回响奇心驱伸手摸中宝贝
Mother’s words echoing in her mind but driven by curiosity still she reached for one of the treasures with great caution
3 着精美物件妈妈话抛诸脑外忍住中伸出手
Looking at the delicate items she totally forget mum’s warning and couldn’t help reaching for one of them
4 道谢转身门口走时东西碰腿惊讶跳起
She thanked her and turned to the door when something brushed against her leg
She was so surprised that she jumped backwards
5 猫胳膊肘撞花瓶花瓶掉摔碎
It was a cat But her elbow hit a vase and it fell to the floor broken into pieces
Cautious as she was she tripped over a vase when a cat jumped out
6 碰花瓶瞬间瓶子滚落摔成碎片紧张法呼吸
The moment she touched the vase it fell apart into pieces
Nervous she was nearly out of breath
Staring at the fragments she felt as if her heart missed a beat
Glued to the spot she was trembling from head to toe
7 Rachel尴尬容恨找缝钻进
Face deadly pale so embarrassed did Rachel feel that she desperately hoped to hide herself in the ground
8年轻时笨手笨脚 Mrs Willow温说道眼里满安慰
I used to be a trouble maker No one grew up without being clumsy You couldn’t have been as clumsy as I was Mrs Willow calmed her down softly with eyes full of comfort
9Rachel惭愧责道心点定决心粗心
Selfcondemned she muttered with great regret if only I had been more careful she made her resolution not to be careless any more
10 收拾完花瓶喝瓷杯里茶吃精致盘子里蛋糕Rachel没碎东西
After they cleared up the vase they drank tea from china cups and ate cakes off delicate plates and Rachel didn’t break another thing
It was Mrs Willow’s genuine patience and kindness that carved her mind and urged her to change better
11 Rachel 终舒口气原更加谨慎点避免麻烦发生没天生笨拙
Rachel felt at ease in the end Only if you are more cautious remind yourself constantly some trouble may be avoidedyou may not be a trouble maker Nobody was born clumsy
One possible version
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There were beautiful things everywhere pretty china figures and delicate vases All the treasures seemed to boast a long history and thus priceless Wow it’s really a land of wonder Rachel couldn’t help admiring the elegance of the china figures and vases Mom’s words echoing in her mind curiosity still got the upper hand She reached for one of them but unfortunately the vase slipped off her hand and lay in pieces on the floor Her heart missing a beat she stood there still
Paragraph 2
With a smile Mrs Willow comforted her saying it had been broken before Seeing Mrs Willow’s eyes filled with warmth and affection Rachel felt extremely regretful for her clumsy behavior If I had been more careful the disaster wouldn’t have happened Rachel knew what Mrs Willow said might be an excuse to relieve her uneasiness and embarrassment She made a decision that from the day on she would never be so careless and swore to be a kind and thoughtful person like Mrs Willow
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阅读面短文根情节进行续写构成完整事
It was an Art lesson Rachel sat at the desk watching her classmates busy preparing the water jars and paints She understood why Mrs Weston asked her to sit down and got Lisa to fetch everything for herIt was always a disaster when Rachel tried to do Art Rachel sighed and reached out to dip her brush in some black paint and—oh no She knocked over the jar The water spread across the desk and drowned the paper Lisa called Mrs Weston to see what Rachel had done Rachel went red in the face She jumped to her feet to get a cloth Her chair fell over backwards She turned round and her paintbrush caught Lisa across the face giving her a black moustache Lisa was so surprised that she fell back against a wire bookstand It came crashing down and the books went all over the floor
How clumsy Rachel thought as she went home on the bus The bus stopped outside her house She jumped up and her elbow (肘部)knocked a woman＇s hat right over her eyes Oh no Rachel said sorry got off and ran indoors Mum wasn＇t in the kitchen but lay in bed as she caught an awful cold Rachel offered to make a cup of tea but Mum would rather wait for Dad Rachel sighed She understood Mum was afraid she would spill (溅出)it
But would you go to Mrs Willow for some cold cure asked Mum Rachel turned to the door at onceBut Rachel Mrs Willow＇s house is full of beautiful things so if she asks you to come in you＇d better say no Rachel sighed and ran out
Mrs Willow was an old lady with white hair and sharp blue eyes living in an old house She opened the door and invited her in Rachel said why she came and that she preferred to wait outside remembering her mother＇s warning Mrs Willow insisted Rachel come inside Rachel took a deep breath and stepped in She looked round Mrs Willow＇s sitting room and saw at once why Mum had been worried
注意
1）续写短文词数应150左右
2）少5短文中标划线关键词语
3）续写部分分两段段开头语已写
4）续写完成请划线标出关键词语
Paragraph 1
There were beautiful things everywhere pretty china figures and delicate vases
Paragraph 2
With a smile Mrs Willow comforted her saying it had been broken before
The analysis of the given passage
1 根第二段开头推测出Rachel 终碎Mrs Willow 珍贵花瓶第段侧重心里动作描写进屋子心翼翼碎花瓶反应
2 第二段描写Mrs Willow花瓶碎没指责Rachel反倒安慰Rachel感疚心想法
Sentence translation
1 着满屋子珍宝Rachel动动站着怕翻什东西
Seeing the treasures with eyes wide open Rachel stood there still afraid of upsetting something
2 妈妈话直耳边回响奇心驱伸手摸中宝贝
Mother’s words echoing in her mind but driven by curiosity still she reached for one of the treasures with great caution
3 着精美物件妈妈话抛诸脑外忍住中伸出手
Looking at the delicate items she totally forget mum’s warning and couldn’t help reaching for one of them
4 道谢转身门口走时东西碰腿惊讶跳起
She thanked her and turned to the door when something brushed against her leg
She was so surprised that she jumped backwards
5 猫胳膊肘撞花瓶花瓶掉摔碎
It was a cat But her elbow hit a vase and it fell to the floor broken into pieces
Cautious as she was she tripped over a vase when a cat jumped out
6 碰花瓶瞬间瓶子滚落摔成碎片紧张法呼吸
The moment she touched the vase it fell apart into pieces
Nervous she was nearly out of breath
Staring at the fragments she felt as if her heart missed a beat
Glued to the spot she was trembling from head to toe
7 Rachel尴尬容恨找缝钻进
Face deadly pale so embarrassed did Rachel feel that she desperately hoped to hide herself in the ground
8年轻时笨手笨脚 Mrs Willow温说道眼里满安慰
I used to be a trouble maker No one grew up without being clumsy You couldn’t have been as clumsy as I was Mrs Willow calmed her down softly with eyes full of comfort
9Rachel惭愧责道心点定决心粗心
Selfcondemned she muttered with great regret if only I had been more careful she made her resolution not to be careless any more
10 收拾完花瓶喝瓷杯里茶吃精致盘子里蛋糕Rachel没碎东西
After they cleared up the vase they drank tea from china cups and ate cakes off delicate plates and Rachel didn’t break another thing
It was Mrs Willow’s genuine patience and kindness that carved her mind and urged her to change better
11 Rachel 终舒口气原更加谨慎点避免麻烦发生没天生笨拙
Rachel felt at ease in the end Only if you are more cautious remind yourself constantly some trouble may be avoidedyou may not be a trouble maker Nobody was born clumsy
One possible version
Paragraph 1
There were beautiful things everywhere pretty china figures and delicate vases All the treasures seemed to boast a long history and thus priceless Wow it’s really a land of wonder Rachel couldn’t help admiring the elegance of the china figures and vases Mom’s words echoing in her mind curiosity still got the upper hand She reached for one of them but unfortunately the vase slipped off her hand and lay in pieces on the floor Her heart missing a beat she stood there still
Paragraph 2
With a smile Mrs Willow comforted her saying it had been broken before Seeing Mrs Willow’s eyes filled with warmth and affection Rachel felt extremely regretful for her clumsy behavior If I had been more careful the disaster wouldn’t have happened Rachel knew what Mrs Willow said might be an excuse to relieve her uneasiness and embarrassment She made a decision that from the day on she would never be so careless and swore to be a kind and thoughtful person like Mrs Willow
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