2022届高考英语二轮复：应文&读续写题集锦（二）解析版
海门中学姜堰中学淮阴中学2022届高三年级11月份阶段测试
高三英语试题
第节 应文写作
假定李华英国某国际中学交换生算学校成立中国画社团请学校负责Davis先生写封邮件容包括：
1提出申请：
2陈述理（少2点)
3希获准
注意：1词数应80左右：2适增加细节行文连贯
Dear MrDavis
Yours sincerely
Li Hua
镇江市2021 ~2022学年度第学期高三期中英语试卷
第二节
阅读面材料根容段落开头语续写两段构成篇完整短文
This happened with me once while coming back from office late at night The time was around 1130 pm and most of the public transport had stopped
It had been a long busy day I was annoyed and too eager to reach home and rest I was on my bike The traffic signal just before my house turned red and my anger rose
Then suddenly someone came up from behind me and tried to hand me a piece of paper I thought it was another one of those people who hand you pages of some sad story and ask you for money I could feel anger boiling up inside me I shirked (避开) the person away with the motion of my hand without even looking at him
This guy moved over to the next person in traffic and did a similar thing of showing him the paper The other guy who was not in as bad mood as mine looked at the paper and started giving directions It was at this moment I realized that the person who came to me was asking for directions He couldn＇t speak so he had written it down on a piece of paper He was not some beggar asking for money and he was dressed as a salesman carrying one of those bulky encyclopedias (百科全书) After getting the directions he smiled at the person bowed his head showing his appreciation and jogged away to the other end of the road
I felt a sudden tender pity for him By the time the signal turned green this salesman was standing at the other end of the road sigalling people for a lift I decided to help him out but my house was on a different route than where he was asking for a lift I moved on but I was still felling bad for treating a hard working person that way
注意
1续写词数应150词左右
2请格式答题卡相应位置作答
After going about 100 meters I decided to turn back to offer him a helping hand
When another bike stopped and he sat on the bike he noticed me in the distance
范文解题说明指导
第节 应文写作
Dear MrDavis
I am Li Hua an exchange student from China I’m writing to apply to you for an idea that we
should set up a Traditional Chinese Painting Club in our school
As far as I know many students in our school are very interested in traditional Chinese painting so it is a good idea to start one I also believe this club will offer an excellent opportunity for students to learn different cultures and make more friends
I’d appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration
Yours sincerely
Li Hua
写作评分说明
应文评分标准
1题总分15分5档次分
2评分时先根文章容语言初步确定属档次然该档次求衡量确定调整档次分
3词数少60总分中减2分
4评分时应注意容：容点应词汇语法结构丰富性准确性文连贯性：五点少总分中扣3分
① 介绍（关键词 exchange student)
② 提出申请（出现关键词apply)
③理1
④理2
⑤希获准
5拼写标点符号语言准确性方面评分时应视交际影响程度予考虑英美拼写词汇法均接受
6书写较差致影响交际分数降低档次
二 档次分范围求
档次
描述
第五档
(1315分)
完全完成试题规定务完全达预期写作目
1覆盖容点
2应较语法结构词汇
3语法结构词汇方面许错误力较复杂结构较高级
词汇致具备较强语言运力
4效语句间连接成分全文结构紧凑
第四档
(1012分)
完成试题规定务达预期写作目1漏掉二次重点覆盖容
2应语法结构词汇满足务求
3语法结构词汇方面应基准确许错误尝试较复杂语
法结构词汇致
4应简单语间连接成分全文结构紧凑
第三档
(79分)
基完成试题规定务整体言 基达预期写作目
1漏掉容覆盖容
2应语法结构词汇满足务求
3语法结构词汇方面错误影响理解
4应简单语间连接成分全文容连贯
第二档
(46分)
未恰完成试题规定务信息未清楚传达读者
1漏掉未描述清楚容写关容
2语法结构单调词汇项目限
3语法结构词汇方面错误影响写作容理解
4较少语句间连接成分容缺少连贯性
第档
(13分)
完成试题规定务信息未传达读者
1明显遗漏容写关容原未理解试题求
2语法结构单调词汇项目限
3较语法结构词汇方面错误影响写作容理解
4缺乏语句间连接成分容连贯
0分
未传达读者信息容太少法评判写容均求
容关写容法清
第二节 读续写
After going about 100 meters I decided to turn back to offer him a helping hand Nothing could set my mind at rest other than having a chance to make up for treating him that way Without hesitation I turned around and made my way to where we first met When I saw him the exhausted but patient salesman was still signalling at people for a lift and meanwhile showing them the piece of paper I pressed my feet down sharply on the pedals in a desperate attempt to offer my help as soon as possible
When another bike stopped and he sat on the bike he noticed me in the distance I thought he would probably pretend not to have seen me To my surprise he smiled and waved at me as he was swallowed up by the crowd I was almost rooted to the spot with regretful tears rolling down my cheeks Though this incident didn’t change my life I learned a precious lesson try to treat others with tolerance and kindness even though sometimes life throws you a curveball
读续写评分标准
（）评分原
1 题总分25分5档次分
2 评分时先根续写短文容语言初步确定属档次然该档次求衡量确定调整档次分
3 词数少130总分中减12分
4 评分时应容词汇语法结构篇章结构等方面考量具体：
（1）短文段落开头语衔接程度
（2）全文连贯性
（3）创造容质量续写完整性原文情境融洽度
（4）词汇语法结构准确性恰性样性
5 拼写标点符号语言准确性重方面评分时应视交际影响程度予考虑
6 书写较差致影响交际分数降低档次
（二）容提示注意事项：
1第段点：决定回时心情——释重负回路心情动作
2第二段点：反应搭车心情变化件事中感悟(段学生写车搭车表示感谢心情变逻辑通道理）
容作强制求情节流畅然圆说行死扣范文
（三）档次分范围求
第五档（21—25）
1短文融洽度高提供段落开头语衔接合理
2容丰富语法结构词汇丰富准确许错误完全影响意义表达
3效语句间连接成分续写短文结构紧凑
第四档（16—20）
1短文融洽度较高提供段落开头语衔接较合理
2容较丰富语法结构词汇较丰富准确许错误影响意义表达
3较效语句间连接成分续写短文结构紧凑
第三档（11—15）
1短文关系较密切提供段落开头语定程度衔接
2写出干关容应语法结构词汇满足务求错误影响意义表达
3应简单语句间连接成分全文容连贯
第二档（6—10）
1短文定关系提供段落开头语定程度衔接
2写出关容语法结构单调词汇项目限语法结构词汇方面错误影响意义表达
3较少语句间连接成分全文容缺少连贯性
第档（1—5）
1提供短文开头语衔接较差
2产出容较少语法结构单调词汇项目限较语法结构词汇方面错误严重影响意义表达
3缺乏语句间连接成分全文容连贯
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海门中学姜堰中学淮阴中学2022届高三年级11月份阶段测试
高三英语试题
第节 应文写作
假定李华英国某国际中学交换生算学校成立中国画社团请学校负责Davis先生写封邮件容包括：
1提出申请：
2陈述理（少2点)
3希获准
注意：1词数应80左右：2适增加细节行文连贯
Dear MrDavis
Yours sincerely
Li Hua
镇江市2021 ~2022学年度第学期高三期中英语试卷
第二节
阅读面材料根容段落开头语续写两段构成篇完整短文
This happened with me once while coming back from office late at night The time was around 1130 pm and most of the public transport had stopped
It had been a long busy day I was annoyed and too eager to reach home and rest I was on my bike The traffic signal just before my house turned red and my anger rose
Then suddenly someone came up from behind me and tried to hand me a piece of paper I thought it was another one of those people who hand you pages of some sad story and ask you for money I could feel anger boiling up inside me I shirked (避开) the person away with the motion of my hand without even looking at him
This guy moved over to the next person in traffic and did a similar thing of showing him the paper The other guy who was not in as bad mood as mine looked at the paper and started giving directions It was at this moment I realized that the person who came to me was asking for directions He couldn＇t speak so he had written it down on a piece of paper He was not some beggar asking for money and he was dressed as a salesman carrying one of those bulky encyclopedias (百科全书) After getting the directions he smiled at the person bowed his head showing his appreciation and jogged away to the other end of the road
I felt a sudden tender pity for him By the time the signal turned green this salesman was standing at the other end of the road sigalling people for a lift I decided to help him out but my house was on a different route than where he was asking for a lift I moved on but I was still felling bad for treating a hard working person that way
注意
1续写词数应150词左右
2请格式答题卡相应位置作答
After going about 100 meters I decided to turn back to offer him a helping hand
When another bike stopped and he sat on the bike he noticed me in the distance
范文解题说明指导
第节 应文写作
Dear MrDavis
I am Li Hua an exchange student from China I’m writing to apply to you for an idea that we
should set up a Traditional Chinese Painting Club in our school
As far as I know many students in our school are very interested in traditional Chinese painting so it is a good idea to start one I also believe this club will offer an excellent opportunity for students to learn different cultures and make more friends
I’d appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration
Yours sincerely
Li Hua
写作评分说明
应文评分标准
1题总分15分5档次分
2评分时先根文章容语言初步确定属档次然该档次求衡量确定调整档次分
3词数少60总分中减2分
4评分时应注意容：容点应词汇语法结构丰富性准确性文连贯性：五点少总分中扣3分
① 介绍（关键词 exchange student)
② 提出申请（出现关键词apply)
③理1
④理2
⑤希获准
5拼写标点符号语言准确性方面评分时应视交际影响程度予考虑英美拼写词汇法均接受
6书写较差致影响交际分数降低档次
二 档次分范围求
档次
描述
第五档
(1315分)
完全完成试题规定务完全达预期写作目
1覆盖容点
2应较语法结构词汇
3语法结构词汇方面许错误力较复杂结构较高级
词汇致具备较强语言运力
4效语句间连接成分全文结构紧凑
第四档
(1012分)
完成试题规定务达预期写作目1漏掉二次重点覆盖容
2应语法结构词汇满足务求
3语法结构词汇方面应基准确许错误尝试较复杂语
法结构词汇致
4应简单语间连接成分全文结构紧凑
第三档
(79分)
基完成试题规定务整体言 基达预期写作目
1漏掉容覆盖容
2应语法结构词汇满足务求
3语法结构词汇方面错误影响理解
4应简单语间连接成分全文容连贯
第二档
(46分)
未恰完成试题规定务信息未清楚传达读者
1漏掉未描述清楚容写关容
2语法结构单调词汇项目限
3语法结构词汇方面错误影响写作容理解
4较少语句间连接成分容缺少连贯性
第档
(13分)
完成试题规定务信息未传达读者
1明显遗漏容写关容原未理解试题求
2语法结构单调词汇项目限
3较语法结构词汇方面错误影响写作容理解
4缺乏语句间连接成分容连贯
0分
未传达读者信息容太少法评判写容均求
容关写容法清
第二节 读续写
After going about 100 meters I decided to turn back to offer him a helping hand Nothing could set my mind at rest other than having a chance to make up for treating him that way Without hesitation I turned around and made my way to where we first met When I saw him the exhausted but patient salesman was still signalling at people for a lift and meanwhile showing them the piece of paper I pressed my feet down sharply on the pedals in a desperate attempt to offer my help as soon as possible
When another bike stopped and he sat on the bike he noticed me in the distance I thought he would probably pretend not to have seen me To my surprise he smiled and waved at me as he was swallowed up by the crowd I was almost rooted to the spot with regretful tears rolling down my cheeks Though this incident didn’t change my life I learned a precious lesson try to treat others with tolerance and kindness even though sometimes life throws you a curveball
读续写评分标准
（）评分原
1 题总分25分5档次分
2 评分时先根续写短文容语言初步确定属档次然该档次求衡量确定调整档次分
3 词数少130总分中减12分
4 评分时应容词汇语法结构篇章结构等方面考量具体：
（1）短文段落开头语衔接程度
（2）全文连贯性
（3）创造容质量续写完整性原文情境融洽度
（4）词汇语法结构准确性恰性样性
5 拼写标点符号语言准确性重方面评分时应视交际影响程度予考虑
6 书写较差致影响交际分数降低档次
（二）容提示注意事项：
1第段点：决定回时心情——释重负回路心情动作
2第二段点：反应搭车心情变化件事中感悟(段学生写车搭车表示感谢心情变逻辑通道理）
容作强制求情节流畅然圆说行死扣范文
（三）档次分范围求
第五档（21—25）
1短文融洽度高提供段落开头语衔接合理
2容丰富语法结构词汇丰富准确许错误完全影响意义表达
3效语句间连接成分续写短文结构紧凑
第四档（16—20）
1短文融洽度较高提供段落开头语衔接较合理
2容较丰富语法结构词汇较丰富准确许错误影响意义表达
3较效语句间连接成分续写短文结构紧凑
第三档（11—15）
1短文关系较密切提供段落开头语定程度衔接
2写出干关容应语法结构词汇满足务求错误影响意义表达
3应简单语句间连接成分全文容连贯
第二档（6—10）
1短文定关系提供段落开头语定程度衔接
2写出关容语法结构单调词汇项目限语法结构词汇方面错误影响意义表达
3较少语句间连接成分全文容缺少连贯性
第档（1—5）
1提供短文开头语衔接较差
2产出容较少语法结构单调词汇项目限较语法结构词汇方面错误严重影响意义表达
3缺乏语句间连接成分全文容连贯
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