作文句子进阶
写作文点：
1认真审题：确定作文格式题材点
2罗列点组词成句：
u 扩写句子
u 高级词汇
u 高级句型
切忌满篇华丽辞藻没深刻立意
3谋句成篇：
u 句句段段间畅衔接
u 添加必属连词列连词
第部分 句子扩写
简单句子冬天树干光秃秃写句子进行改造
1 中文说清楚
2 套句型：五基句型
3 添修饰
u 句子中添加修饰
基句型树树干分句树树枝修饰定语状语等颗树绿叶
需句子增加树枝绿叶
方法：抽象变具体
力选择表意明确单词适增添细节成分
例句1天学校I go to school every day
With the sun rising from the east I together with Tom and Jerry ride to school at 600 every morning laughing and talking
具体里：画面感：太阳谁什时候什状态
例句2车站买票I went to the station to buy the tickets
I took the subway line No2 to the Beijing railway station to buy the tickets to Beidaihe
具体里：里
例句3Smith先生老师 Mr Smith is a good teacher
Mr Smith is a kind patient and knowledgeable English teacher
具体里：什样什老师
方法：加叶
名词动词面加修饰成分名词增添定语位语等动词增添副词
(1)名词修饰手段：
l 名词面加位语：
形式：AB
中ABA名词代词B名词句
音乐剧音乐声中歌词例：
Doe a deer a female deer
Ray a drop of falling sun
Me a name I call myself
常位语技巧：代词具体化
①We______________
We high school students 高中生
We Chinese 中国
We teenagers 青少年
We Chinese young generation 中国年轻代
②us__________
us customers
us Chinese people
[例句]
1 青少年应该掌握英语门世界广泛外语
We teenagers are supposed to master English the most widely used foreign language in the world
2 外国中国评价高(speak highly of)
They foreigners speak highly of us Chinese people
3家店客户提供优秀服务
The shop provides excellent services to us customers
4姚明位出色篮球运动员2011年NBA退役
Yao Ming an excellent basketball player retired from NBA in 2002
l 名词前面加形容词
[¶]You should understand your mother
[¶¶]You should understand your kind dear and hardworking mom
l 名词面添加定语句
[¶]You should understand your mother
[¶¶¶]You should understand your mom who loves you most in the world
l 名词前面面加非谓语动词作定语
[¶¶¶]The flying kite belongs to that boy who is running happily in the park
[¶¶¶]The broken cup is my father’s favourite cup bought in Jiangxi
[¶¶]I still have a lot of homework to do
（2）动词修饰手段
l 适位置加副词(状语)
句中位置通常包括：语前宾语状语位置（谓状语位置指助系情实义动词前）
语前：Every morning I read English
宾语：I read English every morning
状语位置：
1 You should deeply understand your mom
2 I can definitely do it
3 I don＇t really know him
常副词：
always never even ever sometimes usually often seldom hardly luckily unluckily surely certainly extremely surprisingly(令惊讶) amazingly(令惊讶) badly unexpectedly(出意料) unfortunately fortunately
l 意思接动词列
[¶]You should understand your mom
[¶¶]You should understand love and appreciate your mom
[¶¶¶]You should understand and love your mom as well as appreciate everything she has done for you
方法：添枝
句子前面面追加句句型复杂化效完善句意
«状语句状语
(1)表原
because
for
as
since
now that
in case(万)
as a result of
due to
thanks to
because of
considering that鉴考虑
seeing that然鉴
[例句]
1 It goes without saying that you should learn English well because it is still a must in the future society
[词句]
It goes without saying that毫疑问：
(2)表结果
so
so…that
such…that
otherwise or else否
as a result
therefore
consequently
accordingly
例句
1 You should learn English well consequently you can achieve great success in the future
2 I have lived in England for one and a half years accordingly I do well in English communication
3You are shy>You are so shy that you seldom chat with others
4 Tom runs fast > Tom runs so fast that none of us could catch up with him
5 The flower is beautiful >The flower is so beautiful that we all like it
6 Tom is a humorous teacher>Tom is so humorous a teacher that we often laugh in his class
(3)表目
so that+句子
in order that+句子（放句首）
to + 动词原形
in order to +动词原形（放句首）
so as to +动词原形
例句
1 You should wear your mask in order that you won＇t be affected
2 You should wear your mask in order not to be affected
3 You should wear your mask so as not to be affected
3 If I were you I would wear my mask so that I wouldn＇t be affected
第二部分 避免写作中语法结构重复？
方法：物做语（物称语）
语：句子角句子描述象
谓语：描述语行特征
常IYouWe等称代词做语会文章显单调妨试试换物做语句式更加灵活变
常见方法三种：
（）宾语做语（常动语态）
注意：动词物做语动词行
例句
1 I like English
改：English is my favourite subject
My favourite subject is English
English attracts me
English interests me
English appeals to me
2 I have been using the cell phone for a year
改：The cell phone has been used for a year
This cell phone has kept me company for a year
This cell phone has been serving me for a year
（二）谓语动词变成动名词作语
例句
Firstly you＇d better chat more with your classmates
改：Chatting more with your classmates is beneficial for you
Chatting more with your classmates will help you know others well
Chatting more with your classmates will help you make yourself known to all
（三）引入名词
例句
You should improve your communicating ability
改：Firstly a computer could be used to communicate with others in order to improve your communicating ability
方法：陈述变倒装
需强调句子中某成分时谓语谓语部分（助系情）提语前倒装
倒装属英语中特殊句式包括完全倒装完全倒装两种情况
（）完全倒装
表示点方位状语开头时句子变完全倒装：
公交车Here comes the bus
课铃响There goes the bell
注意：中名词代词代时谓倒装
Here it comes
There it goes
（二）部分倒装
[1] 强调句子中否定词：
第步：否定词置句首
第二步：助系情提语前
[常见否定词]
hardly at no time by no means little few never
例句
1 I have never seen him before
改：Never have I seen him before
2 I know few teachers in the school
改：Few teachers do I know in the school
[2] only+状语置句首
般四种句式：
1 Only in this way can we do sth
2 Only then shall we do sth
3 Only when(陈述句) can we do sth
4 Only if can we do sth
拓展If only 果（虚拟语气表示强烈愿）
eg If only we could spend more time together
If only we could meet each other earlier
If only we could enjoy ourselves in Beijing before long
If only we could spend the Spring holiday together in Jinan
If only you would adapt to the new environment before long
万结尾句
Only in this way can our societyfamilylife be filled with harmony and happiness
Only then shall we have the chance of achieving our dreams
更例句
1 You should understand your mom
改：Only when you understand your mom can you really grow up
2 You should come to our school
改：Only when you come to our school will you realize how enjoyable your school life could be
3 You should recite as many as 30 articles
改：Only when you have recited as many as 30 articles can you master English
[3]想强调句子中形容词副词时倒装：
句型：so+adjadv+倒装+that
例句
Tom runs fast
改结果状语句：Tom runs so fast that none of us could catch up with him
第步：adj前面加so
第二步：adj面加that
第三步：that面句子写adj程度
改倒装句：So fast does Tom run that none of us could catch up with him
so adj adv提前助动词提语前
例句
1 You are shy
改：You are so shy that you seldom talk with others
改：So shy are you that you seldom talk with others
2 Yao is tall
改：Yao is so tall that he can touch the ceiling
改：So tall is Yao that he can touch the ceiling
3 It is cold outside
改：It is so cold outside that we have to put on our coat
改：So cold is it outside that we have to put on our coat
方法：普通变强调
（）强调谓语动词
强调谓语动词方法：助动词谓语动词中提出
确爱I do love you
确爱I did love you
（二）强调成分
强调句中成分般套样句式：
It iswas + 强调部分 + thatwho +句子剩余部分
进行句式变换需进行两遍复制+粘贴
例句
1 天早户外声朗读英语
I read English loudly in the open air every morning
句子中成分进行强调呢？
方法：重复省略
（）列句中省略：
I go to school and (I) study English
but ＼ or＼ as well as 等列连词具性质
（二）状语句中省略：
状语句语句语致句中be动词时时省略句语be动词
When (I was) sleeping I drew a map of China
When (I was) sleeping I visited the Great wall
When (I was) in Beijing I tasted Beijing roast duck
When (I was) young I listened to the radio
常见状语句省略
1时间状语句省略
whenwhileuntilafterbeforesince等引导：
Fear is something innate that we actually rely on to keep us safe when(we are)faced with danger
When(the brain is)multitasking the brain is concentrating on one task and then switching to the otherin sequence
2条件状语句省略
ifunlessonce引导：
If(these projects are)successfulthese projects have amazingly positive potential
Once openedthe museum will be very popular with the citizens
3步状语句省略
althoughthougheven ifeven thoughwhereverwheneverhowever等引导：
Although(he was)the youngest in the groupTom won all the prize
This viewpoint however understandable(it is) is not practical
4方式状语句
asas ifas though引导：
He did it as required
The girl looked as if afraid of nothing
5较状语句
较状语句中常asthan引导分句中省略某句相成分时甚省略整asthan引导句：
He can play basketball as well as I
解析：as引导较状语句省略do
You finished the work three weeks earlier than(you were)expected
6形式
（1）状语句中句语句语致时候句谓语没系动词省略：
When comparing different cultureswe often pay attention only to the difference without noticing many similarities
解析：里when comparing different cultureswhen we compare different cultures
（2）if引导惯法常：if notif possibleif necessary等：
Correct the mistake in your composition if any
解析：里if any相if there is any
方法：it
it三句型
（）客观评价句型：专门件事行做评价
It is+ adjn+for sb+to do sth 评价件事行
It is+ adj+of sb+to do sth 评价
例句
It is beneficial for you to be more outgoing
It is wise of you to turn to the policeman for help
It is a wise choice for you to be more outgoing
It is a requirement for us teenagers to respect our parents
（二）观评价句型：样专门件事行做评价
Sb thinkfindregardbelieve it + adjn +for sb +to do sth
例句
I make you happy
谓 宾 补
宾语补足语：补充说明宾语性质
I think (it is harmful for you to be so shy)
I think it harmful for you to be so shy
I think it vitalsignificant for us to master English
I think it stupid of you to go out in such a cold day
I think it stupid of you to say so
I think it a beneficial habit for you to read regularly
（三）句型：碰字般句型：
sth make it +adjn + for sb+to do 变成
例句
1良学环境更容易集中注意力学
A quiet clean and comfortable environment makes it easier for us to concentrate on our study
2骄傲落
Pride makes it hard for one to grow
第三部分 繁琐复杂句化繁简？
方法：非谓语动词
非谓语动词种特殊演员谓语角色什角色
什时候想非谓语动词？
句子中动词时句谓语动词外没句列句情况动词非谓语动词
例句
见骑行车I saw a man (riding a bike)
中riding a bike现分词做置定语表动
关非谓语动词三技巧
1 动ing动ed做做to do
2 做两件事分词短语 两分做两件事独立格结构(非谓语动词做状语)
3 汉语中动词+修饰名词时英语中定语句非谓语动词（非谓语动词做定语）
（）非谓语动词做状语独立格
Daniel笑着走进 Smiling Daniel walked in
Daniel哭着走进 Crying Daniel walked in
（两句子做两件事）
LaurenceDaniel哭 Laurence beaten Daniel cried
Laurence笑Daniel笑 Laurence smiling Daniel smiled
（两句子两做两件事）
练
1 LaurenceDaniel哭
Beaten badly by Laurence Daniel cried
2见妈妈走出Lisa哭
Seeing her mother walking out Lisa cried
3太阳空花笑背书包学校
The sun shining in the sky the flowers smiling to me I carrying my bag went to school
4掌握方法够容易造句子
Having mastered this method we can easily make a sentence
This method mastered we can easily make a sentence
（二）非谓语动词做定语
书男孩MichealThe boy (reading a book) is Micheal
Laurence男孩DanielThe boy (beaten by Laurence) is Daniel
桌子开书DanielThere is an unfolded book on the desk which is from Daniel
动词+ 修饰名词时非谓语动词作定语时需考虑动时态般放面果非谓语动词没成分放前面
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写作文点：
1认真审题：确定作文格式题材点
2罗列点组词成句：
u 扩写句子
u 高级词汇
u 高级句型
切忌满篇华丽辞藻没深刻立意
3谋句成篇：
u 句句段段间畅衔接
u 添加必属连词列连词
第部分 句子扩写
简单句子冬天树干光秃秃写句子进行改造
1 中文说清楚
2 套句型：五基句型
3 添修饰
u 句子中添加修饰
基句型树树干分句树树枝修饰定语状语等颗树绿叶
需句子增加树枝绿叶
方法：抽象变具体
力选择表意明确单词适增添细节成分
例句1天学校I go to school every day
With the sun rising from the east I together with Tom and Jerry ride to school at 600 every morning laughing and talking
具体里：画面感：太阳谁什时候什状态
例句2车站买票I went to the station to buy the tickets
I took the subway line No2 to the Beijing railway station to buy the tickets to Beidaihe
具体里：里
例句3Smith先生老师 Mr Smith is a good teacher
Mr Smith is a kind patient and knowledgeable English teacher
具体里：什样什老师
方法：加叶
名词动词面加修饰成分名词增添定语位语等动词增添副词
(1)名词修饰手段：
l 名词面加位语：
形式：AB
中ABA名词代词B名词句
音乐剧音乐声中歌词例：
Doe a deer a female deer
Ray a drop of falling sun
Me a name I call myself
常位语技巧：代词具体化
①We______________
We high school students 高中生
We Chinese 中国
We teenagers 青少年
We Chinese young generation 中国年轻代
②us__________
us customers
us Chinese people
[例句]
1 青少年应该掌握英语门世界广泛外语
We teenagers are supposed to master English the most widely used foreign language in the world
2 外国中国评价高(speak highly of)
They foreigners speak highly of us Chinese people
3家店客户提供优秀服务
The shop provides excellent services to us customers
4姚明位出色篮球运动员2011年NBA退役
Yao Ming an excellent basketball player retired from NBA in 2002
l 名词前面加形容词
[¶]You should understand your mother
[¶¶]You should understand your kind dear and hardworking mom
l 名词面添加定语句
[¶]You should understand your mother
[¶¶¶]You should understand your mom who loves you most in the world
l 名词前面面加非谓语动词作定语
[¶¶¶]The flying kite belongs to that boy who is running happily in the park
[¶¶¶]The broken cup is my father’s favourite cup bought in Jiangxi
[¶¶]I still have a lot of homework to do
（2）动词修饰手段
l 适位置加副词(状语)
句中位置通常包括：语前宾语状语位置（谓状语位置指助系情实义动词前）
语前：Every morning I read English
宾语：I read English every morning
状语位置：
1 You should deeply understand your mom
2 I can definitely do it
3 I don＇t really know him
常副词：
always never even ever sometimes usually often seldom hardly luckily unluckily surely certainly extremely surprisingly(令惊讶) amazingly(令惊讶) badly unexpectedly(出意料) unfortunately fortunately
l 意思接动词列
[¶]You should understand your mom
[¶¶]You should understand love and appreciate your mom
[¶¶¶]You should understand and love your mom as well as appreciate everything she has done for you
方法：添枝
句子前面面追加句句型复杂化效完善句意
«状语句状语
(1)表原
because
for
as
since
now that
in case(万)
as a result of
due to
thanks to
because of
considering that鉴考虑
seeing that然鉴
[例句]
1 It goes without saying that you should learn English well because it is still a must in the future society
[词句]
It goes without saying that毫疑问：
(2)表结果
so
so…that
such…that
otherwise or else否
as a result
therefore
consequently
accordingly
例句
1 You should learn English well consequently you can achieve great success in the future
2 I have lived in England for one and a half years accordingly I do well in English communication
3You are shy>You are so shy that you seldom chat with others
4 Tom runs fast > Tom runs so fast that none of us could catch up with him
5 The flower is beautiful >The flower is so beautiful that we all like it
6 Tom is a humorous teacher>Tom is so humorous a teacher that we often laugh in his class
(3)表目
so that+句子
in order that+句子（放句首）
to + 动词原形
in order to +动词原形（放句首）
so as to +动词原形
例句
1 You should wear your mask in order that you won＇t be affected
2 You should wear your mask in order not to be affected
3 You should wear your mask so as not to be affected
3 If I were you I would wear my mask so that I wouldn＇t be affected
第二部分 避免写作中语法结构重复？
方法：物做语（物称语）
语：句子角句子描述象
谓语：描述语行特征
常IYouWe等称代词做语会文章显单调妨试试换物做语句式更加灵活变
常见方法三种：
（）宾语做语（常动语态）
注意：动词物做语动词行
例句
1 I like English
改：English is my favourite subject
My favourite subject is English
English attracts me
English interests me
English appeals to me
2 I have been using the cell phone for a year
改：The cell phone has been used for a year
This cell phone has kept me company for a year
This cell phone has been serving me for a year
（二）谓语动词变成动名词作语
例句
Firstly you＇d better chat more with your classmates
改：Chatting more with your classmates is beneficial for you
Chatting more with your classmates will help you know others well
Chatting more with your classmates will help you make yourself known to all
（三）引入名词
例句
You should improve your communicating ability
改：Firstly a computer could be used to communicate with others in order to improve your communicating ability
方法：陈述变倒装
需强调句子中某成分时谓语谓语部分（助系情）提语前倒装
倒装属英语中特殊句式包括完全倒装完全倒装两种情况
（）完全倒装
表示点方位状语开头时句子变完全倒装：
公交车Here comes the bus
课铃响There goes the bell
注意：中名词代词代时谓倒装
Here it comes
There it goes
（二）部分倒装
[1] 强调句子中否定词：
第步：否定词置句首
第二步：助系情提语前
[常见否定词]
hardly at no time by no means little few never
例句
1 I have never seen him before
改：Never have I seen him before
2 I know few teachers in the school
改：Few teachers do I know in the school
[2] only+状语置句首
般四种句式：
1 Only in this way can we do sth
2 Only then shall we do sth
3 Only when(陈述句) can we do sth
4 Only if can we do sth
拓展If only 果（虚拟语气表示强烈愿）
eg If only we could spend more time together
If only we could meet each other earlier
If only we could enjoy ourselves in Beijing before long
If only we could spend the Spring holiday together in Jinan
If only you would adapt to the new environment before long
万结尾句
Only in this way can our societyfamilylife be filled with harmony and happiness
Only then shall we have the chance of achieving our dreams
更例句
1 You should understand your mom
改：Only when you understand your mom can you really grow up
2 You should come to our school
改：Only when you come to our school will you realize how enjoyable your school life could be
3 You should recite as many as 30 articles
改：Only when you have recited as many as 30 articles can you master English
[3]想强调句子中形容词副词时倒装：
句型：so+adjadv+倒装+that
例句
Tom runs fast
改结果状语句：Tom runs so fast that none of us could catch up with him
第步：adj前面加so
第二步：adj面加that
第三步：that面句子写adj程度
改倒装句：So fast does Tom run that none of us could catch up with him
so adj adv提前助动词提语前
例句
1 You are shy
改：You are so shy that you seldom talk with others
改：So shy are you that you seldom talk with others
2 Yao is tall
改：Yao is so tall that he can touch the ceiling
改：So tall is Yao that he can touch the ceiling
3 It is cold outside
改：It is so cold outside that we have to put on our coat
改：So cold is it outside that we have to put on our coat
方法：普通变强调
（）强调谓语动词
强调谓语动词方法：助动词谓语动词中提出
确爱I do love you
确爱I did love you
（二）强调成分
强调句中成分般套样句式：
It iswas + 强调部分 + thatwho +句子剩余部分
进行句式变换需进行两遍复制+粘贴
例句
1 天早户外声朗读英语
I read English loudly in the open air every morning
句子中成分进行强调呢？
方法：重复省略
（）列句中省略：
I go to school and (I) study English
but ＼ or＼ as well as 等列连词具性质
（二）状语句中省略：
状语句语句语致句中be动词时时省略句语be动词
When (I was) sleeping I drew a map of China
When (I was) sleeping I visited the Great wall
When (I was) in Beijing I tasted Beijing roast duck
When (I was) young I listened to the radio
常见状语句省略
1时间状语句省略
whenwhileuntilafterbeforesince等引导：
Fear is something innate that we actually rely on to keep us safe when(we are)faced with danger
When(the brain is)multitasking the brain is concentrating on one task and then switching to the otherin sequence
2条件状语句省略
ifunlessonce引导：
If(these projects are)successfulthese projects have amazingly positive potential
Once openedthe museum will be very popular with the citizens
3步状语句省略
althoughthougheven ifeven thoughwhereverwheneverhowever等引导：
Although(he was)the youngest in the groupTom won all the prize
This viewpoint however understandable(it is) is not practical
4方式状语句
asas ifas though引导：
He did it as required
The girl looked as if afraid of nothing
5较状语句
较状语句中常asthan引导分句中省略某句相成分时甚省略整asthan引导句：
He can play basketball as well as I
解析：as引导较状语句省略do
You finished the work three weeks earlier than(you were)expected
6形式
（1）状语句中句语句语致时候句谓语没系动词省略：
When comparing different cultureswe often pay attention only to the difference without noticing many similarities
解析：里when comparing different cultureswhen we compare different cultures
（2）if引导惯法常：if notif possibleif necessary等：
Correct the mistake in your composition if any
解析：里if any相if there is any
方法：it
it三句型
（）客观评价句型：专门件事行做评价
It is+ adjn+for sb+to do sth 评价件事行
It is+ adj+of sb+to do sth 评价
例句
It is beneficial for you to be more outgoing
It is wise of you to turn to the policeman for help
It is a wise choice for you to be more outgoing
It is a requirement for us teenagers to respect our parents
（二）观评价句型：样专门件事行做评价
Sb thinkfindregardbelieve it + adjn +for sb +to do sth
例句
I make you happy
谓 宾 补
宾语补足语：补充说明宾语性质
I think (it is harmful for you to be so shy)
I think it harmful for you to be so shy
I think it vitalsignificant for us to master English
I think it stupid of you to go out in such a cold day
I think it stupid of you to say so
I think it a beneficial habit for you to read regularly
（三）句型：碰字般句型：
sth make it +adjn + for sb+to do 变成
例句
1良学环境更容易集中注意力学
A quiet clean and comfortable environment makes it easier for us to concentrate on our study
2骄傲落
Pride makes it hard for one to grow
第三部分 繁琐复杂句化繁简？
方法：非谓语动词
非谓语动词种特殊演员谓语角色什角色
什时候想非谓语动词？
句子中动词时句谓语动词外没句列句情况动词非谓语动词
例句
见骑行车I saw a man (riding a bike)
中riding a bike现分词做置定语表动
关非谓语动词三技巧
1 动ing动ed做做to do
2 做两件事分词短语 两分做两件事独立格结构(非谓语动词做状语)
3 汉语中动词+修饰名词时英语中定语句非谓语动词（非谓语动词做定语）
（）非谓语动词做状语独立格
Daniel笑着走进 Smiling Daniel walked in
Daniel哭着走进 Crying Daniel walked in
（两句子做两件事）
LaurenceDaniel哭 Laurence beaten Daniel cried
Laurence笑Daniel笑 Laurence smiling Daniel smiled
（两句子两做两件事）
练
1 LaurenceDaniel哭
Beaten badly by Laurence Daniel cried
2见妈妈走出Lisa哭
Seeing her mother walking out Lisa cried
3太阳空花笑背书包学校
The sun shining in the sky the flowers smiling to me I carrying my bag went to school
4掌握方法够容易造句子
Having mastered this method we can easily make a sentence
This method mastered we can easily make a sentence
（二）非谓语动词做定语
书男孩MichealThe boy (reading a book) is Micheal
Laurence男孩DanielThe boy (beaten by Laurence) is Daniel
桌子开书DanielThere is an unfolded book on the desk which is from Daniel
动词+ 修饰名词时非谓语动词作定语时需考虑动时态般放面果非谓语动词没成分放前面
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